The lost graveyard of the souls forgotten long ago. poems by Pansy Wayero (changed name)
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MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave ![]() Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | Sad, but beautiful at the same time. I find myself repeating this sometimes, but I really enjoyed the flow and emotion of this work. Excellent, as usual. Very relatable (at least for me). ![]() |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | Politicians are devils in disguise This world is f**ked up and love is made of lies, a notion created to blind our eyes. Respect and virtue do not exist, vanished completely in the mist. We search desperately for something that keeps us sane, but life always manages to cause us pain. With politicions feeding us lie after lie can you see now why I want to die? Chaos and corruption will always be a part of this universe, bow ur head now because justice has died and is leaving in its hearse. I'm told we are all gods kids, but how can that be when girls are sold into sex trades for the highest bids? If god really is our dad then why do we suffer so much agony? No parent would actually want to see their children unhappy. And yet god does nothing to ease our pain, satan is in charge now, god will never be seen again. The world has gone to hell what can I say, there will still be corruption and evil around on my dying day. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- INSPIRATION The inspiration for this poem came from when i waas talking to my friend about how the english government are making too many severe spending cuts and they are affecting people like me but the goverment would happily bail out another bank with taxpayers money if the bank was going bust. He called them greedy and then later that day i wrote this poem on my phone. I dont vote btw i think all politicians promise 1 thing before being elected and do the exact opposite once they are in power |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave ![]() Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | Politicians Are Devils In Disguise: Wow, I truly enjoyed this poem. Could definitely feel the "force" behind it, if that makes sense. Chaos and corruption will always be a part of this universe, bow ur head now because justice has died and is leaving in its hearse. Loved the imagery of this couplet, the way you wrote this was creatively intriguing. Excellent work as usual. ![]() |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | aww thanks MyChemicalBlack the truth is when i was sorting it out to type it up onto here i realised there was bits missing and to make this poem flow like a 'regular' poem of mine i would have to create extra lines but i decided the lines that are not in a rhyming couplet pack more punch on there own. plus i was being lazy as well my brain had shut down by that point Chaos and corruption will always be a part of this universe, bow ur head now because justice has died and is leaving in its hearse. as soon as i created that couplet i thought of you and thought yep MyChemicalBlack will like that ![]() |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave ![]() Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | Haha, well, either way I liked it. xD Keep up the good work. ![]() |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | who am i? i am the wind and the rain, the hurt and the sorrow, i am the hope and the gain, the promise of tomorrow i am the maiden with the ripped up heart, the matyr that never got my start i am the tears of angiush the tears of pain and the hope that will be restored again to my friends i am the fire that keeps you warm i am the safe port in the storm i am the good times that make you smile i am the comfort when life puts you on trial to myself i am the demon that wages wars in my head the fool that never thinks about whats just been said but im also my only true best friend the one i could trust not to send me to a bitter end im the party girl that lives half in the shadows half in the light i am the whispering breeze on a warm spring night i am the tortured soul that screams for mercy begging someone to save me. i am the joy and the pain, the truth and the lie all opposites in the world that is i inspiration: its an autobiographical peice that describes me |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave ![]() Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | who am i?: Wow...definitely felt the emotion in certain parts of this poem. Loved the flow as well (I'm a sucker for the rhyming stanzas). ^_^ to myself i am the demon that wages wars in my head the fool that never thinks about whats just been said AND i am the joy and the pain, the truth and the lie all opposites in the world that is i These two sections really got me. Excellent work. ![]() Wonderous, as usual. ![]() |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | who am i? different version now that i'm happier i am the wind and the rain, the hurt and the sorrow, i am the hope and the gain, the promise of tomorrow i am the maiden with the beautiful heart, the lover that has finally got my start i am the tears of angiush the tears of pain and the hope that will be restored again to my friends i am the fire that keeps you warm i am the safe port in the storm i am the good times that make you smile i am the comfort when life puts you on trial im the party girl that lives half in the shadows half in the light i am the whispering breeze on a warm spring night i am the soul that once screamed for mercy begging someone to save me. i am the joy and the pain, the truth and the lie all opposites in the world that is i |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | so glad you liked the poem. i love the last lines: 'i am the joy and the pain, the truth and the lie all opposites in the world that is i' very good |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave ![]() Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | Ah, you posted another version? Nice. Always interesting to read a poem written with a different emotion. Excellent. ![]() |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | bump |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | carve out this treacherous heart of mine for it has done to me over time a thousand ills and caused so much pain its gave me so much loss for so little gain if only i could tear it out of me cast it aside so then the animal could be free but to give it to the trash man id have to get it back my hearts not mine its walking on a different track i hope where ever my heart is it is there to to stay and that the owner of my heart doesnt casually throw it away i hope that when it returns its not cracked and bent or my past actions i may repent inspiration: written about someone i know. |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | This is my new path. And yes walk with me my friend but understand that you are the vines that are tripping me up and making me fall, trapping me till i cant stand at all. A friend is what i need maybe that could be you? But as we walk understand you'll always remind me of what i put you through. On my face are drops of acid rain, caused by your tears of anguish and pain. Yes walk with me but remember that you have to help by setting me free. In a way you are clipping my wings, by holding on to certain things. Dead and buried thats how that chapter should stay, if thats not possible dont walk with me this way. written as a facebook status to hint to a friend that he can help me rebuild my life but he has to let go of is emotional attachment to me ( he still loves me like a gf and i dont love him that way) |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave ![]() Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | "my hearts not mine its walking on a different track." AND "A friend is what i need maybe that could be you? But as we walk understand you'll always remind me of what i put you through." Always a fan of powerful lines such as these. ![]() Love the regular stanza layout of the first poem and the "status" note vibe of the second. Nice work. ![]() |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | Thanks. as i said the last one was actually written as a status then i thought it would be cool to post it up here |
hunteri heroici. Always Born a Crime ![]() Age: 29 Gender: - Posts: 6926 | good job! keep it up (y) |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | Letter to my Loved one Peace surronds me like an illuminous glow how it came to be this way i'll never quite know I like to think its because of you and all the little things you do I love you with all my breath and will love you always til death Thank you for being by my side and helping me to fight when i wanna run and hide Every time you say you're so glad you know me or when you say im smart, beautiful and funny i suddenly begin to glow and its all coz of you, you know. the pain i used to feel no longer seems real wiped away by loves hand forgotten now in a dreamland. I look back on our past and grin too many things to smile about, where to begin? I hope i never lose your warm embrace and never forget the sight of your face You are beautiful too at least thats how i see you So that is why i wrote this poetry and if its too gushy oh well sue me inspiration: my boyfriend because i love him and he has helped me heal my demons |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave ![]() Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | Letter to my Loved One: Not sure if it was intended, but I felt a serene sense of calm while reading this poem--which, in any work, is a plus if you can make a reader feel what they're reading. Excellent work, as always. ![]() |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | Mind blank I want to write a masterpiece But the words seem to escape me What to write about what to say I'm sure I'll figure it out along the way. Sometimes when my brain starts to freeze I start a poem and the words reach me Before I know it I've written a work of art And it's all from the heart I could write about sorrow but I'm not in that place I could write about having no smile on my face But to be honest I don't feel sorrow or pain I just feel happy and normal again. I suppose I could say to you all Do not be afraid if you fall Stand tall be proud and give peace and love Never take for granted your life, its a gift from above. Treat your fellow man with respect and generosity. With your time love and money give freely. Never a selfish word or a malicious deed Stop you from helping someone be freed. Think back to a time when you needed a friend When you felt like your life had to end. And remember how it felt when no help came to you Make sure that is something you never do. Offer a helping hand and a warm smile Always try to go the extra mile. Try to be an angel in disguise And watch the world change before your eyes. Merry Xmas to all and to all a goodnight. Yaay I wrote about something! |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | Bump I love this poem |
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