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Song Writing Competition

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Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
June 30th, 2008 at 04:52pm
Thanks so much and congrats everyone! All the lyrics amazed me! :]
Exodus
Always Born a Crime
Exodus
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 6949
June 30th, 2008 at 08:43pm
Song writing Competition #3
Theme-Your Favorite Song
Ok I know that this topic might be a little weird but what I mean is that I want you to pick your favorite song and write a totally new song that tells how you feel about it or something. hopefully you get it if not drop me a pm and i'll explain it to you a bit or i can post an example if needed. good luck!
Deadline
Midnight July 7th 2008 EST
Cherokee
Banned
Cherokee
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300
June 30th, 2008 at 10:10pm
Exodus:
Song writing Competition #3
Theme-Your Favorite Song
Ok I know that this topic might be a little weird but what I mean is that I want you to pick your favorite song and write a totally new song that tells how you feel about it or something. hopefully you get it if not drop me a pm and i'll explain it to you a bit or i can post an example if needed. good luck!
Deadline
Midnight July 7th 2008 EST
&Yay at last.
Odd topics are great, trust me XD.
We'll go wild..
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
June 30th, 2008 at 11:47pm
Yayyyyy! I love the new topic! This is going to be so fun! X]
Cherokee
Banned
Cherokee
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300
June 30th, 2008 at 11:58pm
Question: Does it really have to be my favourite number one, or can it be just a song I like a lot, meaning, music, and lyrics?
goodbye blue sky
Always Born a Crime
goodbye blue sky
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 6461
July 1st, 2008 at 03:11am
^ Cherokee, I´d say that I guess so.
Because seriously, the worls is full of amazing songs, I couldn´t pick just one to be my favorite. So I guess, that you can write about that song you like a lot =)
Someone else? I know my explanations are quite confusing x]
Cherokee
Banned
Cherokee
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300
July 1st, 2008 at 03:13am
Dove Melankolia:
^ Cherokee, I´d say that I guess so.
Because seriously, the worls is full of amazing songs, I couldn´t pick just one to be my favorite. So I guess, that you can write about that song you like a lot =)
Someone else? I know my explanations are quite confusing x]
Agreed, I coulnd never pick a favourite song XD.
a day to remember.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
a day to remember.
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 426
July 1st, 2008 at 07:01am
:$

I was kinda confused about the topic
and like
I submitted something idk
It was like I thought it was about listening to your favorite song, so I wrote about that.
Exodus
Always Born a Crime
Exodus
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 6949
July 1st, 2008 at 11:04am
Cherokee:
Question: Does it really have to be my favourite number one, or can it be just a song I like a lot, meaning, music, and lyrics?

yeah that's what i was really trying to say is that it just has to be about a song you like alot and stuff.
Cherokee
Banned
Cherokee
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300
July 1st, 2008 at 11:31am
Exodus:
Cherokee:
Question: Does it really have to be my favourite number one, or can it be just a song I like a lot, meaning, music, and lyrics?

yeah that's what i was really trying to say is that it just has to be about a song you like alot and stuff.
Noted.
Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Asiah Scott
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 194
July 3rd, 2008 at 07:03am
Cool Topic. xD
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
The Creature
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Posts: 23462
July 4th, 2008 at 06:43pm
Exodus:
Winners
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Congrats To All The Winners
New Deadline And Prompt Will Be Posted Later Today
Wow
HOLY SHIT! Dance
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
The Creature
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Posts: 23462
July 4th, 2008 at 06:52pm
Fallout.:
Congratulations to "Cherokee", "Nekotora", Daniella, and "Living Dead Girl."
Thanks. =]
Cherokee
Banned
Cherokee
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300
July 8th, 2008 at 12:23am
It's the 8th here, or am I dreaming?
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
July 8th, 2008 at 01:03am
^Yeah I'm confused too. Maybe Exodus has been away on vacation or something.
oh and by the way I didn't enter the competition this time.
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
The Creature
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July 8th, 2008 at 01:05am
Cherokee:
It's the 8th here, or am I dreaming?
Well, here in New York, it's 1:05 AM. Your post was at 12:23 AM.
I'm sorry if you missed the deadline.
Cherokee
Banned
Cherokee
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300
July 8th, 2008 at 01:18am
No I was waiting for entries to be posted.
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
The Creature
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July 8th, 2008 at 05:40pm
Ohhhhh. My bad. Shifty2
Exodus
Always Born a Crime
Exodus
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 6949
July 8th, 2008 at 09:54pm
so sorry about the lateness of the enteries this week i have short term memory loss so every time i meant to post them i forgot when i sat down so please bear with me anyhow.....

entry 1-
Music's Ballad

Listen to sweet sounds,
Let it fill the air, and it's bliss
Hearing the chants of a thousand crowds,
Music's a sweet, deep kiss
Beauty fills the air, with harmony,
One sweet sound, magic and charm
Get carried away by the symphony,
When they play, no one can harm

And when the last note is played,
You want to cry, and dream for more
Begging for the enchantment stay,
Listening to the music that you adore

Stories musically and perfectly told,
Though some might find it strange
You think their music's pure gold,
Hoping the music will never change
And the love for the voice and,
The way the beat goes with the rest
Your love for something grand,
You know there's no second best

And when the last note is played,
You want to cry, and dream for more
Begging for the enchantment stay,
Listening to the music that you adore

Viva la música, and that's the say,
No one can go without it for a day
There can't be anything else,
And if I ever prove that wrong,
you know that I'll be pissed at myself
Canta a lo largo de a todo canción

And when the last note is played,
You want to cry, and dream for more
Begging for the enchantment stay,
Listening to the music that you adore


entry 2-
Smach that gun to the floor.
------

So yeah,
It's true...
Hate just spread through the land...
imitate the joy, hand in hand
Sit down when the whole world stands - I say!
Hope is gone
banged through a gun

And...
What about War?
(War, War, War!)

We'll wait...
We'll be fine..
We'll end up great...
We'll sing with hate!

{Chorus:}
I say...
War, War, War!
Just took over us!
And We'll imitate the joy, hand in hand
Draining blood through the sand.
We'll wait...
We'll be fine..
We'll end up great...
We'll sing with hate!

Yeah, it's all true!
The boulevard of the dead...
Splatter... On gothic snow...
We'll wait until the december snow
Washes it away

We'll be..
forgotten, but alive..
with fucked-up minds...
The whole human kind...
Won't unite!
EVER!

{Chorus}

Under pressue..
depression...
Hate, our human state...
Dropiing level after level!

We're fake
We're in WAR
(W-A-R)
(W-A-R)
(W-A-R)
War...
SMACH THAT GUN TO THE FLOOR!

entry 3-
Lenore

Lenore, Lenore,
All so quiet and dear,
Your smile so cheering,
Eyes vacant of tears.
Lenore, Lenore,
Dear, I'm standing near,
You don't know the half of it,
I need you to listen here,
Dear.

Tranquil cacophony bleeds through the walls,
As I try oh so desperately, to sing along,
As I grasp for air, the world seems to fall in shape of the perfect song.

Lenore, darling,
Raise your head high,
For tomorrow's still coming dear,
But you're still sleeping dear,
Please don't cry,
This song will still be here,
And when you wake,
Life will fall into place
As words from your mouth dissipate,
Bleed.

Tranquil cacophony bleeds through the walls,
As I try oh so desperately, to sing along,
As I grasp for air, the world seems to fall in shape of the perfect song.

Bleeding in stereo.

Lenore, Lenore,
All so quiet and dear,
Oh my, where's your smile?
Eyes frozen with fear.

As we,
Die Away,
We slowly succumb to the beating of drums.

entry 3 is messed up but i liked it so i entered it.

you know the rules so please follow them.
Winners
they will be posted Thursday or Friday depending on when i remember what day it is.
Cherokee
Banned
Cherokee
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300
July 9th, 2008 at 02:33am
^,,,^ Great.
*Trying to choose who to vote for*.

*Voted*