Your Songs/Lyrics
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Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | I love the new song and the stressed tone to it. You're really talented at writing lyrics :] |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | I wrote a new song :$ Lenore, Lenore, Where have you been? The skies have been busy, You've scattered the winds. You've carried my name, In the book that I gave, Your mind's been a prison I reside in my shame. Oh how, oh how? Oh how have you been? It's been, what? ten years? That I've been locked in. I've brought you a message, Please darling read. "Your life is a lie, The lie that you lead." Why, why do you try to find? A way to confide. And, why, why do you live to die? When there's so much more to life? So breathe, darling, Breathe, for I can't do the same Without you here. Time is a state of mind. So let's dance to the 3/4 beat Forever move our feet In our mind, we can be grace. In our mind, we can be grace. Why, why do you try to find? A way to confide. And, why, why do you live to die? When there's so much more to life? Why can't we live for today? When tomorrow's so far away. Why can't we pretend to agree? All you have to do is see... Lenore, Lenore, All so quiet and dear, Oh my, where's your smile? Eyes frozen with fear. We slowly succumb to the beating of drums. Woah. Woah. Woah. Woah. -------------- I entered it in to the song competition a while ago, but it ended up being completely changed. |
Tanmayesh Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: - Posts: 10 | Congratulations, I Hate You. Take off that mask of yours Rip out all your shallow thoughts Everyone thinks you can be saved But do they know You're never gonna give a damn Will we now ever salute you in your grave? Do you even deserve it. You look pretty ....Awkward. Ha! You still think? Are your insides as pretty Or even worse Your sadistic dream bubble Just seconds ago burst Atlast I have me to myslef. And as you bury yourself alive Take some pesticide along, Actually no The poor thing'll have to work overtime Of needles and sharp objects... Am I not the worst? Were you always this fake I'm yet to know why I fell for you Well, yet you can give me a chance But "No, not you, Friends value more!!" Haha! Kid someone else you kinky slob! Could I see ypur insides Are they the same pretty OR even worse Your sadistic dream bubble seconds ago burst! X2 Yeah, Yeah..I do have a black suit Do I really have to give the shit talk? Well even over your grave, I'm showing no respite Did you know there's this word called contrition? And reprecussion? No, I guess No, no wait. I know! I wanna see what your insides look like I'm sure they're not pretty on the inside X3 Bababababa..(fades) |
Tanmayesh Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: - Posts: 10 | Rest In Peace Run away from this shallow place Happier there than ever before Hell, yeah! You like sleeping anyway But yeah, We are kinda upset Bout you not coming back again To grace us with your stupid jokes Don't worry, won't be no slack seen We'll complete what you wanted to do And, yeah by the way remebrance isnt just for a few Well whose this god person anyway? God say : "I won't prove my existence Coz' there's no me without faiith" But taking you away was proof enough So, by his own arguement With a poof! he vanishes Life is so empty, It's difficult you know Because of you our heart is now bleeding The scar is too hard to bear Waiting for the guilt to be liquid To carry us with all our regrets Atleast I won't shed another tear Coz' now, I realise you're nearer than before No dottie, not heaven It don't exist You just rest in peace for eternity While we get stuck in this harsh reality.. |
Tanmayesh Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: - Posts: 10 | You, The Venom & I My words will never be enough Not that I want them to be anymore But before we go Wherever my new self takes us I wanted to say I'll remeber you Coz' it's you why I am what I've become And I love it better here than in the chacnceless land And as I go I wanted to tell you Thank you for the venom.. What do we relate to Pyridine, happiness now obviously Drunk & step over by my ownself, commanding a solution Do you not ever feel for what you did, NO conscience or what? Now as I lay on the floor Bleeding and kneeling before what I ingnored I realise it wasn't worth what alll I lost There is still a lot of time you still owe But I did learns something from you So, Thank you for the venom.. So, is the door now always closed? Am I yet strong enough to let you go You say you liked me better before But do I really deserve to go through it again? And as I dig up my old bones I hope not you of all, over again Whatever happened to the life I owned And as these living dead bloodsuckers walk the Earth Trying to get hold of my miserable soul Godd-bye for the millionth time This time I hope it's to stay And now take my Thank you for the Venom Thank you for the venom!! Thank you for the venom....(fades) |
Tanmayesh Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: - Posts: 10 | Potentially Potent You can hide it from yourself, baby But who are you trying to fool And isn’t that denying the truth Place it in a dark corner on the side of the room And in the darkness compressed the fume How about accepting them and giving them a chance to prove That this is what you needed a bit more soon And as your black feeling for him resume While mine feel trodden upon Give them respite and screw your groom! Hahahaha! It’s just that I don’t say it all out But I don’t know how And as they from inside shout out No matter how much I get reprimanded for loving you! And baby the way you profusely use My feelings, aint that abuse? Ha, just kidding don’t let it loose Coz’ if I know you well enough You’ll turn around and say “SCREW YOU!” Even if I proffer I shall be refused Am I not that most pitiable fool? Everything like always is platonic So no use is my muse. Baby, it’s just that I don’t blabber it out If I’m not, everyone around me is a know how Don’t you understand, watch my face pout! Have you have any idea how poignant it is loving you! I see your heart in black hands It slowly tears me from inside Tell me baby, is it worth a fight? Or will it be better if I die… |
Tanmayesh Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: - Posts: 10 | Do I Not Look Pretty In The Coffin? Haha! I’m gone forever now So how does it feel not be loved no more Come forth, in all you glory Relate the story wearing that black dress you own Don’t lie or hide over my grave Where were could when I could be saved Huh? Vocal chords down now? What’s with that frown now? I did enough to earn the halo Does me dead make you mellow, girl? Even if a genie chanced upon you bearing the wishes I won’t be coming back; I’ll still sleep with the fishes Isn’t there more important stuff in your life? The whole world wanting to make you their wife But the Ass has already taken your life Don’t I look better in the wood? Markers graffiting where I once stood You are the last person who would Drop flowers on the coffin when you could What say about the mess you’ve made? You care? Then you’ve got the whole firing squad to slay The one to give the order, start with yourself You’ll be hanged as a trophy next to the shelf Happy? Or do demand more respect Fine! They’ll lay you next to me. Isn’t that the best! Dried flowers lie on my grave, too good? If you can’t then sure I would Dig a path to your grave for another look Stare at that beautiful face dead! |
Tanmayesh Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: - Posts: 10 | Alive or Dead It’s the Same Thing I’ve held on too long Still it’s far from what I deserve Through the rise and fall I’ve been there all along Time & time again I sacrifice What to me should have belonged? If it stays like this forever What the fuck is this life for? I’m just a slave to my crave Am just too above from what they say And as my love on a platter lay To be refused once again Cyanide flowing through my veins And as it reaches my heart For the last time could I see your pretty face Ephedrine rushing to the centre Crying out in vain “Take it out or just wear pretty lace” And when I’m gone you’ll be a contusion on my grave The funeral jag I wish for you to come along not lag Behind, we’d be together forever Dead better than asleep ever, my love Alive I never had a trust I’ll never make you cry now, fill another cup with that liquid You screeched “You aint no friend of mine! For what you’ve done got to pay the price! So let me be and go die..” I’ve been naïve to what you say It ends with me having to go away And for my dying wish How about washing my lips away. Cyanide flowing through my veins And as it reaches my heart For the last time could I see your pretty face Ephedrine rushing to the centre Crying out in vain “Take it out or just wear pretty lace” [X2] Still don’t get it? I love you more every time Now leave me alone so I can sleep and die, die ,die…(fades) |
Decode19 Killjoy Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 6 | Revenge is a deathwish All the scars of my past are burned into my mind and I can't seem to erase the hurt that they've done. Hopefully, in the end I’ll see, that revenge just isn't for me but until that day I'm wondering, is there anyone out there like me?! I'm blinded by fear, I’m drowning in lies and tears, can they see, I’m just a fake. I've tried seeing from your point of view but I can seem to reach where you do, I can't seem to speak for myself, raised wrong, yet its almost okay, and I know one day, it'll be alright, I know its alright...I see a dream, I want to reach it but my claws can't grasp it all, pushed down, shoved around, tired of everybody else’s thought...I want to go where I want to go, I’m going to do what I want to do, I’m going to be free and you can't stop me, I want to live before I die...Breathe...before its to late, I’m going to live, I’m going to show you, I’ll do this on my own, I don't need your help so go away! I'm forced, to do what you say, 24 hours left before the next day, just want to sleep...can't eat, can't see, revenge is going to be the death of me! Why can't you see me? Why am I lost? What can I do? Oh what can I do? To make you....Make you know, what I know? And can't you believe what I do? What I say? I know...I know I’m a lie! Whoa oh whoa oh oh whoa oh, why do I feel...so cold? Why can't the rain stop now? It never rains, it only pours and I’m under pressure can't you see I’m trying? I just want you to know, I love you and I won't let go! I might want to run away, I might want to lock myself in my room and blare metal rock...I just want to be gone but I won't stop holding on and sadly, my scars, won't heal...my scars, there sealed to me, the scars, they burn, I don't care, I don't care, I don't care anymore, my scars are your fault yet....I'm somewhat thankful for all you've done, I’m afraid...this is the end. I can’t seem to be what you want but that’s okay because I’m imperfect and I wish you’d know that I can’t face death alone. |
Decode19 Killjoy Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 6 | sorry that it's typed weird |
Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | oh wow lol so many lyrics! X] the fatality: as you already know i adore those lyrics so much and i was really blown away by your talent. Just amazing! X] Tanmayesh: I have read through your lyrics and although some parts are very creative and i feel are great work, i think you need to find a little more of your own originality. it's great that mcr have inspired your songs but it's better not to be using exact phrases from their songs in your own lyrics but to find your own style. tastexofxink12: i love the message in your lyrics and the way you put forth the thoughts of what the person goes through so clearly. great work and also welcome to ino! feel free to introduce yourself in the noob thread, everybody here is really friendly :] |
Tanmayesh Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: - Posts: 10 | Thank you for your advice. I myself don't think much of my songs. I just like Don't I Look Pretty In The Coffin. |
Black Presicion Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | Holy shit, lotta lyrics!!!! Well, I'm sorry I'm being EXTREMELY lazy right now and I haven't been on in a while. So, I'm just going to keep it general because you are simply all FUCKIN AMAZING LYRICISTS!!! You all have so much creativity, imagination, and emotion in every line and every song! I admire each and every one of you SOOO much! I'm sorry I can't say too much or give advice and stuff, but I will go on more often, I've just been carried away with Swim Team and such...Sorry again! You are all amazingly coolio!!!! |
MilitaryFairy Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 83 | I'm extremely new at this so please give me some advice or whatever Stay Away You say common sense Beats my thinking process But without you I feel so powerless There’s nothing like magic on my tongue When a storm is in my head Shouldn’t I wait for the storm to pass Before I perfect my words instead? You say a broken rose is better than none This heart cannot mend until you’re gone Stay away Make broken promises into yesterday You can’t fix what’s broken anyway Don’t listen to what I say Because it’s not me anyway So stay away Knives in my skull Destroy my memories You say they’re only plastic But you’re not the one who feels the pain I’ll close you out I feel the fog Around my head and into my brain |
Black Presicion Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | I actually think that's very good for a beginner! Very good! Here's some advice: Maybe make your lyric writing more unique! Have your own kind of style to it. You have some lines that are common in songs - maybe change them around or make it weirdly unique. The chorus is all rhymed. Try not too always have a forced rhyme or have everything rhyme. Then it doesn't grab too much attention, but i do like the chorus. Very good start though! I can't wait to see more writing of yours! |
Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | I agree with Black Presicion about the forced rhyming thing, because not every line has to rhyme with the next. but other than that it's a great first start! The chorus is really good but maybe add some diversity in the rhyme scheme. Also I think my favorite part was the second verse because of the unique creativity in it :] |
MilitaryFairy Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 83 | All right, thanks for the advice! I'll see what I can do... |
no face. Awake and Unafraid Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 13483 | This is a kind of hate song, I wrote when I was really angry at new fan's of my favorite band I'm ready to rip your heart out, They'll find out what you're all about, because masks can break, and you're just a fake. wipe that smirk off your face, I want you out of this place, because masks can break, and you're just a fake. MASKS CAN BREAK AND YOU ARE JUST A FAKE. [[Chorus]] I watch lies spill out of your mouth, you're nothing but a slut that keeps going south, you do it for the scene, for the glitz and fame, watch me rise up, and you fall, all you'll hear is, shame, shame, shame I watch you gloat, I'll have you by the throat, because masks can break, and you're just a fake, Were you there from the start? Before it all began, The ones that promoted, Their new favorite band? No No NO. [[Chorus]] x2 I watch lies spill out of your mouth, you're nothing but a slut that keeps going south, you do it for the scene, for the glitz and fame, watch me rise up, and you fall, all you'll hear is, shame, shame, shame I watch lies spill out of your mouth, you're nothing but a slut that keeps going south, you do it for the scene, for the glitz and fame, watch me rise up, and you fall, all you'll hear is, shame, shame, shame shame, shame, shame, shame, shame, shame, |
Black Presicion Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | Oh WOW!!! I love your lyrics! It has so much emotion! I can tell what you're saying too and I love how you align the lyrics if you know what I mean. Like instead of one shame you put three and you put "masks can break and you are just a fake". Very unique - I love it! If you need a title you can call it: Shame, shame, shame (Masks can break) or Shame (Masks can break but you're just a fake) or Shame, shame, shame (Masks can break but you're just a fake) or Shame (Masks can break) Sorry, I have a lot of variations of a title. I tend to do that But seriously, I love your song! |
Black Presicion Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | I have another song. I don't know if its very good or not. I just wrote it last night. Very late at around midnight. It's not completely finished but hey - I got a chorus! It's a love song kind of thing. Its about this girl who loves a guy who is broken. You know, something like that. You amazing lyricists can probably figure it out. I have a couple variations for the title: Hello or I can't escape or Escape or Hello, I can't escape So if anyone could help me with the title that'd be great. Advice is also greatly accepted. Intro/Chorus: Hello, are you there? I'm breathing thin air Hello, are you near? I need you, my dear Verse: Running down an empty street Far from what my eyes can see But I slip into your lonely web I feel my breath escaping me But my heart is singing please I'm choking on my blood again (or your blood again - I'm not sure) Chorus: Hello, are you there? I'm breathing thin air I'm writing love all over again Hello, are you near? I need you my dear Can I say I'm not alright? Bridge: (very slow but very powerful) I can't escape Your undying love When you let it fly Like a broken dove No, I can't escape Your persistent heart As it lays alone Shattered in the dark (or As it falls apart - i'm not sure) Repeat Chorus Repeat Bridge Repeat Intro - END Haha, yeah - kind of messed up. Help would be greatly appreciated. |
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