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MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | December 7th, 2010 at 07:36pm
Thank you for commenting, it means a lot.
I'm off and on in the poetry forum, so it's good to know someone still reads my work. xD |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | December 7th, 2010 at 07:38pm Don’t Try
Don’t tell me it’s going to be okay,
Don’t look at me, then look away,
Don’t try to pat my shoulder,
Don’t try to “make me bolder”,
Don’t try to mop up my tears,
Don’t try to read my fears,
Don’t try to be my friend,
Don’t try to make it “end”,
Don’t try to fake some joy,
Don’t try to pull that ploy,
Don’t try to peer into my eyes,
Don’t try to read into the lies,
Don’t try to help me, ‘cause you did not before,
Don’t try to hold me, and throw me to the floor,
Don’t try to read this, I can’t get it through,
And don’t try acting like “I’m hurting YOU.”
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**Wanted to try my hand at repitition.
It's supposed to be mashed together, just to put that out there.
Fingers crossed it wasn't a complete fail. xD
Enjoy. |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | December 24th, 2010 at 12:30am You..you amaze me. End of story. |
lolis12007 Really Not Okay
Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 655 | December 27th, 2010 at 08:26pm Dear old friend (member me?! HA!) You so did not fail |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | January 1st, 2011 at 05:17pm Thank you both. It makes me smile to know people still enjoy my work. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | January 1st, 2011 at 05:18pm The Doctor Will See You Now.
You can’t confuse it,
I can’t yet lose it,
There are stairs everywhere.
Ten seconds left, now to nine,
Misery tastes so fine,
There are tombstones everywhere.
Your heartbeat kicks with life,
A smile wins with a knife,
There is velvet pain everywhere.
Oh empty rib cage, full of air,
Shuddering beneath the glare,
There is hunger everywhere.
Profess profession, you don’t care,
There is no passion, in there,
There is only death everywhere.
We have our ups, we have our downs,
We have silence in our frowns,
There is envy everywhere.
There was a point, there was a goal,
But then it soured, destroyed the whole,
There is confusion everywhere.
To leave you now, a whispered kiss,
A sharper blade, that won’t miss,
There are questions everywhere.
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**A lyrical poem I've been working on. Let me know what you guys think. |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | January 21st, 2011 at 08:41pm I wish I had a book of all your poems that I could read over and over everyday. That should tell you how much I love this poem, and everything else you have ever shown on here.
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MCRmusicmonster Really Not Okay
Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 612 | January 24th, 2011 at 12:45pm I love this! The title really drew me into it. All of your poems are really good. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | January 31st, 2011 at 10:32pm Thank you both. It's really encouraging to read comments such as these.
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MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | January 31st, 2011 at 10:35pm Violet Eyes And Lies
Hold your hands up
To the sky,
Pretty mirrors in
Your eyes,
Where most stories say
THE END,
This one starts with
One friend,
Mirror, mirror,
In your eye—
Why must people
Always cry?
Who are you,
Who are you all?
The hanging pictures
Always fall—
Violet eyes
Broke seven ways,
And so this story
Ends in a daze.
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**A quick poem, something that popped in my head around 2 a.m. , so I apologize if it confuses. lol. xD
**Enjoy. |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands
Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | February 1st, 2011 at 10:21am Don’t Try i loved this poem and i loved the fairytale like quality of violet eyes and lies i look forward to reading more of ur poetry. i agree with your ghost i wish i had your poems in a little book for me to read whenever i wanted without having to locate a computer |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 24th, 2011 at 06:17pm Ah, thank you. Makes me smile to know you like 'em that much. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 24th, 2011 at 06:18pm The Hero’s Decline
You are the hero?
Then you are the lie,
You say, “I’ll save you”,
But leave us to die,
It’s not the falsity,
But the fact we believed,
When everyone said, “Die”,
You wouldn’t leave,
Yet something changed,
What, I am not sure,
But one thing’s certain,
You’re poison, no cure. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 27th, 2011 at 01:42pm What’s Your Name?
My name is Emotion,
Let me tell you a lie,
Everyone breathes silently,
Just to hear you cry.
You can say they don’t mean it,
But they really do,
Close your eyes darling,
So you won’t see it too.
My name is Emotion,
And I know my disgrace,
I make you feel sorrow,
And the tears on your face.
But I’m a hypocrite,
I try to fit in,
Knowing, somehow,
They all see my “sin”.
My name is Emotion,
I can’t truly be your friend,
Because I’m the one pulling,
On scars trying to mend. |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands
Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | February 28th, 2011 at 08:35pm My name is Emotion,
I can’t truly be your friend,
Because I’m the one pulling,
On scars trying to mend.
WOW! i like that verse a lot. the emotions really came through and the heros decline is awesome! |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | March 19th, 2011 at 12:36am Glad to hear you liked it. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | March 19th, 2011 at 12:40am When Mirrors Fall
Mirror, mirror
On the wall,
Can you tell us
Why we fall?
‘Cause I am broken,
All apart,
Is it over,
Before it starts?
How many colors
To the sun,
Shut the blinds—
This isn’t fun.
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**Yet another poem rattling in my head around 2 am in the morning.
Pardon the abstractness of it. lol. xD |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands
Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | March 31st, 2011 at 12:51pm When Mirrors Fall was outstanding. any chance you will be writing some more gory poems soon? I love your gory poems |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | March 31st, 2011 at 10:52pm Thank you, glad you liked it.
Ah yes, I do have some tucked away.
I was debating whether or not to post them-- a few are a little too "gorrific".
Heck, why not. I'll have one posted soon. Thanks for asking. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | March 31st, 2011 at 11:11pm A Tree-Like Vein
The bones are the supports for the flesh.
Holding together, tendons mesh.
Delicate veins wrap tenderly like vines.
Folded quietly inside the skin.
Blood flows quickly, a speed of no sound.
But in your throat, the whisper is found.
A whisper that lingers, follows the eyes.
A body that withers, shudders, and cries.
Up come the arms, level to dewy sights—alas!
Staring forcefully, like skin is glass.
Here comes the voice, freed from the bone:
“I am a tree, cut down, and alone.”
Skin parts, limbs drop low.
Body hits, and the soul goes.
To sever the limbs, is to deny the whole.
Oh, without thy wrists—is to be cold.
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**Perhaps not the goriest poem (those I need to dig around for), but I like it nonetheless.
A little short and wonky, but I hope you enjoy it regardless. |