Your Songs/Lyrics
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Mr.Armstrong Awake and Unafraid Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 12135 | you can ask for comments, you can ask for help in improving them aswell, you can also post videos/audio clips of your self singing/playing (your instrument) Be Advised: Incase of anything you should keep an extra copy of you lyrics in your own reach, just incase of anything. |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Well, I'm pretty crappy at lyric writing, but anyway, all the songs I have are on my band myspace. Here are the lyrics to some of my band's songs: 11 Minutes To Midnight Part One. There's no room for mistakes or fighting for, What you believe in, not anymore. Selling your lies, breeding our fear, Taking this bull shit year after year. Oppresion and sorrow is weighing us down, Lying, denying, until we all drown. This warfare and bloodshed no one can see, Please end this chaos, we're falling apart! Even in the darkest night, There's hope, the faintest bit of light, But how long? But how long will it hold? Cast into a conforming mould, Faking my place in the rest of the world, Taking my time till it all ticks away, My righteous self-conscience jumbled up in a haze. These savages won't stop till we're all dead, Carnage and blood thirst burned into our heads, If a question arises, if doubt enters mind, They'll crush it, they'll crush it, they'll burn it I say! Even in the darkest night, There's hope, the faintest bit of light, But how long? But how long will it hold? We're spiraling downwards; catastrophe Faster and faster, into this nightmare, But how long? But how long will this hold? Your apathy, it sickens me, All of this anguish we can't even see. Your apathy, it sickens me, All this fatality, we can't ever see. Even in the darkest night, There's hope, the faintest bit of light, But how long? But how long will it hold? We're spiraling downwards; catastrophe Faster and faster, into this nightmare, But how long? But how long will this hold? Zodiac I saw you walking home last night alone. Did you need some company? Your head reached the floor, Before you could speak a word. You screamed, but no one heard you. There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it, I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare. I may be fucking crazy, But what they don't know cant hurt them. This subtle blade; it cuts too deep to carry on. Don't run, don't run away. (Run faster) Don't mind the pain, It'll be done before you felt it. Don't cry, the sorrow's over. There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it, I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare. I may be fucking crazy, But what they don't know cant hurt them. There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it, I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare. I'm really fucking crazy, But what they don't know cant hurt them! Make note, I wrote Zodiac in 7th grade, so please keep that at heart. I really want some criticism, to see how I can better myself at lyric writing. Everybody says, 'Oh just listen to your heart!', but it's not really saying anything. I have about six lines written for one of my other songs, "Static Expositions", so yeah, some help please? =] |
Mr.Armstrong Awake and Unafraid Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 12135 | are you serious??? you write amazing! its really really good |
mer von d Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 582 | wow they're fricking awesome well i'm a pretty average writer i guess, this is a song my friend shamp and i wrote for our band, criticize all you like! "jumping castle" i'm screaming just to block you out coz i don't wanna hear you rant and shout your words bring tears to my eyes coz i don't wanna live a lie what did i do to deserve this do you still remember our first kiss think back to how you made me feel i still wanna feel like that *chorus* i wanna go back to how you made me feel you made me feel like a small jumping castle on the inside it's fun but where i am it's not coz i'm in this other dimension and you're not here with me woah oh oh so i tell you to leave me alone and i sit here on my own try to go back to my happy place i just wanna close my eyes chorus instrumentally bit then chorus X 2 oh and this is a song i wrote by myself. i really need some help improving it but so any suggestions are welcomed with open arms well she was just a little girl she met him in the playground at school by the slippery slide it was love at first sight he had everybody fooled she thought he was prince charming with her heart he did toy he used her like his little bitch as part of his sick ploy *chorus* well she screamed as he lied about all the shit that he couldn't hide and he laughed as she cried and died a little bit inside well he caused fights with daddy daddy didn't want him near his girl he could see him messing with her mind and sucking her into his world she said daddy if you don't let me see him i'm gonna have to run away coz when i grow up i'm gonna marry him and have his baby one day chorus again then i dunno????????? |
Mr.Armstrong Awake and Unafraid Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 12135 | nice, you guys are really good lyricists (songwriters) |
Black Presicion Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | I write lyrics all the time! Usually at night, cuz that's when I think best and write best so...here's one of my best: Verse: I'm lying here in the dark of this tomb Though I'm not near I hear the cries of the room People lying, people crying, wiping tears that they've got Drops of blood stained in the mud as they pass the parking lot Oh don't worry, don't be sorry, you got what everyone gets One hundred percent life and zero percent death But if you waste it wisely, grip onto one percent breath At least you'll be here with me again Refrain: It was the look on your face It was the arms you embraced That made it so hard For us to fall apart Chorus: If it's better off that way Would you let me cry and say "Goodbye and Goodnight" "Goodbye and Goodnight" Verse 2: When she cries on your shoulder would you remember of me The one you always wanted; the one you failed to appease With every minute injection there's a story to be told Like the groom and his whore and every man that she sold But inside of every story, there's a chapter to read There's one who dies and one who cries just like you and me Refrain: It was the smile that I missed It was the crash of your kiss That made it death due part How come it feel apart Chorus: if it's better off that way Would you let me cry and stay Cuz It's too late to say goodbye But I want to say tonight "Goodbye and Goodnight" "Goodbye and Goodnight" Soft Bridge: Far from the blood Which fell from these slits Would you hold on wrap around my wrists Clean the stains and makeup off the bathroom floor Is it deep enough Without creating more Chorus: If it's better off that way Would you let me cry and say "Goodbye and Goodnight" "Goodbye and Goodnight" After all I've done today Is it enough to hear me say "Goodbye and Goodnight" "Goodbye and Goodnight" The chorus is pretty crappy. I'm never good at making up choruses so...hope you like it. |
warlock_101 Killjoy Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 3 | here are some lyrics to one of our more thrashy metal songs buried alive you feel helpless drowning on your own prespiration wishing you were out of this shithole you call a life all you want to do now is die crazed you start tearing at your own skin blood running rivers down your flesh all you are wanting to do is DIE DIE as you suffer you learn suddenly to hate before you know it you have escaped from the crypt that is all i can think of now what do y'all think |
Black Presicion Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | Nice! Love your lyrics!!! R U new to this website also? Cuz I am too. So...welcome! yeah... I also write lyrics too! Can u write choruses? Cuz I suck at them...You're really good at writing lyrics. Sorry I talk to much... |
Mr.Armstrong Awake and Unafraid Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 12135 | haha its alright,when you write a chorus you can sort of switch it up each verse. thats what i do...xD |
Suety Awake and Unafraid Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 14655 | The only thing I can play well is the piano..so..yea. |
Dana Way Banned Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 18432 | This is one of my most recent songs that I've written. Angel Wings Verse: Sitting on the edge of my bed holding your picture against my chest. I wish you were here next to me. Why did you have to leave me? My life is over now that you're gone forever. Chorus: Angel wings falling all around me like the rain that falls from a gray sky. I hear your voice but I can't see you. All I can see are your angel wings up in the gray sky. Verse: Laying on the couch covered with a blanket watching our home videos. I can still taste you on my lips. I smile when we kiss and you tell me you love me. i never thought you would leave me the way you did. Repeat Chorus. Bridge: Oh, oh, no, oh, oh, I love you. Verse: I lay awake in bed thinking of you. I wish you were here to comfort me so I can finally fall asleep tonight. I look at the picture of us on the nightstand. I smile and close my eyes. I am finally asleep. That's it. Hope you guys like it. |
ziggy stardust; Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2153 | Sleepless I'm sat here alone trying to clear my mind Getting rid of all the memories of you But why do I try when I know inside That I'll miss you in a day or two ? Cause I miss what we had; I wish it wasn't true But it is; and I do; and it hurts I want to forget so I can sleep for a few But I don't know how to do it; nothing works Try to occupy my thoughts in another place Trying to fill my time with this guitar Not letting myself even think of your face But I'm not getting very far... Cause I miss what we had; I wish it wasn't true But it is; and I do; and it hurts I want to forget so I can sleep for a few But I don't know how to do it; nothing works I guess I accept that I can't move on But I've said for so long I'm okay Any feelings you had; they must be long gone So I'll try to stay out of your way Cause I miss what we had; I wish it wasn't true But it is; and I do; and it hurts I want to forget so I can sleep for a few But I don't know how to do it; nothing works Cause I miss what we had; I wish it wasn't true But it is; and I do; and it hurts I want to forget so I can sleep for a few But I don't know how to do it; nothing works I wanna forget (forget) Let me forget (forget) I wanna forget... but nothing works... I wrote it the other day.. it's still pretty rough.. [I already posted it in the poetry forum so if you're thinking you've seen it before.. that's where ] |
thesharpestminds Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 59 | Dujo Dayyy: Very pretty piano. It makes the song sound haunting. Very nice |
Problematique Bleeding on the Floor Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 1500 | Sugar Cane, i love that : o |
Suety Awake and Unafraid Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 14655 | thesharpestminds:Thank you! Comments mean a lot to me. |
fancy pirouettes. Awake and Unafraid Age: 32 Gender: - Posts: 13762 | geebus Suety! That was really good. |
mer von d Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 582 | wow. i am totally impressed by the quality of the lyrics you guys write. fricking talented. very sweet |
Suety Awake and Unafraid Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 14655 | Andrew de Torres:ahhh thank you vivky |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Hmm, can someone help me think of ideas to finish this song? Chorus: The open wounds you brought Lie in the sorrow I once sought Wish away and can't we Hope to die, or should we? 2nd Verse: Can love betray me? Like a knife behind its back The untarnished words They never meant a thing I knew I should let my dark emotions consume, Let them bleed into me Could I breathe the world for what it really is? 2nd Chorus: These open wounds you brought Lie in the sorrow I once sought Wish away and can't we Hope to die, or should we? And these open wounds you brought Lie in the sorrow I once sought Wish away and can't we Hope to die, or should we? The empty silence in our hearts Somehow filled with rage It's about a breakup, if that helps. :/ |
anthony green. In The Murder Scene Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | Suffocated Lies (beware, it's long) I don't wanna be Here anymore Take me away Never bring me back. They're all around me But I don't see The fact that they Aren't like me I don't wanna be Here anymore Take me away From this ugly world I never want To turn around To come back here And hear you out I can't close my eyes Try to pretend That this is the place I want to end It's too late To turn back now I don't remember My way out It's like a nightmare You can't wake up It feels so real Because you're going corrupt They're all in false paradise While I'm stuck here dying And they're sick and tired Of all the lying I don't wanna be Here anymore Take me away From this ugly world I never want To turn around To come back here And hear you out Sick of these Suffocated lies I keep on going Until I'm out of tries Sick of these Suffocated lies I keep on going Until I'm out of tries Suffocated lies... |
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