My attempt in writing poetry...
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City Of Flames Killjoy Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 10 | Okay...*cracks knuckles and bends over computer*here goes... I Am Not Afraid To Keep On Living I used to be a depressed son, Who's problems weighed a ton, I tried to off myself again and again, All I wanted was to stop the pain. Cutting,shooting,nothing would do, I even tried to overdose too, They always found me in the end, Choking in blood or lying on the bend. They threw me in rehab,took away the key, I was stuck in here for history, It was a never ending nightmare, Where I could never rest without having a scare. Help me,please,I'm going insane, Trapped inside this psychotic brain, One way in,no way out, Locked inside without a doubt. One day,I managed to overhear, This song on the radio that made me tear. I am not afraid to keep on living, I am not afraid to walk this world alone, I realised this was all a mistake, So I picked up the phone. I called my folks to say I'm sorry, And that they didn't have to worry, Because when I came out six months later, I was much,much happier. It was all thanks to My Chemical Romance, They saved my life,that's true, If they weren't around to save lives, I wouldn't have a clue. So I'd like to end this silly rhyme, Without wasting anymore time, Thank you,MCR,thanks a lot, You guys are the reason that I fought. You saved my life with those two simple lines, Those words gripped my heart like vines, I'll never forget the advice you give, To save the lives of those who wanna live. So...how's that?Someone comment on this please.I'm just a beginner. |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | Its really good. =] Flows very well and had a lot of meaning. If this poem is true, I'm glad all is well. =] "Help me,please,I'm going insane, Trapped inside this psychotic brain, One way in,no way out, Locked inside without a doubt." I really like that part. X] Oh! And just a tip [so you wont get in trouble], if your going to keep posting poetry, post them in this same thread. X] Hope you have fun on INO. |
kasut sekolah Bleeding on the Floor Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1667 | I really like this poem It has a whole lot of meaning. Keep it up =) |
I.wish.i.wer.a.ghost Motor Baby Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 940 | i like it lots =] |
Tallulah Admin Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 16777215 | PLease remember to post all your poems in this thread from now on, It is now an anthology thread. If it isnt used in this way it will end up being deleted. Thanks. Lulah |
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