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nevergetmealive
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nevergetmealive
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 226
September 9th, 2008 at 05:13am
umm, heres one of mine, i dont think its very good and it still doesnt ahve a name so...

Well, the light shines more bright
when you walk out of shade
alone, and afraid of what you've been shown
just take my cold hand and fly with me free
or two of these ones, see waht its like to be me

see it will all be alright
im the aid in the glow
no you wont have to pay for this one time show
you can watch me collide with the beasts in the dark
you might owe me a favour but ill show you some sparks
lll give you the poison, a shot suffice
we'll block all the noise and learn to play nice

cause yes ive been to frozen hell and back
do why do keep trying to keep me on a track

so let me take a bullet
for my valentine, my love
dont worry ill pull through it
the blue ones halt the light above
no it wont take much effort
even when push comes to shove
its not like i need it
its truelly the darkness that i love

(well, i know, lets never end this life...
so what your choice, man of day or beast of night?)

the pieces wont win, not a king not a pawn
all the figures are lost adn the rules are all torn
so lets run to the woods and act all alive
and peel of these masks and truelly try to survive, until dawn

cause yes ive been to frozen hell and back
so why do you keep trying to keep me on a track

so let me take a bullet
\for my valentine, my love
dont worry ill pull through it
the blue ones halt the light above
no it wont take much effort
even when push comes to shove
its not like i need it
it truelly the darkness that i love

(guitar solo)
...well i know, lets....

so let me take a bullet
for my valentine, my love
dont worry ill pull through it
the blue ones halt the light above
no its wont take much effort
even when push comes to shove
its not like i need it
its truelly the darkness that i love

its true....(wont stop, you can lead your life)....

its true.....(dont really care if your dead or alive)....

its true.....(ive tried, but now ill give you the knife)....

its true.......
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Black Presicion
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Posts: 93
September 12th, 2008 at 09:23pm
Wow. Seriously. Oh My God. I love it.
That song sounds like a proffessionally (sp?) recorded song with lyrics that aren't too deep and too cryptic but cryptic enough to get the readers thinking a lot about it and thats what I really love about these lyrics. Like, its not too simple or too confusing its kind of like one of MCR's songs and how they're songs aren't too confusing because there are many fans who can figure the songs out and they aren't too confusing. You know? Sorry, I'm not the best at explaining things.

I guess you could call it Bullet for my Valentine but that would be kinda copying the band...Bullet of Love?....Valentine's bullets?...Haha, idk...Im just randomly picking titles that could possibly fit the song...Because I think I know what the song is about... Is the song about Vampires in any way?...Er how about... Bullets for a Beast's Valentine? Idk.

Sorry that was long. But your song is REALLY good. PLEASE write more.
nevergetmealive
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nevergetmealive
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 226
September 14th, 2008 at 02:08am
wow thanks, i wasnt sure if people would like it or not and when people werent replyingi thought i had killed the lyrics thread! well thats a relief, oh and i have decided to call it Bullets for Beasts. um.. heres another...
its called Enough is Enough

ive lost my faith in this disgrace of a conversation
i cant seem to find my place
ive lost my bookmark, its okay
every single word you say to me
is another false hope at an indentity that you dont have

so hold nothing dear
believe only half of what you see and nothing that you hear

the new is old, the good is blind
the bad is stupid, and you are kind
or so you say
you shook my world and took my breath away
now cant you see im not okay today
ive had enough

your eyes are glassy but they cant see
theres nothing in the world that means much to me right now
the scar prove it but you just wont allow
for me to say anything about it
you look quite tough for such a coward

so hold nothing dear
believe only half of what you see and nothing that you ehar

the new is old, the good is blind
the bad is stpid, and you are kind
or so you say
you shook my world and took my breath away
now cant you see im not okay today
ive had enough
ive had enough...

(solo)

the new is old, the the good is blind
the bad is stupid, and you are kind
or so you say
you shook my world and took my breath away
now cant you see im not okay today
ive..!
the new is old, the good is blind
the bad is stupid, and you are kind
or so you say
you shook my world and took my breath away
now cant you see im not okay today
ive had enough
Dana Way
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Dana Way
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 18432
September 14th, 2008 at 11:56am
That's so good.! I love reading peoples' songs and gettiing to know how they write their songs. I haven't written any songs in ages.
Toronado
Bleeding on the Floor
Toronado
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 1464
September 16th, 2008 at 04:40am
Does anyone else write about completely trivial things, like books and comics and movies?
Because the majority of my songs are about things like that.
nevergetmealive
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nevergetmealive
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 226
September 16th, 2008 at 05:01am
Bitchin' Bryar:
Does anyone else write about completely trivial things, like books and comics and movies?
Because the majority of my songs are about things like that.


hell yeah! i love writing about all that stuff, right now im wiriting a song about "Perfume, the story of a murderer", if you havent watched the movie, do! i think a lot of inspiration and amazing ideas come from trivial things and people shouldnt always write about heartbrakes (that really annoys when artists do that, im just like "ok we get it! now move on!"Wink.
in other words, yes i do too
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
September 16th, 2008 at 08:50pm
wow sorry for not getting on in a long while lol school's been a nightmare @_@
nevergetmealive: i absolutely LOVE your songs! i agree with black presicion about the whole not too deep but still make you think thing.
Also I love to write about movies and comics and books and stuff, i think that's where i get alot of my inspiration, along with the people around me.
nevergetmealive
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nevergetmealive
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 226
September 21st, 2008 at 12:28am
^^^thanks a bunch, ive got a whole loead more lyrics im gonna put up, i write like one song a night. I wasnt sure if anyone was going to like tehm brcause they were my first attepts at writing lyrics ever
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
September 21st, 2008 at 02:01am
they're really good for first attempts and i can't wait to see more! ^-^
nevergetmealive
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nevergetmealive
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 226
September 21st, 2008 at 02:36am
okie dokie, here another one. Oh i was wondering if you know how i could get rid of the little green tag thingy on my name aswell, its been bothering me...
Pretty Vacant

Well ive been hanging from this roof downwards
being strangled by these hands
i see the nothingness i look towards
remembering our plans
but you'd say that we cannot go
but everythig will be alright
and as im searching for your shadow
i realise there isnt light

So you say what, i want you to hear
ive never seen you clearly, but ive never had a fear
i see the dark clouds wipe away their tears
just in time to realise you were never here

you wear my bloodied clothes all day
winning each and every single game
praying that after all, life is not so dear
we've just tamed the beasts show
stating that your everything, i want to be
but there is no you, if there is no me,
just a false case of identity
so come the doctors to all study me
for the rest of my days

So ou say what, i want you to hear
ive never seen you clearly but ive never had a fear
i see the dark clouds wipe away their tears
just in time to realise, you werw never here

you better run from me fighter
cause i have no faith no more
and as your voice gets quieter
i canot read the scrawl
but as you lay down in the graves
i fall, your voice it does not fade
i see the blood
body nowhere in the flood

so you say waht, i want you to hear
ive never seen you clearly but ive never had a fear
i see the dark clouds wipe away their tears
just in time to realise you were never her

so you say what, i want to you hear
i've never seen you clearly but ive never had a fear
i see the dark clodus wipe away their tears
just in time to realise you were never here
you were never..
here!
Asiah Scott
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Asiah Scott
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 194
September 22nd, 2008 at 01:29am
@ Nevergetmealive: Pretty Vacant is such a good song. You are an amazing lyricist.xD. Keep up the awesome work.xD

Here is a song I wrote in a very short time I got. I just wish I can start writing again but time doesnt favour it.

*DONT ASK*
I am staring down the window-pane
Rain is falling down
The birds are searching for shelter
So that they wont drown.

But I dont have an escape
From my pain
I have tried to go away
But all efforts in vain

[Chorus]
Dont ask
How I feel right now
Dont ask
What is gonna happen now
Dont ask
Where would I go
Dont ask
When will I go

[Verse]
It feels so bad
When there is no one to turn to
It feels sad
To look around and return to
No one
I am gone

[Chorus]
Dont ask
How I feel right now
Dont ask
What is gonna happen now
Dont ask
Where would I go
Dont ask
When will I go

[Ending Verse]
But if I dont go away soon
I will die
Cause this suffering is too much
Its no lie

[Chorus]
Dont ask
How I feel right now
Dont ask
What is gonna happen now
Dont ask
Where would I go
Dont ask
When will I go
nevergetmealive
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nevergetmealive
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 226
September 22nd, 2008 at 02:37am
^^^thats awesome, so full of emotion.


Eulogy

i think im dead, feel like a walking corpse
but my vital sign show no remorse today
my consciousness will have to stay
slow down, you'll have to pay
for the ring you stole, you thouht there was no catch, you see
you watch your husbands world fall down in infamy

take me, take me down
to a world where i belong and draw me to the crowd, i wont even frown

so now, they all confess
to the dark deeds they hide forever more
so put on your black dress
hide your stress and go impress
but now, you all have seen where te searchlights seem to be
now run in shade but dawn will come to find no one there but me

take me, take me down
to a world where i belong and draw me to the crowd, i wont even frown

stop me now
stop me how
you wont allow
please stop me now
stop me....

take me, take me down
to a world where i belong and draw me to the crowd, i wont even frown

take me, take me down
to a world where i belong and draw me to hte crowd, i wont even frown

take me down
stop me now
stop me how
you wont allow
please stop me now
stop me now
stop me...
a half-hearted bow.
Killjoy
a half-hearted bow.
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Posts: 20
September 23rd, 2008 at 05:06pm
...Wow. I came to this forum to post my first song. But I took advice from one of my friends and tried to right something positive, seeing how all my poems were negative.
But you guys are all so. Amazing. At writing these songs that mine would just seem out of place. xD Great work!
nevergetmealive
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nevergetmealive
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 226
September 26th, 2008 at 03:11am
^^^please post your stuff, some of the best songs are negative, or have a negative tone but positive theme.....pleae post
a half-hearted bow.
Killjoy
a half-hearted bow.
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Posts: 20
September 26th, 2008 at 07:29pm
nah, it's positive. my poems are what are negative. anyways. here it is, it's kinda rough since i haven't attempted to put it to any music etc yet.
I call it Together.

I know that you weren't happy with me
Always worrying, and tearing yourself up
But I hope that i can change that, tonight.

Maybe our love's not the perfect ryhme
But look, we still have so much more time
To talk, and laugh, and be, together..
Cause I know one day, you'll come back, forever.

You insist that it wasn't just my fault
But if I'm not the one to blame
Then how can I control this mess?

Maybe our love's not the perfect ryhme
And hey, we still have so much time
To talk, and laugh, and be, together..
Cause I know one day, you'll come back, forever.

The mistakes that we have made
Don't seem to matter anymore
I just want to be happy for you, for me.

And with all this time we have to spare
I'll help diminish all of your fears
That you built up in spite of us
And I know you aren't ready yet
But I could wait for you forever

Maybe our love's not the perfect ryhme
Good thing we still have so much time
To talk, and laugh, and be, together..
Cause I know one day, you'll come back, forever.

So I know our love isn't the
Perfect ryhme
But hey, we still have
So much time
To talk, and laugh
And love each other
And I know that one day
We'll be.
Together.
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
September 27th, 2008 at 08:56pm
okay, i have two songs.

GAY

i wrote this one about homophobia.

did that girl catch your eye?
she's the type that can make you cry
such a shame,
not in such a good way
'cause she doesn't swing your way

oh hey
that's quite gay
oh hey
if you're so straight
can you look me in the eye
and say you never thought that way?
(x2)
that's so gay!

boys like girls,
girls like girls to
why do you care?
this doesn't cocern you

it's just love
what are you afraid of?
don't roll your sleeves up,
we know what you're made of

oh hey
that's quite gay
oh hey
if you're so straight
can you look me in the eye
and say you never thought that way?
(x2)
that's so gay!

he's a boy,
he's a boy, too
they're in love
what can you do?

but you
you shield your eyes
and you
throw your punches
they never did anything to you
you tell them to grow up,
why don't you?

oh hey
that's quite gay
oh hey
if you're so straight
can you look me in the eye
and say you never thought that way?
(x2)
that's so gay!

girls will be girls
boys will be boys
girls will like girls
boys will like boys
does it really matter all that much?
that's so gay!


MONDAY

i wrote this one about a girl that runs away to find a new beginning. i call it "monday" because since monday is the beginning of a week, you can kinda start all over so i thought it worked.

he's never home
she's all alone
he's always drunk
she's being forgotten
he still cares but
she wouldn't dare at all

so midnight brings up shouting matches
the drunk and the high
but this time she's had enugh
so she packs her things and cries
she yells, she screams,
and she slams the door,
and he sinks down the wall
and he says

she'll be back
she'll be okay
she just needs to find her monday
maybe she'll realize what she's done
she'll come back home

it's been a week
it's raining out
and she's
stuck outside, freezing cold
broke and sick
she's forgotten where she is

call the police,
this alert is amber
when will she find her monday?

she saw the picture
on the lamppost
the words underneath are smeared
but they're still clear
tears are rolling down her face as she
sinks to her knees
she cries, she cries
"why?"

"i'll be back,
i'll be okay
i just wanted to find a monday
i realize what i've done
and i'm coming home."

she takes whatever she has left and
she finds her way back home
she opens up the door
and he starts to cry at the sight
he repeats his apologies, hugs her tightly
and she forgives him
she says it's okay becayse

she's come back
and she's okay
now it's starting off from monday
she realizes what she's done
and now she's back home.
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
October 3rd, 2008 at 08:26pm
Tai!s:
ahh, don't worry hon. almost all my songs are negative.
i'm just an ~emo person.

i really liked your song. normally i'm not a fan of love songs, but that was really, really good. i love the lines "i know our love isn't the perfect rhyme. but hey, we've still got so much time." you're really good at writing, keep it up!

--
lol, i've gone and ~killed it.
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
October 5th, 2008 at 09:41pm
nevergetmealive: your songs are so deep and amazingly well-written! you really have a gift for writing!
asiah: i agree with nevergetmealive, that song is so full of emotion and so real that many people and myself can relate to it well. im glad you got some time to write! :]
Ta!s: wow *.*
that song is so beautiful and im just stunned at the chorus, its fucking awesome! you have alot of talent with writing, keep it up! ^-^
once a whore: your song gay has such a spirit to it and im glad that you voiced a great message through your song! also i love monday! theres so much creativity to it and thats really cool how you did that whole fresh start thing with monday, ive never thought of it that way before. youve got your own style of writing and i think that your songs are really unique!
MilitaryFairy
Killjoy
MilitaryFairy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 83
October 6th, 2008 at 11:19pm
Ok, keep in mind I'm still terribly new to this! I have no idea for the title yet...Please give some pointers...

(V1)
Last night I saw the spark again
Flicking inside my head
Your presence pounding in my skull
I tried to unravel my tongue
And to clear my brain
But my switch was set to overdrive

(Chorus)
You started something in me
The disease spread so easily
You conquered when I pushed away
So here I am itching my arm
My face is a deep maroon
And sparks are flying every way

(V2)
You seem to be invisible
And everywhere I go
I do everything but worship your fire
It seems a bit paranoid
But what else can I do
To fill this void you’ve placed in me

(bridgeish)
I speak thinking what you would say
If you heard me now
I act as if you were next to me
When you get close enough
I always freeze up
Protect myself from nothing at all
nevergetmealive
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nevergetmealive
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 226
October 7th, 2008 at 05:31am
^^thats really good, i cant think of anything to say, but if i do ill say. To everone else, i can only agree with any comments put forward already, ive got nothing new to say. Ive got a couple of song ive writtne in the past couple of days, but ill only put up one for now, and here it is...

The Long Way Down (Bury)

And as we fall together
I've got forever to tell you...

What ive seen run through my mind
playing hide and seek with my will, you know
nothing that they didnt know
but my mind is free from fear
the world perspires

but i fear it isnt here
and that the gun jams near my ear
dont tell me to wait for tomorrow

Bury (me)
the truth and lies ive told
i am not afraid to live (from what you lack alone)
and i will
Bury (me)
smother, murder what ive shown
and sit and stare
waiting for the punchline of this joke called life

...and as we fall together
i've got forever to tell you...

that ive seen the ghosts
of the future, they dont know what is coming
on our lives, the blur
transferred to pen and paper
crying out for their savior
to damn us all

but fear it isnt here
and that the gun jams near my ear
dont tell me to wait for tomorrow

Bury (me)
the truth and lies ive told
i am not afraid to live (from what you lack alone)
and i will
Bury (me)
smother, murder what ive shown
i sit and stare
waiting for the punchline to this joke called life

but i fear it isnt here
and that the gun jams near my ear
dont tell me to wait for tomorrow

Bury (me)
the truth and lies ive told
i am not afraid to live (from what you lack alone)
and i will
Bury (me)
smother, murder what ive shown
i sit and stare
waiting for the punchline in this joke called life

and as the era cones to end
and youve already killed all your friends
through burials and eulogys you read
you find the answer to the trend

the diagnosis is your dead