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kings of leon.
Always Born a Crime
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 6213 | June 15th, 2009 at 12:06pm
You have a beautiful and elegant way with words that is quite astonishing. That's all I have to say really. You write with the sort of confidence and daring that indicates you know this already ; ) |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
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Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | June 20th, 2009 at 01:46pm Thank you, I just try not to force things. Just wait for inspiration like a tide waiting to turn. |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
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Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | June 21st, 2009 at 07:36pm
Luna misses your unscorched skin.
The west wind wishes you well.
I lost you in gravities lungs.
You and your sour soul.
Twisted in my memory.
Like some ingrown tree.
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KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | June 23rd, 2009 at 01:19pm Pirouetting with the stars up the nose of the universe.
Thanking twenty year old Bill for his green fingers.
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KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
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Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | August 31st, 2009 at 08:56pm Love feel asleep and missed her wedding to the sea.
Forget-me-nots work gold standard under a sea of satin.
The ship wrecks were hide well under mother natures dress.
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KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | September 5th, 2009 at 03:11pm I loved you first, when you were a paper doll. You hide behind the sky and me, under the sea.
Days dropped into numbers, love dropped into hearts.
Until my love, we met in middle earth. And I uttered as I had a decade before.
I loved you first. |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | October 13th, 2009 at 05:51pm Its like trying to fly when a sticky fingered kid's pulling apart your wings.
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KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | October 13th, 2009 at 05:56pm I held apart the heavens, pointed a finger and laughed at God.
Your the biggest loser of them all. |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | December 26th, 2009 at 09:00pm
Calm the tress, mother isn't dressed yet.
And fathers face down in the pool looking for answers.
I'm on the edge of the wood, waiting, red leather shoes silent song.
Anchoring one soul.
Your existence ran flat.
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misa misa.
Shotgun Sinner
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8241 | December 26th, 2009 at 09:55pm hey
i am a bit surprised i have never noticed your thread before
it looks like it has been going for quite some time.
You have some really lovely descriptions here, beautiful imagery.
The last is my favourite. The last line:
Your existance ran flat.
is so stark. It really adds power to your piece.
Great work. |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | December 30th, 2009 at 06:57pm The sun went down on your ego an hour ago.
My stuttering self-esteem surrendered sweetly.
Demons in a half hour.
There's no room on earth left for us now.
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KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | March 24th, 2010 at 01:37pm You kept me tethered in this open prison you called, love. |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | April 4th, 2010 at 07:20pm But now your Romeo is back for his Juliet.
And I’m drowning like Ophelia, separated from her Hamlet.
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Jenny.
Moderator
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 19720 | April 6th, 2010 at 08:10pm GAGA: His body was an oxymoron.
I love that line! |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | May 19th, 2010 at 07:03pm Your bones, they shine too bright in the night.
Your whispers but an echo at the edge of gods right hand.
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KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | May 24th, 2010 at 07:00pm Sing to me of the sorrow you know so well.
You gushed and spoke of boys who blushed.
While fiddling with your petticoat, your hands became young ribbons in your mothers hair.
Slender as sea grass with none of the winds reframe.
You gushed I loved you well, even more so than boys that blush. |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | June 12th, 2010 at 11:29am Curtsy died in your grandfathers bones.
His golden tooth, was the only proof we are not alone. |
KillJoys
Bulletproof Heart
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25453 | February 14th, 2011 at 07:16am She moved from mountains high bent like a wretch cut fresh from sounds weak breathe.
And paused upon the pitiful pronunciation of humanities mother tongue.
Stung her deep like broken bottle thrust from the streets of angry youth, all of love and its loss of limbs.
They cried from heaven of her life struck dim.
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