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Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 5th, 2008 at 11:03pm
Thank-you, Aly.
♥ |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 5th, 2008 at 11:04pm Cinematic Night.
The mist of night clouds hover
Over dreams that cast and fade.
A bite into flesh to feel wounds bleed.
Smoking guns bring flashing visions.
[Let the sun burn out.]
Sink into death while watching the view.
The sun setting to clear the air.
Fire the gun and blind us all.
Blood flow to ashes.
Souls to rest.
In the cinematic night;
All will be a star.
Not that great, I know. X]
Haven't really been able to write lately. D= |
K.K. Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 1787 | December 6th, 2008 at 01:16am omfg!!! you're soo good!! My favourite was Blurred Reflection but all of your poems gave me to think |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | December 6th, 2008 at 05:32pm Mm, love the ending. ^_^
Dang, if this is bad then I'm curious to what horrible is like. xD
C'est Manifique, mon amie. |
valiumobsequy Awake and Unafraid
Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 13973 | December 7th, 2008 at 08:33pm what do you mean that was bad? you're lying to yourself!!!!!! that was one of the best poems i've evr read (im not kidding!!!!) |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 8th, 2008 at 06:13am Thank-you Ms. tear, Mr. MyChemicalBlack, and Ms. Aly.
X] |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 14th, 2008 at 06:41pm Down Pour.
A bright, clear moon in the mist of…
The beginning, the height of dreams.
That follow the days that watch over [me].
The down pour of messes to conjure.
To bring the clouds to bust up the city.
Casting it away from nightmares.
I’m new; never letting go though.
Not leaving your hand nor your heart behind.
-Its mine in this down pour!-
Lights to explode in time.
The fragments to collide to the ground…
To sprinkle the past to vanish.
[My beginning, my down pour.]
Dang boy and my ability to fall in love too easily. XD |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | December 15th, 2008 at 03:25pm Another stunning poem chalk full of imagery. xD
C'est Manifique, mon amie.
I say that a lot, but I mean it every time. |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 24th, 2008 at 12:18am X]
Thank-you Mr. MyChemicalBlack. |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 24th, 2008 at 12:20am Farewell.
Sour creases in veins to dry out.
Foiled minds to misread reactions.
Convulsions to send them into spirals.
Glass breaks from impact and then;
Bleed helplessly in response to short breaths.
[Die! Die! Die!]
They scream and condemn opposites.
Avoid terror in watch of spoilers.
Silence to scan the crowd.
[Live! Live! Live!]
No more to be a bleeder for the dead…
Farewell.
I haven't really been able to write poetry lately...
Its very sad. Anyways, I think it might be because I'm too into my new story.
Oh well, I'm sure my poems aren't that missed? XD |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | December 24th, 2008 at 01:35pm [Live! Live! Live!]
No more to be a bleeder for the dead…
Farewell.
This part had a "shiver" quality to it (if that made sense, lol).
I always love to read your work, mon amie.
Psh, of course your poems are missed!
Just post them when you're able. |
valiumobsequy Awake and Unafraid
Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 13973 | December 27th, 2008 at 08:33pm awesome |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 28th, 2008 at 01:20am XD
Thank-you Mr. MyChemicalBlack.
And thank-you too, Aly-pie. <3 |
Tilly and the Wall Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 31 Gender: - Posts: 1850 | December 28th, 2008 at 11:14am Street Lights: I have two characters in response to the ending : <3
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Cinematic Night. : Well, the starting's a bit off, but I really like how it took off from there. I don't think you've lost your touch. Sometimes you get really good lines and I just love that.
[Let the sun burn out.]
Sink into death while watching the view.
The sun setting to clear the air.
Fire the gun and blind us all.
Blood flow to ashes.
Souls to rest.
In the cinematic night;
All will be a star.
Oh man, I love all of that.
Down Pour:
Dude, you've done the same thing again! 0.0
I mean, the starting's okay, but the rest is just fantastic:
I’m new; never letting go though.
Not leaving your hand nor your heart behind.
-Its mine in this down pour!-
Lights to explode in time.
The fragments to collide to the ground…
To sprinkle the past to vanish.
[My beginning, my down pour.]
I see you're experimenting in your poetry, but you're not doing that much in the starting of the poems, so it kinda seems disbalanced...I guess that's why, in contrast, the rest of the poem feels better.
Farewell: And that poem has it balanced out. It's short, it's sweet, and it's different. All of it is a new style, mixed with a bit of old, but really cool. Haha, no other word comes to mind =D
I think you're still a very good poet. Probably just pesky writer's block x] |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 29th, 2008 at 12:24am Thank-you, Ms. Jane.
Yeah, I have been trying new things with my poetry.
I can't seem to write it that well these days. >.<
At least...I think so. X] |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | December 29th, 2008 at 12:35am Bullet.
Artic winds through flesh to shiver.
At gun point - to trigger and shoot.
Most days the case is mild.
Though they were silver spoon feed.
Lock and key; trapped.
Automatic disappearance to seek.
The answer to be clear in time.
Wasted on minor speeches.
-Go to hell; its well deserved.-
Can’t forget the regretful taste.
Replies never sent to plead guilty.
Inside out; faults to turn around.
Meet the demise of your end.
[Bang! Bang! Bang!] |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | January 1st, 2009 at 12:34am Mm, always love the gun references.
Don't know if that's a good thing, but hell, you do it so nicely. xD
It's always good to try new things, mon amie.
Which in your case, makes great poetry.
Happy New Year. ^_^ |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | January 4th, 2009 at 06:52pm XD
Thank-you, mon ami.
Happy New Year to you, too. :] |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | January 8th, 2009 at 08:48pm Exploding Ink.
The heart’s inked all over the page.
A beat on cages to scramble the mind.
Igniting the flames upon roof tops.
Dying out at the bottom…
[Forgive me?]
- At a point of sight; grace.
My Love, my Life, my Darling…
Till the world explodes, and then! -
The code to break is shattered.
~ Night sparks light into the sky! ~
And the heart writes all over the walls:
“I love you.”
Okay, so I saw this commercial on the T.V. for a new movie coming out called “Ink Heart”, or something like that…anyways… I thought that title was kind of beautiful and I wanted to base a poem on those two words and the above is what I got. It has a ton of metaphors in it. Sorry if its confusing or anything. I don’t think its that great. What do you guys think? X] |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | January 10th, 2009 at 12:23am Mm, love the imagery at the very end. xD
It's not bad, mon amie. Quite the contrary. ^_^
Awesome as usual.
Oh and.... CONGRATS ON POET OF THE MONTH!!!
You deserve it. |