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~♥~ La Poesia de Britt. [FAI.] ~♥~

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valiumobsequy
Awake and Unafraid
valiumobsequy
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 13973
January 10th, 2009 at 06:04pm
love it!
UglyAsSin
Jazz Hands
UglyAsSin
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 283
January 11th, 2009 at 02:49pm
You really deserve poet of the month. I am glad your talent has been recognised. Keep the wonder coming : ) xx
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
January 14th, 2009 at 07:09pm
Thank-you Mr. MyChemicalBlack, Aly-pie, and UglyAsSin. hug
Person0001
Always Born a Crime
Person0001
Age: 43
Gender: Female
Posts: 5099
January 16th, 2009 at 12:13pm
These are amazing, Britt. Really amazing.
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
January 21st, 2009 at 06:08am
aw, thank-you. <3
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
February 10th, 2009 at 07:33pm
Reflection.

Mirror ability to scare change,
Around getting older and letting go,
Of the past and near future,
That surrounds the life worth holding on to.

Taken down and reflected for truth.
A catch to dismiss and call one’s own.
To scream and laugh without innocence to prove,
The story of child like cares.

My reality. My scene. My reflection.
To seize and be nothing at all.


I haven't wrote a poem in which feels like forever. =0
And I'm not even sure if this one makes since.
It did at the time. X]
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
MyChemicalBlack
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351
February 11th, 2009 at 05:00pm
Mm, LOVE the ending, mon amie. xD
Speaks volumes, at least to me it does. lmao.

No worries, I understood...well, I may interpret differently, but overall I get the jist. rotfl. Mr. Green
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
February 14th, 2009 at 05:00pm
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Thank-you, mon ami. hug
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
March 1st, 2009 at 05:24pm
The Sun.

Yellow pixilated shines beam down,
Upon the fresh green grass and pale skin.
Causing reactions in both vessels to grow,
Into the tall blocking views of the world.

Numb vibrations in not knowing how to love.
Watered eyes in place of crashes and pick ups.
To be the innocent then deprived of control;
Breaks the boundaries of truth and casts.

A child to of been born to be nothing at all.
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
MyChemicalBlack
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351
March 26th, 2009 at 07:36pm
To be the innocent then deprived of control

Love. LOVE. This line.
Hell, you know how much I enjoy your work, so anything I say would be repeating myself from past comments.

But seriously, excellent work on this, mon amie. Smiley
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
March 29th, 2009 at 01:10am
ah. Thank-you, Mr. Lee. hug
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
March 29th, 2009 at 01:11am
Once Metric.

Sunken belief tarnished by flames.
Getting rid of hearts chained by spirit,
That lacks beat and steam.

Forged words on part of disgust; shaken.
Brought to charge upon means of lies.
Being the cost to pay to be able to survive;
A place that ridicules its own name.

Such a shameful overflow to drown in.


It feels like I haven’t wrote anything in forever. D=
And I’m not even sure if this makes since.
Too many metaphors…I think. xD
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
MyChemicalBlack
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351
March 29th, 2009 at 03:28pm
Such a shameful overflow to drown in

I loved this line, though I loved it all. Smile
Nah, it leaves the poem open for varied interpretation. ^_^
Doesn't hinder the awesomeness. xD
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
April 3rd, 2009 at 07:10pm
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Thank-you, Mr. Lee. hug
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
May 16th, 2009 at 10:21pm
Fool The World.

Taken as a fool that holds back.
Scenes flash and control -
The way the world precedes.

Gliding through space, then holt!
Stars align and time stands still.
I laugh!
It couldn’t get any better.

Intertwined! -And I laugh!-
To stay, I whisper…
“How could it fall in love?”
I laugh!
To know and feel ashamed.
I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry!

I fooled the world!
It crashed into the sun and burned.


eh, the word 'world' is substituting for the word 'heart'. X]
Sorry that I haven't posted anything in a while. xD
Even though this isn't all that great itself. X]
valiumobsequy
Awake and Unafraid
valiumobsequy
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 13973
May 17th, 2009 at 12:04pm
LOVE. IT.
Tilly and the Wall
Bleeding on the Floor
Tilly and the Wall
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 1850
May 18th, 2009 at 03:42pm
Epic Issues:
LOVE. IT.
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
May 28th, 2009 at 12:28pm
Thank-you Aly-pie and Ms. Jane. hug
JustAnotherBeaner
Jazz Hands
JustAnotherBeaner
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 339
June 9th, 2009 at 11:56pm
nice nice Razz
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
MyChemicalBlack
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351
July 14th, 2009 at 12:16am
What can I say that I haven't raved about before?
Simply AWESOME, mon amie. xD