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Teach Me To Drown
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 102
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Posts: 484 | November 21st, 2008 at 10:16pm
this is good
i know exactly what your getting at |
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 450 | November 22nd, 2008 at 08:28am Good... Alex is smart enough to get my poetry.  hehe |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
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Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | November 24th, 2008 at 06:05pm Mm, I like the repitition of rehab.
Usually that sort of thing bothers me, but you did it in a way that doesn't.
(If that made ANY sense, lol)
Nice work.  |
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 450 | November 26th, 2008 at 07:58pm MyChemicalBlack:Mm, I like the repitition of rehab.
Usually that sort of thing bothers me, but you did it in a way that doesn't.
(If that made ANY sense, lol)
Nice work. *is thankful for anyone to continually read her poetry* gracias senorita. |
Little Miss Mental
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1883 | November 26th, 2008 at 09:27pm Rehab...that's my favorite one so far I think. Love the repeticious sound at the end of the last lines, something amazing about your poetry. I absolutely love them all!!!! |
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 450 | November 27th, 2008 at 02:24pm thanks |
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 450 | December 20th, 2008 at 08:58pm You
The day life was taken away from you
All I did was pray for you
I took my life away for you
I bled, I bled away for you
On the floor I wait for you
I think of what I will say to you
But I can't find the words |
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 450 | January 25th, 2009 at 01:06am Having some technical difficulties, will get the next poem up soon as possible. |
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 450 | January 25th, 2009 at 01:07am The Lies You Told
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Vicious lies
Daughter cries
Vicious lies
Break family ties
Vicious lies
A part of me dies |
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 450 | February 7th, 2009 at 12:29am All That School Spirit
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A rainy campus before me
Mary Jane's whisperen in my ear now
Tellen me anything I wana hear now
A fuckin guns all ive got now
That porcelain girl
Oh that cheerleading whore
All that she's done to me
Well that won't happen anymore
Oh girl i cherished the terror
As you witnessed my face
Oh you cheerleading tramp
Even you die with such grace
One bullet left for you dear
Darling I saved it just for you
One to rip through your porcelain flesh
The bloods flowing and your through |
