PunkBallet
Killjoy
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 7 | July 16th, 2008 at 07:58am
Dedicated to the memory of Casey Calvert 1981-2007
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Ma fente poignets saignent l'amour.
L'amour pour vous.
Pourquoi croyez-vous à pied?
La tristesse dans mes yeux.
Heartache dans mon âme.
Pourquoi avez-vous abandonner?
Sur la seule chose qui ne mérite pas d'être en train de laisser tomber?
Ma lèvres carquois.
Vos yeux flash douleur.
Lèvres de la tromperie.
Je suis désolé. |
nilrebna.
Awake and Unafraid
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 13115 | July 16th, 2008 at 08:18am hey, this is really nice
even though there are some grammatical mistakes
but it's beautiful :] |
PunkBallet
Killjoy
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 7 | July 16th, 2008 at 10:53am Yea, I can admit... my grammer = not so good. lol. But I am glad you like it. It was almost like I wasnt thinking when I wrote it. Like, I obviously had those feelings, but my fingers were moving faster than my head, ya know?  |
blow
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 1137 | July 19th, 2008 at 09:26pm I really like it. I only understood about half of it, but I still like it. |
mychemicalcoffee
Joining The Black Parade
Age: 28
Gender: -
Posts: 237 | July 20th, 2008 at 08:49am harly understand it but it's good |
