Your Songs/Lyrics
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| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | |
| mer von d Thinking Happy Thoughts  Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 582 | oh gosh. more amazing lyrics. you guys are constantly impressing me with how mature your lyrics are. so talented. sorry if that was gay, but it had to be said |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | Black Precision: You did the chorus well. No need to be sad.=) It was marvellous how you lay forth your emotions in a very connective way.! Nekotora: Thanks again=). About your other song: Wow! It was an awesome! Loved this part: Her tongue stirs her venomous cup, Filled with sugar and deceit. She serves the next victim in the lineup Then sinks below to taste the heat. Its so cool how you've mixed up the words and they sound fantastic!=) The Daily Fail: Its an amazing song. I love how you've poured down your feelings. The words you've used are pretty good and explain all you want to tell the listener. The best was: you were sober but he was not collide at 12 am as she was sleeping peacefully too oblivious to the scene now she can only feel the pain. |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | I just wrote this last night. Hope you guys like it. Nothing comparable to yours. But I hope you like it. The Perfect Day Everywhere I walk I leave my footprints So I can remember all the places that I've been Cause its so hard to know All God has done for you You've got to thank Him Every night when I dream I have a smile on my face So that every dream is a happy one for me Cause it feels so bad To have a terrible dream Its better to turn it, how I want it to be [Chorus] So I live (I live) How I want to live my life No one (no one) Can make me change my mind It feels good (feels good) To have my own say And I know I am living my perfect day My perfect day And no one can mess with it [Second Verse] Everytime I look at the sky I breathe new life So that every moment holds its treasure for me Everytime I sing Its in a renewed tone So that I can never forget it Cause its feels so fine To turn my life around And let it shine radiantly I never thought that my own strength and power can make it appear so perfectly...oooaahhh [Chorus] So I live (I live) How I want to live my life No one (no one) Can make me change my mind It feels good (feels good) To have my own say And I know I am living my perfect day My perfect day And no one can mess with it [Ending Verse] In every sense Its all I can ever ask for No matter what happens I know I have lived my life to the full I laugh, I cry But those moments I truly die to go through again Cause they were perfect in every sense ooahhh...yeah...the perfect day! I want to live again [Fading End] It feels good (feels good) To have my own say And I know I am living my perfect day |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | Thank you! :> Asiah Scott: Oh wow I love your song! It's easy to put a tune to it and I like the way it's put together. Plus, I love the upbeat attitude of it, very refreshing. :> |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | Nekotora: Thanks alott xD. I am glad you liked it! |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | You're welcome :> |
| Black Presicion Killjoy  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | Well, this might be a bit long: Asiah Scott: I love how it was a positive song and it affected me and made me happy and it also made this happy feeling in my stomach. It definitely sounds like you have it all planned out and I could definitely imagine that as a really formed and addicting song like Welcome To My Life by Simple Plan only happier maybe like Hallelujah by Paramore. You know, a mix of that. A Daily Fail: Beautiful lyrics. So much emotion and it told so much to us, the readers. I loved it! Did it take you a long time to write amazing lyrics like that? Please write more! Nekotora: Oh My God! Amazing lyrics! This is possibly the perfect song for a released professional song by a band. I also loved how it's a song that you have to figure out by yourself, like MCR's songs, and interpret them because it has so much figurative language and meaning to it. It's just...perfect! Ah, I can't describe how much I love it! (Sorry if others feel discouraged or something by my comment because seriously, you guys are the best lyricists in the world...or at least that I know of)That is on my top favorite lyrics list! Ah, I love you! In a friendly way, don't worry! |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene  Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | Black Presicion:it took me about a month :] maybe more. i'm not sure. i'm glad you liked it. |
| Black Presicion Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 93 | A month?! Oh my... Still, amazing lyrics! Write more! Now! haha, take your time. To make real good as it already is |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | aaaah! lol. i've got an idea in my head. i just have to let it grow a little, then i can write it down. :] |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | oh hey i have a bunch of random lyrics saved to my computer. lol. i wrote this one about my mom who is extremely overprotective. oh please let me go you're smothering me momma don't cry momma don't let me die momma who won't let me live i can't see anything she's blinding me she doesn't want me to see momma please let me be. momma please let me be me. stop covering me with your sheild i want to fend for myself. momma please just let me bleed. momma let me do this please. stop me from doing all that's wrong but can you see that it's not right? you've always been there for me but you've flattened me now i level at the ground because of you momma please let me go. momma please let me be. momma please let me be me. stop covering me with your shield i want to fend for myself. momma who won't let me breathe momma who made me not me momma that just can't let go i'm not her little girl anymore. |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | double  |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | black presicion:Wow thank you so much! That means a lot to me, especially since MCR are my heroes! :> the daily fail.: my mom is overprotective too! ha ha Also, I love how your lyrics can relate to people, and what a unique rhyme pattern! I love it! :> edit:Also, did you come up with a title for it? I'm really curious what it is! :> |
| anthony green. In The Murder Scene Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 23325 | no, not yet :] i want one of those incredibly random fall out boy/panic at the disco-esque titles. |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | Ohhhh ok, that sounds cool! I can't wait to see what you come up with! :> |
| Vlud Fabulous Killjoy Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 115 | I write, but the ignorant assholes who dare call themselves my friends say that i write crappy words that are an embarassment to literature, but read one of my songs and judge how you please: "Loving you has been my blessing" Go out in the dark, but don't be afraid. 'Cause I am your savior, I'm more than a friend. -----------------------------------------------0----------------------------------------------------------- And Learn that I will be there. And trust will lust to gather...our lives. -----------------------------------------------0------------------------------------------------------------ And ev'rytime I see your eyes, it just goes through in my mind that I want to be with you for all of my life. And ev'rytime I see your face, I just feel like I'm in grace and I just want to love you 'til after I die. -----------------------------------------------0-------------------------------------------------------------- And if we fall apart, then please just take my heart with you 'til the end of time. And if there's such a day, God please don't take her away away 'cause there's a meaning in our lives. -----------------------------------------------0-------------------------------------------------------------- And time will be our chaprome. That way we won't be that alone...even when we die. -----------------------------------------------0--------------------------------------------------------------- And ev'rytime I see your eyes, it just goes through in my mind that I want to be with you for all of my life. And ev'rytime I see your face, I just feel like I'm in grace and I just want to love you 'til after I die. And ev'rytime I see your eyes, it just goes through in my mind that I want to be with you for all of my life. And ev'rytime I see your face, I just feel like I'm in grace and I just want to love you 'til after I die. -----------------------------------------------0---------------------------------------------------------------- And our love just ain't the same, because I have gone insane...all over you. And for always I'll be there, even though you're not aware...that I look after you And that is true. ----------------------------------------------0---------------------------------------------------------------- And ev'rytime I see your eyes, it just goes through in my mind that I want to be with you for all of my life. And ev'rytime I see your face, I just feel like I'm in grace and I just want to love you 'til after I die. And ev'rytime I see your eyes, it just goes through in my mind that I want to be with you for all of my life. And ev'rytime I see your face, I just feel like I'm in grace and I just want to love you 'til after I die. And ev'rytime I see your eyes, I just feel like I can fly, into the clouds of your heart for the reat of my life. And ev'rytime I see your face, T can only just embrace that the only way to forget you is if time dies. ---------------------------------------------------0----------------------------------------------------------- And I'll love you 'til the end of time. |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | Black Precision: Thanks so much. I am glad it made you happy...xD And I cant wait for more of yours. Your amazing! The Daily Fail: I love the song about your mom. The repetition element sounds good! And I just cant wait for another song of yours. Best of luck with it xD The Goth Assasin: I dont see anything crappy in your lyrics. Infact, they are amazing. You've been able to pull your emotions in the form of lyrics and they sound great. It has certain resemblances as well. Great Lyrics xD |
| Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | This song is very kiddish. lol. I wrote it when I was sad. Just random. But I hope you like it! Reach Where Dreams Are: [First Verse] The clouds turn and form shapes, That I am unfamiliar with. The sun that shines like gold, And rises up the hill. [Chorus] I wanna be like that, shine like a star I wanna soar high, journey to Mars I wanna break all boundaries And reach where dreams are [Second Verse] The shooting star passes so fast And drops in the milky stream The seven colours which merge to form A rainbow that I watch in my dreams [Chorus] I wanna be like that, shine like a star I wanna soar high, journey to Mars I wanna break all boundaries And reach where dreams are [Ending Verse] Reach where I can see, the depth of my reveries Reach where I can be, all I want to ever be Reach where success is, reach where love is Reach where time will take meeeee Reach, reach where I wanna be A thousand miles away But I will, I will reach my dreams I wanna be like that, shine like a star I wanna reach the heights, reach where dreams are |
| Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | The Goth Assasin: I agree with Asiah Scott, your lyrics are very good! The emotion in your lyrics is great and the song is very original! I love these words a lot: And time will be our chaprome. That way we won't be that alone...even when we die. Those are very beautiful lyrics! :> Asiah Scott: Amazing! I love how your lyrics are about striving toward a goal and wishing for more, and I love the descriptive words you used! Awesome lyrics! :> |
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