Gerard Way.
In the Cannibal Glow
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Posts: 53288 | July 9th, 2008 at 05:47pm
Hi all. I'm new at poetry so I'm not good at this but comments and critics are welcomed. Oh please be nice because i haven't write a poetry since i was 12 so my right brain's a little rusty x]
Poem #1 : Good Morning Rockstar
Poem #2 : Plane Crash |
Gerard Way.
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Posts: 53288 | July 9th, 2008 at 05:51pm Good Morning Rockstar.
Ring.
What time is it? What time is it!
“Seven,” someone said. “You’re up early today?”
Rise and shine rockstar, a full day waits ahead,
But… Ow! It hurts! My head!
Oh shit, was it from the booze I had?
Walking down in my red pyjama pants.
A cup of coffee and cigarette in my hands.
Aren’t they an alcoholic’s best friends?
Or do they make us feel more like a man?
Let’s see, what’s in the news today?
Hey look, that’s me partying with Gerard Way!
Isn’t it the same old story again?
Ain’t it glamorous living life in vain?
Sex, drugs, and everything rock and roll,
But did you know inside I’m trapped in a hole!
Presley, Hendrix, Vicious and Cobain,
Maybe I’ll die young, just like them. |
Gerard Way.
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Posts: 53288 | July 9th, 2008 at 06:45pm Plane Crash
Mayday! Mayday!
HQ! We are losing altitude!
Cabin crew please be seated!
Rough landing ahead!
Seat belts on! Electronics off!
Ladies and gentlemen,
This is your captain speaking,
It’s a pleasure having you on my plane,
But I’m sorry to inform that we are crashing.
Crying babies and couples holding hands,
Terrified faces of women and men,
Say a prayer my child, you’ll never know when,
For only God can help us to land.
We are going down too fast,
Ten thousand to hundreds at last,
Close your eyes, don’t think about home,
For in a second, we will all be gone.
One.
Two.
Th-
Tumbling ball of fire,
And we… disappear.
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Gerard Way.
In the Cannibal Glow
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Posts: 53288 | January 9th, 2010 at 12:18am Pixels Crush.
I've never been in love,
except with the bits from your image,
24 bpp of truecolour in my screen,
making each of the pixels dance,
forming your hair, your eyes, your face.
Oh, such true beauty,
that can never be match by any living men i've seen! |
misa misa.
Shotgun Sinner
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8241 | January 9th, 2010 at 12:25am Hey
Don't be hard on yourself; these are very good for your first poems. I hate to think what mine read like when i started.
You have a very interesting style. Some of it reads almost like a conversation-that really helps to create the mood though, especially in Plane Crash.
Pixels Crush was my favourite. A simple concept but beautifully executed. Great title too.
well done. |
Demolition_Lover_02
Killjoy
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 2 | January 9th, 2010 at 06:54pm Hey
Those were amazing! Im not that good a poet myself.
I particually liked Good Morning Rockstar 
Brilliant.
Well Done. |
MindlessRomance
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Posts: 56 | January 10th, 2010 at 04:32pm Hi.
They are pretty good.
Well done  |
