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Thinking Happy Thoughts
a day to remember.
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 426
June 21st, 2008 at 04:33pm
I'm in a band called The Fatality.

And I guess these are the supposed "songs" that I have written. :/

Table Of Contents:

Zodiac
11 Minutes To Midnight (Part 1)
The Theory Of Romance
It's Not Me, It's You
Good Morning, Heartache
Introduction?
Lenore
Without A Sound
11 Minutes To Midnight (Part 2)
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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Age: 29
Gender: Male
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June 21st, 2008 at 04:55pm
Zodiac

I saw you walking home last night alone.
Did you need some company?
Your head reached the floor,
Before you could speak a word.
You screamed, but no one heard you.

There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it,
I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare.
I may be fucking crazy,
But what they don't know cant hurt them.

This subtle blade; it cuts too deep to carry on.
Don't run, don't run away.
Don't mind the pain,
It'll be over before you know it,
Don't cry, the sorrow's over.

There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it,
I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare.
I may be fucking crazy,
But what they don't know cant hurt them.

There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it,
I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare.
I'm may be fucking crazy,
But what they don't know cant hurt them.
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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Age: 29
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June 21st, 2008 at 04:58pm
11 Minutes To Midnight (Part 1)

There's no room for mistakes or fighting for,
What you believe in, not anymore.
Selling your lies, breeding our fear,
Taking this bullshit year after year.

Oppresion and sorrow is weighing us down,
Lying, denying, until we all drown.
This warfare and bloodshed no one can see,
Please end this chaos, we're falling apart!

Even in the darkest night,
There's hope, the faintest bit of light,
But how long?
But how long will it hold?

Cast into a conforming mould,
Faking my place in the rest of the world,
Taking my time till it all ticks away,
My righteous self-conscience jumbled up in a haze.

These people won't stop till we're all dead,
Carnage and blood thirst burned into our heads,
If a question arises, if doubt enters mind,
They'll crush it, they'll crush it, they'll burn it I say!

Even in the darkest night,
There's hope, the faintest bit of light,
But how long?
But how long will it hold?

We're spiraling downwards; catastrophe
Faster and faster, into this nightmare,
But how long?
But how long will this hold?

Your apathy, it sickens me,
All of this warfare in secrecy,
Your apathy, it sickens me,
All of this bloodshed we can't even see.

Even in the darkest night,
There's hope, the faintest bit of light,
But how long?
But how long will it hold?

We're spiraling downwards; catastrophe
Faster and faster, into this nightmare,
But how long?
But how long will this hold?
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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Age: 29
Gender: Male
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June 21st, 2008 at 05:01pm
The Theory Of Romance

I felt so alive
For once in my life
A darkened world, my only light
A taste of surreality

Guided through a world unsound
The two of us, where we're bound
Hurry up and take my hand
Trust we'll never fall again
Now

And could we?
Try this one more time you and I?
Could be so much more than this

I can't help but notice all the world crumbling
Beneath my feet so suddenly,
Is this what it's like to fly?
We fly alone tonight.

I walked upon a sea of dreams
To dream's to live, to breathe again
Is this what it's like to fly?
We fly alone tonight.

And could we?
Try this one more time you and I?
Could be so much more than this
But tonight, girl, there's so much left to do,

A single bow, could break a, ship.
And it hurts to know, A single bow could break a ship
And it more than feels, A single bow could break a ship
And what it seems...

And could we?
Try this one more time?
Can we?

And could we?
Live again, you and I?
To the end?
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June 21st, 2008 at 05:04pm
It's Not Me, It's You

Who knew misery could follow
Our petty crushes?
The empty pages couldn't swallow
The perfect words we never heard.
I couldn't fathom your descent,
Rationalize sudden contempt,
Did you love the way I fell?
A fall best suited for utter regret.

I hold it against myself to not see the truth in your eyes.
I tried oh so desperately to try, try again.

The open wounds you brought
Lie in the sorrow I once sought.
Wish away and can't we?
Hope to die or should we?

Who knew sorrow could follow
A constant riddle inside her smile?
Awkwardly preceeding,
Following every thought unheard.
Emotion once subscribed, now replaced,
(A sudden contempt for myself)
A once placid scene, now defaced,
A word once beloved, now erased,
(A sudden...)
A fall best suited for your intent.

I hold it against myself to not see the truth in your eyes.
I tried oh so desperately to lie, lie again.

The open wounds you brought
Lie in the sorrow I once sought.
Wish away and can't we?
Hope to die or should we?

The empty silence in my heart
Somehow fills with rage,
And honey, it's not me, it's you,
I brought myself to say.

Tear, tear me apart. Tear me in two.
Tear apart my heart, along this line,
Watch me fall apart, here, as I die.

Tear apart my heart, along this line,
Watch me fall apart, here, as I die.
Fall apart, fall apart.

The open wounds you brought,
Lie in the sorrow I once sought,
Wish away and can't we
Hope to die or should we?
This choke still holds a grip,
A growing urge to slip,
Break away but can I
Try again or should I?

The empty silence in my heart
Somehow fills with rage, (Rage)
So take this stake, and try like you mean it.
Honey, it's not me, it's (fucking) you.
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
a day to remember.
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 426
June 21st, 2008 at 05:06pm
Good Morning, Heartache

You've gone head over heels,
At the sight of your own reflection,
Payment in irony has you left in the fate of the things you've done.

The fire left in your wake
Now branded on your face,
You really can't make this much worse, but yet, I'd stay and see you try.

Darling,
Is this what it's meant to be like,
Good morning heartache.
And farewell,
Good night and goodbye,
To the tune of your eyes,
Dancing in my light.

Holding hands with fate,
Could it be so dangerous?
Fighting the night sky with a flashlight,
A certain miss.

Take this knife,
Make it flesh with the back of your eyes.
Take this knife,
Make it flesh with the back of your eyes.

Is this not,
What you wanted right?.
Go slow.

Darling,
Is this what it's meant to be like,
Good morning heartache.
And farewell,
Good night and goodbye,
To the tune of your eyes,
Dancing in my light.

My light.

And darling, I'm bleeding.
The words you brought the night.
And honey, will you take,
My only light, despite..

You taught me to live,
Now to return the favor.
You taught me to live,
Now to return your favor.

Darling,
Is this what it's meant to be like,
Good morning heartache.
And farewell,
Good night and goodbye,
To the tune of your eyes,
Dancing in my light.

Darling,
Is this what it's meant to be like,
Good morning heartache.
And farewell,
Good night and goodbye,
To the tune of your eyes,
Dancing in my light.

My light.
Teach Me To Drown
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Teach Me To Drown
Age: 102
Gender: -
Posts: 484
June 27th, 2008 at 04:06pm
i honestly like ur stuff alot!! glad u took my advice on ur song 'its not me its you' keep it up!!!! Dancer and yes the dancing man was required!!
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 426
July 1st, 2008 at 05:09pm
Introduction

They said welcome to the ground,
You'll get used to the sound,
Of the ones you know,
Lost and never found,
As the world sinks down,
You try pushing up,
But there's really no use in trying.
Oh, there's really no use in trying.

Hello Arsonist,
Your friend, Firefighter,
Has brought you a lighter,
Let's ignite the fire in our hearts,
And there's really no one left to say "I told you so",
And there's really no one left to say "I told you so".

Hello Father,
Daddy, are you tired,
From always being fired,
Same damn routine over again,
This gun shown may have represent
The world done trying to hold your breath,
And there's really no one left to say "I told you so",
And there's really no one left to say "I told you so".

They said welcome to the ground,
You'll get used to the sound,
Of the ones you love,
Lost and never found,
As the world sinks down,
You try pushing up,
But there's really no use in trying.
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
a day to remember.
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 426
July 11th, 2008 at 04:44pm
Lenore

Lenore, Lenore,
Where have you been?
The skies have been busy,
You've scattered the winds.

You've carried my name,
In the book that I gave,
Your mind's been a prison
I reside in my shame.

Oh how, oh how?
Oh how have you been?
It's been, what? ten years?
That I've been locked in.

I've brought you a message,
Please darling read.
"Your life is a lie,
The lie that you lead."

Why, why do you try to find?
A way to confide.
And, why, why do you live to die?
When there's so much more to life?

So breathe, darling,
Breathe, for I can't do the same Without you here.
Time is a state of mind.

So let's dance to the 3/4 beat
Forever move our feet
In our mind, we can be grace.
In our mind, we can be grace.

Why, why do you try to find?
A way to confide.
And, why, why do you live to die?
When there's so much more to life?

Why can't we live for today?
When tomorrow's so far away.
Why can't we pretend to agree?
All you have to do is see...

Lenore, Lenore,
All so quiet and dear,
Oh my, where's your smile?
Eyes frozen with fear.

We slowly succumb to the beating of drums.

Woah.
Woah.
Woah.
Woah.
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
July 11th, 2008 at 05:10pm
^Those are such amazing lyrics! I read your other song on the song writing competition thread and this blew me away. Seriously great work and you have a very unique style :]
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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Gender: Male
Posts: 426
July 11th, 2008 at 07:07pm
Aww thank you! Mr. Green

I love your work, by the way, it's seriously amazing.
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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Gender: Male
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July 11th, 2008 at 07:13pm
Without A Sound

Cold eyes meet cold pavement,
I can't tell you how sorry I am,
For letting you off so easily,
Here's to your eulogy.

I'm tired of these useless summer nights,
Hoping an answer will arrive.
Arrive.

My footing's growing steady,
This heart is beating plenty,
But at what cost?

Now I'm dying in your arms,
What will you say?
Our life is not a movie,
But I'll play it anyway.

Just leave the dead dying.
I attempt to stop the decay,
But there's nothing left to save.

As the dripping endless thoughts,
Wash away in the rain.
The rain.

Now I'm dying in your arms
What will you say?
Our life is not a movie
But I'll play it anyway.

If words were worthy for an answer,
If I could think of what to say,
If only my hands could stop shaking,
I would take your breath away.

Take your breath away.

I'm tired of these useless summer nights,
Hoping an answer will arrive.
deeplycullen
Killjoy
deeplycullen
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 2
July 13th, 2008 at 09:34am
are you really 13? you're, like, totally genius at songwriting. i'll remember your band name so i can say i saw those lyrics first when you become really famous. Smile great job.
Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Asiah Scott
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 194
July 14th, 2008 at 11:03am
Without a Sound: Just as awesome as all the others are. I like the upbeat tune to it and I totally agree with "Deeplycullen"..xD
And congrats for coming first in the #3 Songwriting competition..XD
goodbye blue sky
Always Born a Crime
goodbye blue sky
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July 14th, 2008 at 12:43pm
"Good morning, heartache"
OmG I love the title somuch! The chorus is amazing, if I´d hear this on the radio, I would be like whoah, no matter how bad the singer was, cus the words are wonderful (:
Honestly, darling, you can write, do not ever stop!
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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Gender: Male
Posts: 426
July 14th, 2008 at 05:07pm
Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked them! ^_^
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
July 21st, 2008 at 12:48am
aw thanks and without a sound is brilliant! You always amaze me with your writing skills!

If I died in your arms today,
What would you say?
Our life is not a movie,
But I'll play it anyway.

^I love those lines because they're just so beautiful and sad but also just speak out to me in some way. You are truly gifted. :>
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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Age: 29
Gender: Male
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July 21st, 2008 at 09:36pm
Awww, thank you. hug

Oh by the way, my band recorded "It's Not Me It's You".

We don't have a vocalist, so I guess you have to imagine the lyrics.
=)


And also, I rewrote Without A Sound, because I wrote a tune to it, and only some of the words fit, while others didn't.
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Kitty Clover
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292
July 22nd, 2008 at 03:30pm
you're welcome and i love the tune for "It's Not Me It's You"! it's really catchy and your lyrics fit in perfectly with the time frame too(i tried singing them to it lol). and i like the new lyrics for without a sound :]
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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July 23rd, 2008 at 10:10pm
=D
Thank you!

Oh by the way, I wrote a new song. Its still in the process of editing, but I'll put it up anyway.