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anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
July 9th, 2008 at 12:57am
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hi, my name's hannah.
i'm a poet, but i'm mainly a lyricist.
i figured i'd probably make one of these threads.

so yes.
this is where my poems/lyrics go.
yay me.
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
July 9th, 2008 at 12:59am
I Can't.

You love me.
Do you swear?
Tell me something.
Tell me why.

Tell me why you're drunk.
Why you're angry.
Why you hit me when I try to talk.
I love you, stop, please.

Why do you do this to me?
I love you, you love me.
Or so you swear.
Don't come home drunk.

But you do.
And I can't stand it.
I'm crying.
Now you've got a gun.

Don't point it at my head.
You do.
I'm begging.
You say to stop crying.

I can't.
I can't stop.
I can't stand it.
You pull the trigger.

I still love you.
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
July 9th, 2008 at 01:01am
serious business.

scars won't show
through these sleeves
tears wait for late at night
when we're alone
but still surrounded

we can't escape
we've found our
breaking point
you can't see
what we feel

we're tearing off in the wrong direction
this razorblade seems the only solution
i don't understand why
no one understands that
this is serious business

neither is this trigger
the answer to
what we need
what we feel
what we hear inside our heads

all we need
is just a smile
but you can't even
you can laugh
you can only make this worse

we're tearing off in the wrong direction
this razorblade seems the only solution
i don't understand why
no one understands that
this is serious business
Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Asiah Scott
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 194
July 9th, 2008 at 10:22am
As I have told you before as well, you are a great lyricist Hannah. And the "Serious Business" is one of your best ever.
I am sure if you put your hand in poetry, you will be really good at it too. XD
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
July 9th, 2008 at 12:50pm
thank you sooo much Smiley hug

FEUD

don't tell me i should get shot
don't tell me to go away
i don't know what i've done to you
why do you act this way?

this feud has gone on too far
will you please tell me what is wrong?
assist me for i'm blind to this
can you tell me why you're mad?
can you tell me why you're pissed
can we please end this?
tell me (PLEASE)

i was just depressed at best
can you blame me for being human?

you went so far to call me names
hun, you've crossed the line.
what the hell?
what did i do?
talk to me, at least.

i've called you just a thousand times
but you refuse to answer.
pick up the phone
call me back
tell me what i've done
i've messed up,
i know that much
but please
just tell me (PLEASE)

i was just depressed at best
can you blame me for being human?
i was just depressed at best
can you blame me for being human?

i know i'm stupid
i know that much
i can't change your mind
yell at me all you really want
but what happened to forgive and (FORGET)?
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
July 10th, 2008 at 12:43am
OUR LITTLE SECRET

i said no so many times
but you just took advantage
i spend my days crying now
you can't deny what you did to me.
i've got something to say to you.

this is all your fault
and there was no consent
i made it clear
but you said "i insist"
you threw me down on the floor
of that empty room
you broke me in two.

i told you to stop
you told me to keep my mouth shut
i refuse to keep this our little secret.

why did you hurt me
why did you kill me a little inside?
i said it once
far more than twice
i told you no so many times
but you did it anyways.

i feared for my life
now i fear for hers
i'm far too young
to be giving birth
but you took advantage,
tell me why?

i told you to stop
you told me to keep my mouth shut
i refuse to keep this our little secret.

i said (NO)
i told you (STOP)
then you said (NO)
you wouldn't (STOP)

i can't forgive you for this
i can't forget what you did
and i can't forgive you for this
i can't forget what you did
now what can i do?
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
August 20th, 2008 at 09:37pm
i'm surprised i haven't added this one yet. it's one of my favorites out of all i've written.

this is my revenge


All these bullets are my tears,
I've held them back for two long years
Now it's time for my revenge,
Tell me, what did you intend?

I can't take this anymore
Soon you'll be bleeding on the floor
These are my tears, do you see
All the pain that you've caused me?

Did you think this would happen
When it started way back then
No idea what you were doing
Revenge is what I'm now pursuing

All these bullets are my tears
I've held them back for three long years
And now you're bleeding on the floor
I've shot you down, no life no more

This is my revenge
(x4)
(This is my revenge)

All those bullets were my tears
I'd held them back for so many years
Pulled the trigger, shot us both
And now my life I miss the most.
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
September 11th, 2008 at 08:17pm
i've always wanted to write a poem in french, and i finally got around to it.


temps de veille

i vous suivre partout.
chaque fois que vous le demandez,
Je tiens à répondre.

il est matin.
"réveil," dis-je.
"vous serez en retard."
"quelle heure est-il?"
est somnolent votre réponse.
"le temps d'aller."

il est bientôt après-midi.
i devenir s'ennuyer avec vous.
Mais je dois rester.
"quelle heure est-il?"
vous me demandez.
Je vous le dis tranquillement,
"temps de rentrer chez eux."

maintenant je suis malade de vous.
Je vous souhaite d'aller loin.
mais je ne peux pas.
vous êtes maintenant obsolète.
"quelle heure est-il?"
la troisième fois aujourd'hui.
"temps de dormir»,
Je vous le dis simplement.

je ne peux pas vous plus longtemps.
je te déteste.
Je vous souhaite allait mourir.
si je me tiens sur vous au milieu de la nuit,
d'armes à la main.
Je vous ai réveillé.
"quelle heure est-il?"
vous me demandez, sonné.
"temps pour vous de mourir.

vous êtes allés.
je suis libre.

i know that makes no sense if you put it in a direct translator, so here's what i put in mine:

time watch

i follow you everywhere.
every time you ask,
i must reply.

it is morning.
"wake up," i say.
"you'll be late."
"what time is it?"
comes your sleepy reply.
"time to go."

soon it is afternoon.
i become bored with you.
but i must stay.
"what time is it?"
you ask me.
i tell you quietly,
"time to go home."

by now i'm sick of you.
i wish you to go away.
but i cannot.
you are obsolete now.
"what time is it?"
the third time today.
"time to sleep,"
i tell you simply.

i can't stand you any longer.
i hate you.
i wish you would die.
so i stand over you in the middle of the night,
weapon in hand.
i've woken you up.
"what time is it?"
you ask me, groggy.
"time for you to die."

you are gone.
i am free.