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And In the end, who will care? Attempts at poetry by Sarah.

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The Original Bob.
Demolition Lover
The Original Bob.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 16672
April 5th, 2009 at 04:04pm
Fall now
Fall into me you know you want to
You want to just collapse in my arms
At least I want to imagine you do

Fall now
Fall down and grin with that stupid drunken leer
You know I can’t resist you
You know what you say when you’re drunk is a lie

Fall now
Take apart what’s left of my miserable life as you do
You know that you do that to me
You know that as well as I do

Fall now
Jump into the calming, welcoming arms that await you
You know that the water will love you
You know that this will kill me

Fall now
Fall away from everything you’ve ever wanted or ever know
You know that I know you love me
You know you hid it very well

Fall now
Just end this for both of us
You know this will destroy me
You know there’s no other way for you

So fall now
ReadyFreddie.
Bulletproof Heart
ReadyFreddie.
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 25545
April 10th, 2009 at 12:51pm
Hopeless?:
Junkie


Holy crap... I think I just... wow...
This is an AMAZING poem. It really captures how someone can be so addicted to someone, yet want to get away...
it really hits the spot! Well done, Sarah!
ReadyFreddie.
Bulletproof Heart
ReadyFreddie.
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 25545
April 10th, 2009 at 12:54pm
Hopeless?:
An Average Mistake


I love this song/poem. I'm still working on the melody for you, y'know! xD
It's amazing.
And you're a BRILLIANT poet. Everything your write just... makes so much sense, and it hits the right spot...
you're FANTASTIC!
Helena Rush.
Awake and Unafraid
Helena Rush.
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 10158
April 13th, 2009 at 04:49am
fuuck, sarah.
how can you say that you're rubbish?!?!
you're an amaaaaazzinggg poett Cheese
The Original Bob.
Demolition Lover
The Original Bob.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 16672
July 20th, 2009 at 02:15pm
Taking Hits and Taking Names All Over Your Pretty Face

You, you’re one of them baby
You pretend to listen as I cry
But you turn around and laugh with your friends
As I lie bleeding on the floor
You, you don’t know.
How hard it is to not do what you do so easily
So flippant about my darkest secret.
3 whole months and I’m freaking out without it

Just one step and I’m out the door
Just one touch and I’ll be back to where I used to be
Just don’t let me go and baby I’ll be okay
Yeah, baby, I’ll be okay
I’ll be okay

You, you try to be so good
And I know, I know, you try
But I know it’s just not who you are
And I can’t change who you want to be
Yeah you aren’t who you want to be
And I don’t want to be me anymore
Can I join your world for just a moment?

Where secrets are stupid and crushes are love
And taking a hit is just something you wrote
And the scars that you have are from someone else’s hands
Not from your own wielding razors at 2 am.
Not from your own trembling hands

Just one step and I’m out the door
Just one touch and I’ll be back where I used to be
Just don’t let me go and baby I’ll be okay
Yeah, baby I’ll be okay
I’ll be okay

You, you and your made-up perfect life
You break down to me at midnight on the phone
As I hear your tears you describe the fights
‘that make you carve your own obituary into your wrist”
yeah, that was the best description of what we do that I’d ever heard

You, I believed the tears and I held you as you cried
And you held me as I cried
You, you were the first I showed the pale lines
Twisting and turning all over my body
And I’ll never forget your face.
It seemed to break into pieces as you reassured me
You’d be here forever
Yeah, what’s forever to you baby?
What’s your forever?

Just one step and I’m out the door
Just one touch and I’ll be back where I used to be
Just don’t let me go and baby I’ll be okay
Yeah, baby I’ll be okay
I’ll be okay

Yeah, I’ll be okay
I’ll be as okay as I can be
And knowing me,
It’s only a matter of time before the cops come to take me away
In an ambulance no longer needed
Better fit for carrying the ones who still have a chance.