Your Songs/Lyrics
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| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | Nekotora: I think you dont need compliments. You're so good! lol. xD Your symbolism and metaphors are laudable. |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | Wow thank you! lol That means so much to me! :] |
| a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts  Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | I wrote a new song today :$ -Good Morning Heartache- You've gone head over heels, At the sight of your own reflection, Payment in irony has you left in the fate of the morning sun. You're such a liar at the sight of your own, It's such a pity that you never will know. Darling, Is this what it's meant to be like, Good morning heartache. And farewell, Good night and goodbye, To the tune of your eyes, Dancing in my light. Holding hands with fate, Could it be so dangerous? Fighting the night sky with a flashlight, A certain miss. Take this knife, Make it flesh with the back of your eyes. Take this knife, Make it flesh with the back of your eyes. Take this knife, Make it flesh with the back of your eyes. Take this knife, make it flesh, Go slow. Darling, Is this what it's meant to be like, Good morning heartache. And farewell, Good night and goodbye, To the tune of your eyes, Dancing in my light. My light. And darling, I'm bleeding. The words you brought the night. And honey, will you take, My only light, despite.. You taught me to live, Now to return the favor. You taught me to live, Now to return your favor. Darling, Is this what it's meant to be like, Good morning heartache. And farewell, Good night and goodbye, To the tune of your eyes, Dancing in my light. Darling, Is this what it's meant to be like, Good morning heartache. And farewell, Good night and goodbye, To the tune of your eyes, Dancing in my light. My light. It sounds sort of like A Skylit Drive =D |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | I love it! The lyrics are so unique in their style! I love the feel of a restriction that needs to be lifted in it, but maybe that's just me :] |
| Black Presicion Killjoy  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | Oh!!!!!!!! OOooooooooooo!!!! I love it! A lot! Wow, this is freakishly unique! Ah, I could totally see this in a song |
| a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | =D Thank you very much That means a lot to me  |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | The Fatality: Sounds like an awesome soundtrack for the band intro...xD..ove it! Nekotora: Your welcome. xD |
| Black Presicion Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | I wrote this recently one night. It's called: Checkered Floor. By the way, it's not completed. Intro: Why don't we lie on this checkered floor like we did a thousand times before Try to keep the sound of this dying beat and promise me that you won't leave Verse 1: My help hides in this silence floating between us These covered mirrors broken at dusk I can't break the changes You can't hear my voice I'm afraid there's only one more choice Verse 2: The writing walls an empty room faded in the shade A spark, a flame, it burns my mind And yet we're still the same You tame my mind with questions of words you lack to say And still I'm screaming I'm okay |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | I like the way you wrote this and the imagery in it! :> I can't wait to see the rest of it! Edit:It kinda reminds me of MCR. :] |
| a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Black Precision: wow it's really good! Though the only thing I'd have to say some of the rhyming is a tad bit forced, like the lines "You can't hear my voice I'm afraid there's only one more choice" But then in other parts, the rhyming scheme really fits well like the whole verse 2. I really like the lines "The writing walls an empty room faded in the shade A spark, a flame, it burns my mind And yet we're still the same" I love the imagery (as Nekotora said) I really hope you finish it =D |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | This is a song I've been working on for about a year to perfect it. The name of it is "Night Terrors". The melody and words for it kept filling my head and I couldn't stop thinking about it 'til I finished it ha ha and I wanted to see what you all think. :] Another stare, and You won’t care If it’s lies That they tell you. Don’t sink deeply into trance. They’re vyin’ for the deadly dance. Come on! We’ll pry out their knives! Wake up! Drag your feet or get out with our lives? Hide tracks, And you’ll shroud us from the sharp slay. Watch out! Before with the bodies you lay! Chorus --------------------- Stay with me. We’ll rake the acid out, Then race for the dawning route. Stay with me. Please, don’t ever doubt. You’ll shake their grasp And even the score. -------------------- Impaling moonlight Glides with a sense Of their presence And rapture. Bloodlust spine dwells bleak. They blend with a fatal cheek. Dead-on Gazes pierce tonight. Keep close! I’ll drench and stake the backbite. You say I can’t draw back the buried, But wait, And I’ll trace the skylit city. (Chorus) Venom flooded the spoken. I won’t give up when you’re chokin’. Crossing guards and pale signs- Your scar will shake the clarified lines. (Chorus sung with above part 2x) (Tick tock) It’s beating at my heart again- (Tick tock) The burning that’ll never end. (Tick tock) I’m quaking. Baby, for my sake, (Tick tock) Hurry, operate Before another gash I’ll make. |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | Black Precision: This is really nice. I love the imagery and verse 2 is utterly amazing. Nekotora: Wow, long time and you have done it very nicely. The words are very capturing. And I like the tick tock thing. The first thing that came in my mind was the end of crush crush crush lyrics...the rock and roll thing. This is awesome! |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | Thanks! You're right, I didn't notice it but the end is sorta like that! <(^o^< ) <(^o^)> ( >^o^)> |
| Hatebreeder. Salute You in Your Grave  Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 2016 | I Have Some lyrics Verse 1: Can You Feel This World, It Rests On Your Shoulders. Can You See This World, It's A Place Of Destruction! Can You Hear The Sounds, Of This Brutal Place. Take A Good Hard Look At This World, For The Last Time! Chorus: The World Is Crashing, (Burning Down) And You Wonder Why This Is, (Why This Is) Here, Hell Is Already Found (Already Found) We're All In This Sick Twist. (Sick Twist) Bridge: There's Not Much Longer The World Ceases To Exist Don't Try To Run And Hide This Is The End Of The World (Never Again X4) Verse 2: Can You Feel The Time, It's Running Out. Can You See This World, It's A Damning Sight. Can You Hear The Sounds, Of This Twisted World? Take A Good Hard Look At This World, For The Last Time! [Chorus] [Bridge] |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | I see you've finished the song. I like the idea of it and the image you get from the lyrics, like a story of wrath and armageddon mixed in in my opinion. For a death metal song, it's perfect :] |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | i see stars lying in my bedroom stare out the window open so wide pitch darkness consume can't see a thing can't see the stars i can't find them i can't see them can you help me reach out help me touch the stars within my grasp i see stars so much higher than me i can see forever i see stars but i can't reach them reach for the stars reach up too high don't leave the ground reaching for the stars stay on the ground i see stars so much higher than me i can see forever i see stars but i can't reach them dream of clouds reach the stars keep your feet on this ground dream of clouds reach to the stars stay on the ground. i know i was gonna finish abusive addiction first, but i was writing it and the idea for this one popped into my head and i just had to write it down. it's about reaching for the stars, even if you can't see where you're going, and having some help along the way. also, it's about keeping your head on straight, if you see the bit in the middle "stay on the ground". |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | Strength Beyond All: This is really good. I like the imagery. This was my favourite: "Take A Good Hard Look At This World, For The Last Time!" xD The Daily Fail: Once again, another awesome piece. "stare out the window open so wide pitch darkness consume"...It is amazing..xD |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | Daily Fail: I love your song! It's so beautiful and inspiring! I especially love the part: i can't find them i can't see them can you help me reach out help me touch the stars within my grasp That song is very encouraging, and I'm glad you wrote these lyrics ^_^ |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | This is a song I wrote yesterday and finished today. The lyrics just hit me out of nowhere ha ha :> The title is "Intricate Touch". I hope you all like it ^_^ Hear me out. I sealed the envelope That hid my dream’s shout With my blood’s hope And flew it to the clouds. The overcast breezes play- I’m watching if they tunnel down- And all stand around and say My hand won’t reach the ground. No waving goodbye, And the letters won’t send a cry. Chorus ---------------------------------------- I’m sending the string. Wear the matrimonious ring. I’ll take a pledge. You couldn’t blow me off this ledge. Embracing winds will catch me And guide me When I fly from you. ---------------------------------------- Claim you tasted the wind, But all you dared to do Was turn the key and rev the engine To chase the given clue. Even though a swirling reign Of hurricanes mix in the air, The golden iris spinning ‘round Blooms the eye without a care. No waving goodbye, And the letters won’t fuckin’ cry. (Chorus) Darkened shade, Shifting rain, Soaked colors, Bleeding lovers, Another flare, A chronic scene, Keep bleachin’ out With senseless doubt. (Chorus) |
| a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | =O Oh my god Nekotora, that was amazing! ^^ Last night, I wrote a little introduction piece for my band (It's short). Introduction They said welcome to the ground, You'll get used to the sound, Of the last train home found lost in your thoughts, As the world sinks down, You try pushing up, But there's really no use in trying. Oh, there's really no use in trying. Hello Arsonist, Your friend, Firefighter, Has brought you a lighter, We could burn down cities, With none left to pity, If there's really no one left to say "I told you so", If there's really no one left to say "I told you so". Hello Father, Daddy, are you tired, From always being hired, To the same damn thing over again, This gun may have represent The world done trying to hold your breath, And there's really no one left to say "I told you so", And there's really no one left to say "I told you so". They said welcome to the ground, You'll get used to the sound, Of the last train home found lost in your thoughts, As the world sinks down, You try pushing up, But there's really no use in trying. :$ |
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