Your Songs/Lyrics
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| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | Well, the light shines more bright when you walk out of shade alone, and afraid of what you've been shown just take my cold hand and fly with me free or two of these ones, see waht its like to be me see it will all be alright im the aid in the glow no you wont have to pay for this one time show you can watch me collide with the beasts in the dark you might owe me a favour but ill show you some sparks lll give you the poison, a shot suffice we'll block all the noise and learn to play nice cause yes ive been to frozen hell and back do why do keep trying to keep me on a track so let me take a bullet for my valentine, my love dont worry ill pull through it the blue ones halt the light above no it wont take much effort even when push comes to shove its not like i need it its truelly the darkness that i love (well, i know, lets never end this life... so what your choice, man of day or beast of night?) the pieces wont win, not a king not a pawn all the figures are lost adn the rules are all torn so lets run to the woods and act all alive and peel of these masks and truelly try to survive, until dawn cause yes ive been to frozen hell and back so why do you keep trying to keep me on a track so let me take a bullet \for my valentine, my love dont worry ill pull through it the blue ones halt the light above no it wont take much effort even when push comes to shove its not like i need it it truelly the darkness that i love (guitar solo) ...well i know, lets.... so let me take a bullet for my valentine, my love dont worry ill pull through it the blue ones halt the light above no its wont take much effort even when push comes to shove its not like i need it its truelly the darkness that i love its true....(wont stop, you can lead your life).... its true.....(dont really care if your dead or alive).... its true.....(ive tried, but now ill give you the knife).... its true....... |
| Black Presicion Killjoy  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | Wow. Seriously. Oh My God. I love it. That song sounds like a proffessionally (sp?) recorded song with lyrics that aren't too deep and too cryptic but cryptic enough to get the readers thinking a lot about it and thats what I really love about these lyrics. Like, its not too simple or too confusing its kind of like one of MCR's songs and how they're songs aren't too confusing because there are many fans who can figure the songs out and they aren't too confusing. You know? Sorry, I'm not the best at explaining things. I guess you could call it Bullet for my Valentine but that would be kinda copying the band...Bullet of Love?....Valentine's bullets?...Haha, idk...Im just randomly picking titles that could possibly fit the song...Because I think I know what the song is about... Is the song about Vampires in any way?...Er how about... Bullets for a Beast's Valentine? Idk. Sorry that was long. But your song is REALLY good. PLEASE write more. |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | wow thanks, i wasnt sure if people would like it or not and when people werent replyingi thought i had killed the lyrics thread! well thats a relief, oh and i have decided to call it Bullets for Beasts. um.. heres another... its called Enough is Enough ive lost my faith in this disgrace of a conversation i cant seem to find my place ive lost my bookmark, its okay every single word you say to me is another false hope at an indentity that you dont have so hold nothing dear believe only half of what you see and nothing that you hear the new is old, the good is blind the bad is stupid, and you are kind or so you say you shook my world and took my breath away now cant you see im not okay today ive had enough your eyes are glassy but they cant see theres nothing in the world that means much to me right now the scar prove it but you just wont allow for me to say anything about it you look quite tough for such a coward so hold nothing dear believe only half of what you see and nothing that you ehar the new is old, the good is blind the bad is stpid, and you are kind or so you say you shook my world and took my breath away now cant you see im not okay today ive had enough ive had enough... (solo) the new is old, the the good is blind the bad is stupid, and you are kind or so you say you shook my world and took my breath away now cant you see im not okay today ive..! the new is old, the good is blind the bad is stupid, and you are kind or so you say you shook my world and took my breath away now cant you see im not okay today ive had enough |
| Dana Way Banned  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 18432 | That's so good.! I love reading peoples' songs and gettiing to know how they write their songs. I haven't written any songs in ages. |
| Toronado Bleeding on the Floor  Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 1464 | Does anyone else write about completely trivial things, like books and comics and movies? Because the majority of my songs are about things like that. |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | Bitchin' Bryar: hell yeah! i love writing about all that stuff, right now im wiriting a song about "Perfume, the story of a murderer", if you havent watched the movie, do! i think a lot of inspiration and amazing ideas come from trivial things and people shouldnt always write about heartbrakes (that really annoys when artists do that, im just like "ok we get it! now move on!"  .in other words, yes i do too |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | wow sorry for not getting on in a long while lol school's been a nightmare @_@ nevergetmealive: i absolutely LOVE your songs! i agree with black presicion about the whole not too deep but still make you think thing. Also I love to write about movies and comics and books and stuff, i think that's where i get alot of my inspiration, along with the people around me. |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | ^^^thanks a bunch, ive got a whole loead more lyrics im gonna put up, i write like one song a night. I wasnt sure if anyone was going to like tehm brcause they were my first attepts at writing lyrics ever |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | they're really good for first attempts and i can't wait to see more! ^-^ |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | okie dokie, here another one. Oh i was wondering if you know how i could get rid of the little green tag thingy on my name aswell, its been bothering me... Pretty Vacant Well ive been hanging from this roof downwards being strangled by these hands i see the nothingness i look towards remembering our plans but you'd say that we cannot go but everythig will be alright and as im searching for your shadow i realise there isnt light So you say what, i want you to hear ive never seen you clearly, but ive never had a fear i see the dark clouds wipe away their tears just in time to realise you were never here you wear my bloodied clothes all day winning each and every single game praying that after all, life is not so dear we've just tamed the beasts show stating that your everything, i want to be but there is no you, if there is no me, just a false case of identity so come the doctors to all study me for the rest of my days So ou say what, i want you to hear ive never seen you clearly but ive never had a fear i see the dark clouds wipe away their tears just in time to realise, you werw never here you better run from me fighter cause i have no faith no more and as your voice gets quieter i canot read the scrawl but as you lay down in the graves i fall, your voice it does not fade i see the blood body nowhere in the flood so you say waht, i want you to hear ive never seen you clearly but ive never had a fear i see the dark clouds wipe away their tears just in time to realise you were never her so you say what, i want to you hear i've never seen you clearly but ive never had a fear i see the dark clodus wipe away their tears just in time to realise you were never here you were never.. here! |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | @ Nevergetmealive: Pretty Vacant is such a good song. You are an amazing lyricist.xD. Keep up the awesome work.xD Here is a song I wrote in a very short time I got. I just wish I can start writing again but time doesnt favour it. *DONT ASK* I am staring down the window-pane Rain is falling down The birds are searching for shelter So that they wont drown. But I dont have an escape From my pain I have tried to go away But all efforts in vain [Chorus] Dont ask How I feel right now Dont ask What is gonna happen now Dont ask Where would I go Dont ask When will I go [Verse] It feels so bad When there is no one to turn to It feels sad To look around and return to No one I am gone [Chorus] Dont ask How I feel right now Dont ask What is gonna happen now Dont ask Where would I go Dont ask When will I go [Ending Verse] But if I dont go away soon I will die Cause this suffering is too much Its no lie [Chorus] Dont ask How I feel right now Dont ask What is gonna happen now Dont ask Where would I go Dont ask When will I go |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | ^^^thats awesome, so full of emotion. Eulogy i think im dead, feel like a walking corpse but my vital sign show no remorse today my consciousness will have to stay slow down, you'll have to pay for the ring you stole, you thouht there was no catch, you see you watch your husbands world fall down in infamy take me, take me down to a world where i belong and draw me to the crowd, i wont even frown so now, they all confess to the dark deeds they hide forever more so put on your black dress hide your stress and go impress but now, you all have seen where te searchlights seem to be now run in shade but dawn will come to find no one there but me take me, take me down to a world where i belong and draw me to the crowd, i wont even frown stop me now stop me how you wont allow please stop me now stop me.... take me, take me down to a world where i belong and draw me to the crowd, i wont even frown take me, take me down to a world where i belong and draw me to hte crowd, i wont even frown take me down stop me now stop me how you wont allow please stop me now stop me now stop me... |
| a half-hearted bow. Killjoy  Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 20 | ...Wow. I came to this forum to post my first song. But I took advice from one of my friends and tried to right something positive, seeing how all my poems were negative. But you guys are all so. Amazing. At writing these songs that mine would just seem out of place. xD Great work! |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | ^^^please post your stuff, some of the best songs are negative, or have a negative tone but positive theme.....pleae post |
| a half-hearted bow. Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 20 | nah, it's positive. my poems are what are negative. anyways. here it is, it's kinda rough since i haven't attempted to put it to any music etc yet. I call it Together. I know that you weren't happy with me Always worrying, and tearing yourself up But I hope that i can change that, tonight. Maybe our love's not the perfect ryhme But look, we still have so much more time To talk, and laugh, and be, together.. Cause I know one day, you'll come back, forever. You insist that it wasn't just my fault But if I'm not the one to blame Then how can I control this mess? Maybe our love's not the perfect ryhme And hey, we still have so much time To talk, and laugh, and be, together.. Cause I know one day, you'll come back, forever. The mistakes that we have made Don't seem to matter anymore I just want to be happy for you, for me. And with all this time we have to spare I'll help diminish all of your fears That you built up in spite of us And I know you aren't ready yet But I could wait for you forever Maybe our love's not the perfect ryhme Good thing we still have so much time To talk, and laugh, and be, together.. Cause I know one day, you'll come back, forever. So I know our love isn't the Perfect ryhme But hey, we still have So much time To talk, and laugh And love each other And I know that one day We'll be. Together. |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | okay, i have two songs. GAY i wrote this one about homophobia. did that girl catch your eye? she's the type that can make you cry such a shame, not in such a good way 'cause she doesn't swing your way oh hey that's quite gay oh hey if you're so straight can you look me in the eye and say you never thought that way? (x2) that's so gay! boys like girls, girls like girls to why do you care? this doesn't cocern you it's just love what are you afraid of? don't roll your sleeves up, we know what you're made of oh hey that's quite gay oh hey if you're so straight can you look me in the eye and say you never thought that way? (x2) that's so gay! he's a boy, he's a boy, too they're in love what can you do? but you you shield your eyes and you throw your punches they never did anything to you you tell them to grow up, why don't you? oh hey that's quite gay oh hey if you're so straight can you look me in the eye and say you never thought that way? (x2) that's so gay! girls will be girls boys will be boys girls will like girls boys will like boys does it really matter all that much? that's so gay! MONDAY i wrote this one about a girl that runs away to find a new beginning. i call it "monday" because since monday is the beginning of a week, you can kinda start all over so i thought it worked. he's never home she's all alone he's always drunk she's being forgotten he still cares but she wouldn't dare at all so midnight brings up shouting matches the drunk and the high but this time she's had enugh so she packs her things and cries she yells, she screams, and she slams the door, and he sinks down the wall and he says she'll be back she'll be okay she just needs to find her monday maybe she'll realize what she's done she'll come back home it's been a week it's raining out and she's stuck outside, freezing cold broke and sick she's forgotten where she is call the police, this alert is amber when will she find her monday? she saw the picture on the lamppost the words underneath are smeared but they're still clear tears are rolling down her face as she sinks to her knees she cries, she cries "why?" "i'll be back, i'll be okay i just wanted to find a monday i realize what i've done and i'm coming home." she takes whatever she has left and she finds her way back home she opens up the door and he starts to cry at the sight he repeats his apologies, hugs her tightly and she forgives him she says it's okay becayse she's come back and she's okay now it's starting off from monday she realizes what she's done and now she's back home. |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | Tai!s:ahh, don't worry hon. almost all my songs are negative. i'm just an ~emo person. i really liked your song. normally i'm not a fan of love songs, but that was really, really good. i love the lines "i know our love isn't the perfect rhyme. but hey, we've still got so much time." you're really good at writing, keep it up! -- lol, i've gone and ~killed it. |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | nevergetmealive: your songs are so deep and amazingly well-written! you really have a gift for writing! asiah: i agree with nevergetmealive, that song is so full of emotion and so real that many people and myself can relate to it well. im glad you got some time to write! :] Ta!s: wow *.* that song is so beautiful and im just stunned at the chorus, its fucking awesome! you have alot of talent with writing, keep it up! ^-^ once a whore: your song gay has such a spirit to it and im glad that you voiced a great message through your song! also i love monday! theres so much creativity to it and thats really cool how you did that whole fresh start thing with monday, ive never thought of it that way before. youve got your own style of writing and i think that your songs are really unique! |
| MilitaryFairy Killjoy  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 83 | Ok, keep in mind I'm still terribly new to this! I have no idea for the title yet...Please give some pointers... (V1) Last night I saw the spark again Flicking inside my head Your presence pounding in my skull I tried to unravel my tongue And to clear my brain But my switch was set to overdrive (Chorus) You started something in me The disease spread so easily You conquered when I pushed away So here I am itching my arm My face is a deep maroon And sparks are flying every way (V2) You seem to be invisible And everywhere I go I do everything but worship your fire It seems a bit paranoid But what else can I do To fill this void you’ve placed in me (bridgeish) I speak thinking what you would say If you heard me now I act as if you were next to me When you get close enough I always freeze up Protect myself from nothing at all |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | ^^thats really good, i cant think of anything to say, but if i do ill say. To everone else, i can only agree with any comments put forward already, ive got nothing new to say. Ive got a couple of song ive writtne in the past couple of days, but ill only put up one for now, and here it is... The Long Way Down (Bury) And as we fall together I've got forever to tell you... What ive seen run through my mind playing hide and seek with my will, you know nothing that they didnt know but my mind is free from fear the world perspires but i fear it isnt here and that the gun jams near my ear dont tell me to wait for tomorrow Bury (me) the truth and lies ive told i am not afraid to live (from what you lack alone) and i will Bury (me) smother, murder what ive shown and sit and stare waiting for the punchline of this joke called life ...and as we fall together i've got forever to tell you... that ive seen the ghosts of the future, they dont know what is coming on our lives, the blur transferred to pen and paper crying out for their savior to damn us all but fear it isnt here and that the gun jams near my ear dont tell me to wait for tomorrow Bury (me) the truth and lies ive told i am not afraid to live (from what you lack alone) and i will Bury (me) smother, murder what ive shown i sit and stare waiting for the punchline to this joke called life but i fear it isnt here and that the gun jams near my ear dont tell me to wait for tomorrow Bury (me) the truth and lies ive told i am not afraid to live (from what you lack alone) and i will Bury (me) smother, murder what ive shown i sit and stare waiting for the punchline in this joke called life and as the era cones to end and youve already killed all your friends through burials and eulogys you read you find the answer to the trend the diagnosis is your dead |
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