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anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325 | April 22nd, 2008 at 07:45pm
my chEMMAcal romance:^ well it's good to see you can turn a fucked up day into an awesome song. it's like a big fuck you to the ppl who were making fun of you. like, "you can bully me all you want, and i'm just gonna write an awesome song about it and get rich and famous one day." lol Lol. I always say "Fuck you" to them, anyways, but when you do it in song it's so much better. :] |
IveGotSharpTeeth!
Killjoy
Age: 29
Gender: -
Posts: 28 | April 23rd, 2008 at 11:05am To be honest, I'm terribly new at this. This might not be good at all. I will gladly welcome suggestions!
My Blindfold
Close my eyes, I choose not to see
I am what my blindfold’s created me
Hush the sound, I don’t want to hear you scream
I want to live how I make believe
I admit I wove this stitch by stitch
I tried to be better
Instead I got this
Hush the sound, I don’t want to hear you scream
I want to live how I make believe
Dark consumes my sight
I’ve got a sad premonition
I’ve got an itch to take flight
But this cloth blurs my vision
I can’t live in fear this time
The sunlight burns my eyes
Hush the sound, I don’t want to hear you scream
I’m trapped in what I made believe |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | April 23rd, 2008 at 07:31pm ^ i can assure you that's good. for someone who's new to this you're pretty awesome at it. i've been writing for close to five years and i still can't write like this lol  |
IveGotSharpTeeth!
Killjoy
Age: 29
Gender: -
Posts: 28 | April 23rd, 2008 at 10:51pm Wow, thanks a lot! That's seriously news to me, maybe I should try this writing thing some more... |
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 23462 | April 24th, 2008 at 09:37pm My lyrics can be found in the poetry section.
Quite honestly, they suck.
So, to save the wonderful people of INO who haven't suffered by my writing, I'm not going to post them.
If you want to see them, then go to the topics I've started in th poetry section (my songs).
Look at your own risk. |
Mr.Armstrong
Awake and Unafraid
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 12135 | April 24th, 2008 at 09:49pm ^ =O they do NOT suck, i like em
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The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | April 28th, 2008 at 04:11pm This is called Iron Bruises. Please tell me what you really think!
Whoever said that this was only a faze?
I stand back, I watch my life incinerate
The storm was clear when I could see Your face
I gave up on You and my dreams fell away
Only You can straighten iron bruises
Only You can carry me through this
I know I make this so confusing
Take this unwilling selfish heart
Take this life and use it
As I stand back and see the picture you painted
And cry at the mess I’ve created
Your masterpiece faded
When my mind became so jaded
Let me break away from the choices that I’ve made
Take a new canvas
Start with paint anew
I am tired of being afraid
So I will do anything You tell me to
I won’t give up on You |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | April 29th, 2008 at 07:19pm ^ i like it. especially the painting metaphors. 'tis tre sweet.  |
The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | April 30th, 2008 at 11:24am my chEMMAcal romance:^ i like it. especially the painting metaphors. 'tis tre sweet.
Thanks you. |
ctroy92
Killjoy
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 50 | April 30th, 2008 at 12:06pm you people need to put these on the poetry forum because some of these are really actually pretty good. |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | April 30th, 2008 at 07:17pm ctroy92:you people need to put these on the poetry forum because some of these are really actually pretty good.
of course they're good. INOers are rad. lol |
ain't got no soul.
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 3449 | I'm posting a couple of my songs. If you DO steal my lyrics, I will eat your soul, literally.
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This song is VERY violent and aggressive. I had written it after thinking about all those who have harmed me. It contains some language. I did not try to use metaphors, I got straight to the point because it was how I felt at the time. While violence is not the answer, I'm sure A LOT of kids around the world feel this way. It's about bullying and such.
I Wonder What Your Name Would Look Like On A Gravestone
This is my time to stand
Defending for all the times you've harmed me.
You are without sight and full of judgment,
A fucking germ.
I stand, watch you bleed.
This is my final blow,
Take it,
For all the times you've been a dick.
This is my moment of truth
My final blow
Words on your tombstone,
In the dirt they stick.
Did you ever think
You had a chance with your minds state...
Ignorance!
Chorus:
This is an act of justification,
Sound the alarm,
Here's the act to end it all.
My last punch
For all the times you've watched me fall.
This is my payback,
My final blow.
This is my battle cry,
Justified and you know.
Verse:
You thought you'd flourish,
By thinking your better
Your wrong.
You fucking useless prick.
These are final words,
This is my fist in your mouth,
This is the final blow
For all the times.
I'm up you're down and out.
Bridge:
Take it
Fucker
Take it
Now you know how it feels
You can't think any better...
Ignorance!
*Chorus*
Verse:
You feel knuckles on skin,
Feel my last blow,
Feel my fist this is revenge,
Feel the dirt its cold.
Feel my last blow,
My final move.
Perfectly justified..
You know it too.
I wonder what your name would be like
Engraved in a grave stone.
It dawns on you the moment
Death calls you home.
*Chorus*
@ end.
Feel the last blow.
Feel death grip you.
Now your body's cold. x2
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This one is quite personal as well.
You Are Crazy If You Can't Hear Her Silence, Dude.
I can hear her slice her skin
While I close my eyes next door.
The sadness in her eyes
And the scars on her wrists
Couldn've had made it more obvious.
15 long years, she isn't a child anymore.
Her sister says she doesn't have a soul,
But I know she's hiding it.
Nothing is more heartbreaking than
Seeing friends conceal their hurt
Under razor blades and burns.
Or for that matter, hiding behind their
Own words that hurt you in return
Chorus:
She's unaware of how much I care.
Or maybe she's hiding behind hurt,
Or pride. Does she consider herself
To have it these days?
We'll never know, I'll never know.
But she's blood anyways.
Verse
Now, two kids at their breaking point,
One from the other and the other from her
Past, she doesn't have a mother anymore.
But we love her,
Because we've seen it happen and we love her...
At least I'd die for her.
Repeat Chorus. End.
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And this last one is something I'm working on still. I sadly only have one verse.
Revenge Is Impossible When You Can't Sink That Low.
You know what exactly happened,
And yet you never turned your eyes to this.
The greatest tragedy of her life.
Rest aside, the girl didn't deserve it.
Now you, the one with the stamp on his forehead,
The useless chauvanist
Slit your wrists like you'd expect her to,
You deserve worse than what we assume she'd commit.
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There. Hah, these suck, but oh well. I guess I'm improving. Oh, and all of you guys are so talented!
Stealing = Death.
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Ignore Alien Orders
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2026 | Didn't know if it was really worth it to start a whole new thread for recorded covers (although it might be if I'm not the only one who records themselves playing other songs on here...) Anyway, I recorded a cover of "The Navesink Banks" by the Gaslight Anthem, if anyone takes the time to listen I'd appreciate it. There are plenty of mistakes in the vocals, I'm not the best singer.
link
And some of my own lyrics, so this isn't entirely a deviation from the original thread:
"Oh, Holden"
Hey Kid, I get this feeling you're coming to an edge.
You're coming to a breaking point, it's not all in your head.
And I can see it in your crooked spine, your eyes bloodshot like suicide.
So stark, so heavy against whatever your crushed vertebrae can take.
And it's another sleepless kick,
and it's this endless nervous twitch.
Pay no mind to Morpheus, he's got no place here among us.
There's not a thing to do but pray for day,
to ward this damn fatigue away,
Let the night crew know you're here to stay.
You'll sleep another time, another place.
Hey Kid, I hear the jokes you make to dance around the facts.
Cutting, even ruthless--but really, who has time for tact?
I don't know if this is how you hide some raging panic deep inside,
but with you, it's hard to tell just what's real and just what's fake.
And it's another sleepless kick,
and it's this endless nervous twitch.
Pay no mind to Morpheus, he's got no place here among us.
There's not a thing to do but pray for day,
to ward this damn fatigue away,
Let the night crew know you're here to stay.
You'll sleep another time, another place.
You know I tried to not have to say this so outright.
But I get the feeling I have to--there's still that blank look in your eyes.
See, the kids you curse in paper, glue and ink...
Well, you're not so far from them as you might like to think.
(Get some perspective, you phony sonuvabitch.)
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ain't got no soul.
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 3449 | That's pretty good, dude! I think it's really creative and well written and the rhyme scheme is awesome. I'll listen to your cover once I get a chance. Keep it up!
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anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325 | I was working on my song assignment. I'm still not done...meh.
But I got this so far:
Tears fall on piano keys
A stain of unleashed memories
The pain inside is so alive
Smiles outside hide her inward cries
Rolled up sleeves reveal slit wrists
Thoughts of things that don't exist
She sings her plea at night
Everythings wrong and nothing's right... |
The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | This is called Stuck on Me...please tell me what you think
This world outside keeps crashing on me
Another blow to my self esteem
I am my own enemy
I’m locked in bondage, You have the key
What will it take
For this blindfold to be chiseled away
I refuse to be dead another day
I’m stuck on me
Coming unglued to You
I can’t live this way
Hiding from the truth
I can’t live in this hell
Where all I believe in is myself
I’m stuck on me
Oh, how I miss living You
I try to fly like a lead balloon
Cut these ties to everything I knew
Life isn’t so lovely
When your heart’s a block of stone
I am a runaway renegade
Please come take me home |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | ^i'm fairly liking it  |
Ignore Alien Orders
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2026 | ain't got no soul.:That's pretty good, dude! I think it's really creative and well written and the rhyme scheme is awesome. I'll listen to your cover once I get a chance. Keep it up!
Thanks a bunch.
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The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | my chEMMAcal romance:^i'm fairly liking it
Thank you! |
linerlover
Killjoy
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 17 | The Fatality.:[font=4] Well, I'm pretty crappy at lyric writing, but anyway, all the songs I have are on my band myspace.
your lyrics are amazing, and i went to your myspace-- you guys are really good. write more- youve got serious talent going on there. |
