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My Iced Friendship...By Sam Wright

Lie To Me
Fabulous Killjoy
Lie To Me
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 163
August 17th, 2008 at 04:31pm
Just poems that i wrote...
I appreaciate any comments...
I would like to improve...



Friends are the family,
That you choose for yourself,
They are the most valuble thing,
Beyond all the worlds wealth.

Friends are the people,
Who help when you fall,
They help you stay strong,
When you are sad and feel small.

Friends are the crowd,
Where you'll always belong,
Not matter what you wear,
Or your favourite song.

Friends are the ones,
Who are always there,
They help when you cry,
And always care.

Friends are the world,
They help make it go round,
They are the greatest thing,
That has ever been found.

A Slow Poison

Glug, glug,
Down it goes,
A slow poison,
which no-one knows.

Sence, feelimgs,
Have disappeared,
A big blur,
Worsens the feared.

Swaying, crashing,
A moving floor,
But still they drink,
More and more.

Uncontrolable addiction,
Ends you in a hospital bed,
But still you can't stop,
So now you are dead.


A single tear,
Lies on my cheek,
I stare at the face,
That will never speak.

I read the story,
The one of my past,
I start to wonder,
If our friendship will last.

Each memory captured,
Each different choice,
I wonder if it would be different,
If i had used my voice.

I remember my past,
Captured over time,
Everyone has memories,
Photo's are mine.

Never Let Go

Bad times,
And good.
You always understood.
Double trouble,
Climbing trees,
As far as we could,
People always suspicious,
When we were trying to be good.
Bad arguments,
Broke us apart,
We each said things,
That stabbed our hearts.
I'll say sorry,
'Cause what I said was low,
You may not need me,
But I'll never let go.

Thank You

I want to say thank you,
For the message you are giving,
Becasue you have saved my friend,
And made my life worth living.

I'm not your biggest fan,
But i know it's thanks to you,
That my friend is still with me,
I know this is true.

You saved her from the darkness,
And helped her throught her strife,
And thanks to you, MCR,
She is still in my life.


Just out of my grasp,
Lies a far off place,
Where i can end the lies,
And their disgrace.

A single voice,
Helps guide my way,
Over the mountains of fear,
Through the ocean of dismay.

For the final passage,
I must take to the sky,
To overcome the disappointment,
I'll spread my wings and fly.
invisible monsters.
Bleeding on the Floor
invisible monsters.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 1759
August 17th, 2008 at 04:57pm
oh wow! these are really fantastic(:

my favorite is the last one, Wings. there's so much emotion,,and it paints a cool picture in my mind. I reeaallyy like your writing!
Lie To Me
Fabulous Killjoy
Lie To Me
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 163
August 18th, 2008 at 04:30am
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 42
August 28th, 2008 at 01:07am
I really like all of them. No improvement needed. I really like wings. It's great.
goodbye blue sky
Always Born a Crime
goodbye blue sky
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 6461
August 28th, 2008 at 09:08am
I also like the last one very mucho (=
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 551
September 1st, 2008 at 03:03am
theyre really good. i like the last one and the photos ones.