Your Songs/Lyrics
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| a half-hearted bow. Killjoy  Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 20 | When I was feeling down, lonely and so damn dark, You brought out your bright sun, igniting my dreary heart And I was blind from you, just clouded by all of my fears But you calmed down my skies, and now it's just much more clear I'd give up my dreams just to be in yours again The flames are glowing bright, but you burst into tears It was always meant to be I told you I loved you, you told me that you're just scared Of being oh-so close, to an, another soul; And I accepted you, and everything that you are Cause one day this will change, it's just one more fear. I'd give up my dreams just to be in yours again The flames are glowing bright, but you burst into tears You and me might fade away Be back another day ..guitar stuff.. The days are growing long, my nights are growing shorter I worry that you'll leave, but i know it's just imagination I know we'll be alright, it's just for the best. You said I broke your heart, but love still leaks out. I'd give up my dreams just to be in yours again The flames are glowing bright, but you burst into tears It was always meant to be You and me might fade away Promise we won't end this way. |
| MilitaryFairy Killjoy  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 83 | ^^ Honestly, that's really good. It's not confusing or extremely metaphorical, but it's beautifully written. And for that, two thumbs up! Ok, I wrote this one about a book I'm reading "The Voice in the Wind". The song will seem confusing so I'll give you the gist of it. It was dated sortly after Christ's death. There was a man who had everything he ever wanted but still craved more. Then he met a small and quiet slave who was "ugly" but had an aura that drew him to her. Long story short, the man's sister killed her out of jealousy. This song is called "Hadassah" Struck down by many nations Beaten and bruised beyond recognition Ignited from the start and the world made you scatter But the gleam in her eyes says that this world doesn’t matter Flooded with every high imagination The world and its lust at his fingertips Exalted and esteemed in the faces of man But he’s slipping slowly with nothing to grip They search for the voice in the wind It’s dancing on her tongue She’s found her cure He searches inside himself And inside the beautifully broken vessel Of the voice in the wind Pressure is building as pretenders try To rip the mask off, but she has nothing to hide Satisfaction is fleeting, but her purity is demeaning To all who feel guilt inside His shell begins to crumble As her faith is higher than the mountains He will search forever If he believes God lies in her Yeshua, Yeshua She screams into the sky Her demons lay in waiting His hope crumbles as she dies ' |
| Charlie Chaplin Thinking Happy Thoughts  Age: 33 Gender: - Posts: 468 | MoreFreshFruit!!: Wow, this is absolutely stunning. I mean, the lyrics on this thread aren't bad or anything, they just seem...standard, very 'by the book', but this - this took me by surprise. Amazing, great interpretation. How's the book? I'm intrigued. |
| MilitaryFairy Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 83 | Wow, thank you! I was a little unsure about it so I'm extremely glad! The book is a-maz-ing - the best I've read in my life. I highly recommend it. |
| a half-hearted bow. Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 20 | aheh. thanks.. too bad i won't be writing anything positive for a long time now; just discovered that the girl i love doesn't love me. anymore. :/ thanks for the comments though. |
| Black Presicion Killjoy  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | Hey people I haven't been here in a REALLY long time. Eh...I need to update. I will be posting more lyrics...I've wrote a lot *sigh* and they're all about the same topic. I'm sorry, I will read the lyrics that was posted when I was gone. I will do that. Btw, does anyone know a good song that a girl can sing (without it being higher than...a bit lower than the chorus of pressure-paramore?) and has a good guitar part? Because my friend and I are performing something for school (which is in January) called Cafe Bulldog so she's singing and I'm playing guitar but she can't sing very high (she can't sing paramore, flyleaf, etc) and it has to be appropriate for school (We were going to do Remembering Sunday - All Time Low but it indicates that the guy's an alcoholic and...you can figure it out..) but she can sing low and so we were thinking of doing You had me at hello - A day to remember but what do you ppl think? Any suggestions? Haha, sorry that was kinda long... |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | hey, i dont think this song is that good, but ive got a bunch written down so i might as well put some up, and constructve criticism is always good. So im putting this up knwoing its not good but hoping for some pointers, this is in a VERY different tone than i normally write. This seems more lighthearted and free, which is not my writing type, but i thought it might be interesting to get some info back on this diffrent song.... Disappear turn into another street its a different place, and the air that we breath ut still same old faces and same old sounds that make out feet stay on the ground you walk the paved pathway free but not truely until you sever all links with society you'll see that the wind is much less crisp the bite is gone and the air is clear so why not take a risk you've got nothing to lose and nothing dear and all the time in the world so come with me, pack your bag and lets run no job, no house, now life is just fun we'll watch the sun rise every morning different places, your life is imprtant we'll see what it is to really feel alive and discover our own ways we have to survive plase just run with me (run with me) you can believe andything you see now the city lights are gone, we see stars and live with nature, this palce is all ours we'll sit there with nothing and leanr what it is to mean something to someone else we'll come some self worth im sure it sells so come with me, pack your bags and lets run no job, no house, now life is just fun we'll watch the sun rise every morning different places, your life is important we'l see what it is to really feel alive and discovre our own ways we have to survive please just run with me (run with me) you can belive anything you see yes i can see, you ahve faith in me so jst take my hand, i understand how you feel today, but its okay just run just run just run just run!! so come with me, pack your bags and lets run no job, no house, now life is just fun we'll wach the sun rise every morning different places, your life is important we'll see what it is top really feel alive and discover our own ways we have to survive please just run... so come with me, pack your bags and lets run no job, no house, now life is just fun we'll watch the sun rise every morning diffrent places, your life is important we'll see what it is to really feel alive and discoverour own ways we have to survive please just run with me (run with me) just run with me (run with me) just run with me (run with me) you can believa everything that you see please just run with me |
| linerlover Killjoy  Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 17 | Black Presicion: I had the same problem a while back, so I get you. I'd suggest something like 'Attention Attention' By The Academy Is... or maybe 'Smother Me' by The Used if she's willing to sing unaccompanied for the first verse, or with a piano if you've got access to one. The guitar part on Smother Me only comes in for the second verse onwards, so yeah. Hope that helps. =] |
| a half-hearted bow. Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 20 | rofl. i just said i wouldn't write another song, but. here's another, for the band i just started. Broken Rhymes. Bon voyage; It's time to leave The times we shared I can't believe Are over, they're over The time is up to feel depressed I wrote this song about our mess In case you haven't guessed I just wanna say I'd give up my dreams to see you again I worry you'll leave, but you've left and then I'm siting here, all alone And my last chance has faded All those times have inspired this Some broken rhymes with a couple twists It's over, we're over. Before this ends, I think you'll know Just how I feel, the cuts still show In case you haven't noticed I'm not the one to blame I'd give up my dreams to see you again I worry you'll leave, but you've left and then I'm siting here, all alone And my last chance has faded _mute pick_ I'd give up my dreams to see you again I worry you'll leave, but you've left and then I'm siting here, all alone And my last chance has faded I worry you'll leave, but you're long gone I gave it my all, but my heart's not that strong We're still here, back-to-back And I always knew we'd fade My heart's not that strong Not that strong |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | i just wrote this, and believe me, it sucks. :/ ABUSE ME PERFECT (BETTER) ever notice how everything i write is depressing?  so this one's about abuse. some people (and this is really, really sad) believe that if you let someone abuse you, you'll become a better person, and that's the view i wrote it from. i need to be better! better, better i need to be better! better, better i can be so much better than this i should be so much better so hit me, hit me, make me better i'll be perfect once we're through. you're so much better than me, you make me better by abusing me. abuse me perfect, i should be perfect, abuse me perfect, i should be so much better than this fucking abuse me, i need to be perfect! black and blue are my favorite colors it's been like this before i need to be perfect you can make me better than me all this is making me better but why does it have to hurt? abuse, abuse, this will make me perfect that's what i need to be abuse me perfect, i should be perfect, abuse me perfect, i should be so much better than this fucking abuse me, i need to be perfect! this does nothing for me i'm not better at all abuse won't make me perfect are you fucking insane? don't touch me with that belt i'm fine the way i am i can't be perfect you won't help me fix anything i'm so much better than me try to abuse me perfect, i shouldn't be so perfect, don't try to abuse me perfect, i can't get any better than this just don't abuse me perfect can't you see i can't be perfect? i'm not much better better, better i didn't get better better, better you can't get any better better, better, it won't get better. |
| MilitaryFairy Killjoy Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 83 | ^^ That does NOT suck. I actually love it a lot! It's amazing how you can describe the abused so perfectly. |
| nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | just telling people here that dont know...that the song writing competition is up and running again and please compete so we can keep it running! |
| emolove4everurs Joining The Black Parade  Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 199 | ok so here's a song i wrote to go with a video my band and i wanted to do we just didn't have a song that fit haha anyway it's called if i died today would you still remeber me tomorrow (duh) so read it if you like and tell me what you think you don't have to but it'd be cool to see how i could improve... If I died today would you still remember me tomorrow? You’ve already let me drown in this endless sorrow. Day after day, The pain would stay, Embedded deep within, But it’s hardly a sin. To feel all alone, To wish to pick up the phone, And call you, To tell you I love you. To want you to say it back, A wish that is black. Lost its sparkle and its shine, Baby it won’t be fine. If I died today would you still remember me tomorrow? You’ve already let me drown in this endless sorrow. Day after day, The pain would stay, Embedded deep within, But it’s hardly a sin. You were my everything, You really were and now this sting. When I hear your name, To feel ashamed, I couldn’t stop you but only let you go. But, I want you to know. It’s hard for me, To think of what used to be. What we should’ve become, This all makes me numb. If I died today would you still remember me tomorrow? You’ve already let me drown in this endless sorrow. Day after day, The pain would stay, Embedded deep within, But it’s hardly a sin. But I want you to know. It’s hard for me, To know you won’t be there for me. That if I died today you won’t remember me tomorrow. there it is =] |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | I'm back with more lyrics! Trainwrecks & Sunsets This one's about how love is meaningless these days. 3 words can't mean much less to me We're all nothing but worthless cheats Love these days needs some rehab But we're all having a love relapse Player, play her 'cause we all know it You lied to her and said you'd die for her The feeling's not so mutual, it's usual We've already gone through this So why does she feel like shit? Everything's changed, It never used to be like this We all go together like trainwrecks & sunsets You only like her for her jeans (Wanna try 'em on?) Four letter word that means "lie" Is that all you can say to me? You're just another word in their book, None of them can take back what you took from them Was it good, was it great? You're probably hiding that you're gay! I've heard it before, You've seen it before It's not front-page news anymore. Everything's changed, It never used to be like this We all go together like trainwrecks & sunsets You only like her for her jeans (Wanna try 'em on?) I can't trust you I don't know you I don't love you I don't know you! Everything's changed, It never used to be like this We all go together like trainwrecks & sunsets You only like her for her jeans (Wanna try 'em on?) What the hell? |
| Ash-Peters Killjoy Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 47 | Heyy Well this is the 2nd song I've finished that I acknowledge, I don't like the other... 2? I don't really like the last one either but I have to admit that one exists cos I recorded it for my music composition =P Anyyyway here goes: Do you remember when I was young enough for you to comb my hair with your fingers and how i'd always scream please let go your hurting me You'd say that part, you break my heart I cried, you wiped the tears from my eyes I'd find, myself in your arms Your mouth at my ear Screaming hush I'm sorry in a whisper For those few minutes I was yours but that was before you knew that was before I told you That was when I shook the hand that closed the door on me. And your still gonna go? Well if your leaving then you may aswell know that every day I miss the person you can be and every day I miss the ones where you still cared about me I know that things will never feel like that again you promised me that we would be okay but now you're broken. Bridge: And if my fingers smeared red on backlit buttons and I needed you You'd never come you'd send him wouldn't you? Chorus: Well I don't need your love it's okay if I hurt and I only need one tie to keep me on this earth Mommy your bad inside you know it hurts for more than just a little while don't you see I'm gone? don't you see it's wrong? don't you see I shouldn't hate you? I just want you to know that a smile wont make it all okay 3 words wont make this go away Musical Break Bridge Your face so close to mine, turning red its killing time! Breakdown: I can't change the fact that I'm a mistake Oh momma don't.hurt.me Momma I.have.needs I'm just a kid and if I do something wrong I'll try to fix it but you gotta understand that I can't fix this If you want I'll change the things that make me me Just so that you accept me I'll change anything I can if it makes you like me Chorus Outro: I can't forgive you it's a matter of self-respect I feel I'm running just as far as I can get I'm getting sick of you and all the things you've put me through I'll tear this sheet, cos I wanna tear your life out from your feet (acapella) I want to ruin you You've ruined me. ----------------------------------------------- any comments appreciated =] xx |
| Stifled Endings Killjoy  Age: 35 Gender: Male Posts: 66 | Play It Again Sam are you *bleepdontknowificancussonthissite* ready for revolution your mothers never married and your institutionalized for it every rubble roshers dead and you name it i i i said your brothers getting worse and it is harming the lights in your city in your city- lies like fires burn and dreams like lovers fade away yes lies like fires burn and dreams like lovers fade away fade away fade away fade away- what do you now now that you know and its getting hotter day by day day by day day by day- creatures and near-do-wells how does it feel to be part of this circle of fighting fire with fire and watching all of us burn with no peace in sight lies like fires burn yes lies like fires burn my eyes are forced to watch these burns heal and burn again lies like fires burn yes lies like fires burn yes lies like fires burn and thats how all of this goes down lies like fires burn lies like fires burn lies like fires lies like fires they burn lets get the hell out of wheatfield as it all burns down my eyes wont see the fire for the flame and its hard with heat to let this go and its getting worse so like the flame lets burn this town and let it go lies like fires burn and dreams like lovers fade away yes lies like fires burn and dreams like lovers fade away fade away fade away fade away- (a part of is wishing that you were here and a part of me is wishing that flame would claim then dissapear so if i can ever let this go im gonna need-a-someone else) lies like fires burn and dreams like lovers fade away yes lies like fires burn and dreams like lovers fade away fade away fade away fade away- |
| SavannahBanana13 Fabulous Killjoy  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 167 | I'm not the best at writing songs (i'm better at poems), but here's a little verse I came up with a couple days ago: Nothing lasts forever So lets share some laughs together Every memory means so much to me We only live once and we grow up too fast So make the best days of your life! |
| tragicwithacapitalTx Fabulous Killjoy  Age: 31 Gender: - Posts: 167 | I really can't write songs for nuts because it takes so much effort just to glean a single line that I find decent. So here's the only song that I've actually completed and did not give up on. Comments would be greatly appreciated. (: My Apocalypse Verse 1: They were drowned in the river of misgivings They were buried alive in lies They were trapped in a cage with the snakes of your venom With their haunting, pleading cries Funny then how I was the one Who had everything to lose Who found the enigma of your masquerade Behind those icy blues Supposed Chorus: You could dance your way out of catastrophe You could ensnare me with your thorns And leave me trapped in this fatality In this labyrinth of your scorn. Verse 2: Swimming in this endless sea of carnage Devastation has an ethereal glow You pillage and burn through artery and vein Where the tears of red shall flow Solace I sought in those chemical bugs That devoured me from the inside Perched on this tree of tragedy I watched our stars collide How long will it hold? How long before they find you and beg you for more? How long? How long? You will be the death of me. You will be the death of me. You will be the death of me. You will be the death of me. |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | DARLING (CLEAN ME OFF) Darling, can you take responsibility? If you can’t, I hope you know that You’ll be cleaning me off the ceiling, yeah. You’ll be cleaning me off the ceiling. And has anybody told you lately? You look so much better in the dark, Yeah you’re so beautiful in the dark. And it’s all because of you That I paint the ceiling red all by myself, Somehow, someday darling you’ll see Just what you do to me You’ll clean me off the ceiling soon. And do you see the color combination That tattoos my body And keeps me at attention? Do you see it, darling? I hope you see this now. And has anybody told you lately? You look so much better in the dark, Yeah you’re so beautiful in the dark. And it’s all because of you That I paint the ceiling red all by myself, Somehow, someday darling you’ll see Just what you do to me You’ll clean me off the ceiling soon. Darling, can you take responsibility? Will you clean me off the ceiling? Will you see what you do to me? Yeah, what you do to me. (Darling) Do you see what you do to me? (Darling) Do you see that I paint the ceiling red for you? (Darling) Do you see what you do to me? (Darling) Do you see the tattoos you leave? And has anybody told you lately? You look so much better in the dark, Yeah you’re so beautiful in the dark. And it’s all because of you That I paint the ceiling red all by myself, Somehow, someday darling you’ll see Just what you do to me You’ll clean me off the ceiling soon. You look so much better to me, In the dark, in the dark, It’s where we belong. You look so much better in the dark. |
| RainbowConnection Killjoy  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 41 | Mmmm.... well, this is strange, but hey, it could potentially be something XD It doesn't have any particular tune yet, but meh. Schizophrenia I know you’re hurting – I gave up a long time ago, But you never got past square one Did you know about the knife in your hands? Did I see the stains already on it? How many fell before it? It’s always such a tragic accident to you (When will you learn that treachery will only hurt you in the end?) And I wish I weren’t so far past caring Now you’re locked in a cage Like an monster, Oh, your rage When you’re trapped in the corner With your back to the wall Will we finally see who you are after all? So pretty and perfect and dreadful – Maybe you should just stop trying, It gets you nowhere It’s the law of gravity - You’re the only one dancing to this tune At the masquerade ball Soon you’ll have to trip and Fall (You never did pay much attention – don’t you know that chameleons don’t turn completely invisible?) I wish I weren’t so far past caring You’re locked in that cage Like an beast, So much rage You’re trapped in the corner With your back to the wall We finally see who you are after all Falling Falling down Falling down Falling How long will this take How far down can you possibly sink Before you Hit the floor Darling, your throat must be Oh-so raw from all the screaming (all those tears) These scars can’t be covered by gloves Or makeup, or your wishes, dear, They’re still bleeding You’re still bleeding (Falling down, falling down down, down, down) You can’t stand on your own You’re falling down But I can’t help you anymore We can’t save you this time |
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