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Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 23rd, 2008 at 08:05pm
Our Wonderful Freakin' Relationship
You scream at me,
And I scream right back.
And now my heart,
Is something black.
You pulled it out,
And ripped it through.
You could never understand,
What you put me through.
I try to mend,
My broken heart.
But the strings come undone,
And it falls apart.
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Table of Content: Page 2!
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The Accident 10/23/08
Click 10/24/08
Dancing For You 10/25/08
A Eulogy, I suppose 10/27/08 |
Teach Me To Drown Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 102 Gender: - Posts: 484 | September 24th, 2008 at 08:29pm THESE ARE SO DAMN AMAZING!!!!!!
NICE JOB!!!
even though ive proberly read them somewhere before haha
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Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 25th, 2008 at 06:57am Teach Me To Drown:THESE ARE SO DAMN AMAZING!!!!!!
NICE JOB!!!
even though ive proberly read them somewhere before haha
Thanks alex! |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | October 22nd, 2008 at 08:26pm The Accident (Under revision please comment)
It was over in a second.
But lasted forever.
In the taxi.
Smelling of leather.
We sit in romantic silence.
You smile at me.
I smile back.
You lean in for the kiss.
How I hope it will never end.
Your hot lips,
Press against mine.
Forever embraced.
Thud,
I hit the ceiling.
I'm engulfed in fiery confusion.
everything. spinning.
I awaken.
Bloody.
Torn.
Is search for you.
Franticly.
Through the rubble.
I tumble down,
By your side.
I hold your lifeless form,
Against my chest.
Tears merge with blood.
Which merges with asphalt.
Why wont you answer my calls of anguish.
Just please answer me, one word.
Grasped and supported by hands.
To shocked to stand.
They pull you from my grasp.
It happened in a second.
But lasted forever. |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | October 24th, 2008 at 02:12pm Click
Don't.
I wouldn't.
You did.
You read the poem.
Samara.
Will come.
7 days.
Your dead.
Bahaha.
Your doomed.
*click* |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | October 25th, 2008 at 10:00am Dancing For You
Dancing in the rain.
Screaming.
I'm insane.
All I want is you back.
But you are gone.
Your love I lack.
But suddenly your aurora surrounds me.
I feel you there.
You have found me.
We dance in the rain.
Our spirits as one.
I feel you here.
My sorrow is done. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | October 25th, 2008 at 11:11pm Mm, I do enjoy your style.
It certainly gives every work a punch. xD
Excellent work. |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | October 26th, 2008 at 08:12pm MyChemicalBlack:Mm, I do enjoy your style.
It certainly gives every work a punch. xD
Excellent work. Thanks. If never gotton a sincere complement since the only other person that comments knows i know where they live xD |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | October 27th, 2008 at 07:41pm A Eulogy, I Suppose
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Your last few days,
Were pretty tough.
Until it smoked you out,
In one last puff.
I was there,
A girl so young.
I watched you die,
Of a cancerous lung.
I sat with you,
Until they took me away.
I heard them tell daddy,
You'd be dead by the end of the day.
I run back to you,
I lay a kiss upon your head.
Then you soar to heaven,
Right off your deathbed.
(R.I.P Papa) |
xxMy_Chem_Cutiexx Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 139 | October 30th, 2008 at 10:13pm wow i really like your poems and style!
your an awesome writer! |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | November 4th, 2008 at 11:29am xxMy_Chem_Cutiexx:wow i really like your poems and style!
your an awesome writer! Thanks! I apriciate (sp?) it. |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | November 19th, 2008 at 09:12pm Rainy with a Chance Of Suicide
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See the bloodied window.
Got through the bloodied door.
Go down the bloodied hallway.
And find find you bloodstained on the floor.
Beautiful bloodstained girl.
I dont even know your name.
I killed you on a whim.
Just part of my little game.
Something did surprise me.
When they found you down the hall.
Your husband bloodstained next to you.
The bullet wound told them all.
He loved you quite alot.
I guess I killed him too.
Because when he saw you bloodstained there.
He only wanted to be with you. |
Teach Me To Drown Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 102 Gender: - Posts: 484 | November 20th, 2008 at 04:45pm DAMN!
they get better every time i dont read them in class!
you are an amazing poet |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | November 20th, 2008 at 05:37pm Fantastic. i really enjoy your poems!! :] |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | November 20th, 2008 at 06:24pm Thanks guys |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | November 20th, 2008 at 08:43pm Agh, how'd I miss two of your poems!?
Pardon my lateness, I'm prone to cronic laziness.
*ahem*
I love the imagery I get when reading your poems.
They're very good and always deliver.
Nice work. |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | November 20th, 2008 at 09:09pm hehehe thanks. I cant even keep up with your poems. U pop em out so quickely its amazing. Im about 5 behind heehehe. Partially cuz im lazy. *gos to read poems* |
DieDoctorPepper Killjoy
Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 5 | November 21st, 2008 at 09:59am I found your poetry to be extremely enjoyable..... |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | November 21st, 2008 at 07:35pm thank you. OHEMGEE! Docter pepper is in my fave 5! |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | November 21st, 2008 at 07:40pm Rehab
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I think I'm going to rehab.
I need to go to rehab.
I may get better in rehab.
If I decide to go.
I know I'm going to rehab.
I've packed my bags for rehab.
I flushed the crack for rehab.
Now I will surely go.
I now I am in rehab.
I cut my wrists in rehab.
I'm quite depressed in rehab.
I'm at my all-time low.
I've decided to quit my rehab.
Jump off the roof in rehab.
Fall to my death in rehab.
Not before one last blow. |