I Am But One ---poetry---mannaquin

I like that onee, short but powerful! Greattt

gracias. more soooooon

im uploading more tomorrow.

Wishing

Wishing is what keeps life on its toes
Wishing is what makes the earth flow
Wishing is what breaks your heart
Wishing is what hurts the most.

Dreaming

I fell asleep last night.
Where I woke up too late.
And everything I loved.
I began to hate.
But then i went to sleep
and what i dreamed
I forgot to miss
and what i dreamed came back to me.
and what i wanted resurfaced
and i woke up
and realized it was all a sad
sad
sad dream

Beat of my Heart

Twitters
Shidders
Chills
Blushes

Blood rushes to my skin.
Can you feel the beat?
The heart beat under my
Flushed flesh?
Flushed and blushed. Rosy red.

Thump thump.
Thump thump.
Beat beat
Beat beat
POUND.

Blood rushes to my skin
For you
Can you feel the love
Tingle inside me?
For you? for you.
Did you know that it's
For you? for you.
My love
For you? for you.
For you? for you.
Forever and always.

I'll love you.

Forever and always.

Untangle

i hate my life
i dont know why
it had to end this way
with so much heart ache,
and grief
and no grace,
so much hurt
so much pain
and no love.
so much truth and no love lies.
im hurt and im in a ball again
and i can't untangle.

Face to Face

face to face doesn't mean anything
to you.
oh no not you
face to faec doesn't mean anything.
doesnt matter how you break my heart
doesnt matter how many peices i have to pick up.
doesnt matter to you
sweep em up with your dirty lies
your sirty problems
let me wipe away my tears with your clothes.
let me cry my tears into you
let me rip your heart like mine
im down on the floor
looking in the mirror
i see somethign i shouldnt see
i see me
i see me bleeding on the floor from my heart. bleeding profucely.
dying
dying
gone.

Sorry if some of them are already posted or have bad punctuation and capitalization, I was trying to crank it out. I had work to do. I would love comments for editing my poems. Tell me what you think, what I should change or add or take away.
Have a great day.
-bexy

Hm, just a few minor errors.
Though, it didn't take away from the poems.
Still kickass as always, mon amie. xD

wishes:
> i wish we could fly to the moon
> i wish we could soar together
> i wish we could be
> i wish you would love me
> i wish you would let me love you
> i wish we could fly

I tried to heal your heart
I did the best I could,
but you wouldn't let me in,
while i was knocking on your door.

This story is sad to tell
and for me to feel as well
but i will patch the hole.
Tears as putty hugs to seal the deal.
But you wouldn't answer the door
So i couldn't heal it

You reverberated
And now Im shattered
and battered.
and left unwhole

but I'm happy to be with you if at all
I would fall without you
So don't be guilty
dont have heartache.
one broken heart is better than two.
This story is sad to tell.
but i've done it well.

Wow, loved how the last poem ended.
Killer, my friend, killer.

Good job on both the poems.

Wishing Well


Dip my hand in the wishing well
Hope everything turns out swell.
I wish we could fly to the moon
I wish we could soar together
I wish we could be
I wish you would love me
I wish you would let me love you
I wish we could fly.
I wish we could be together.
I wish .
I wish.
I wish.
I wish.

My Pillow
It still hurts.
Some nights are worse than others.
Some nights my pillow is wet
My heart is in half.
And some nights I don't mind the hurt.
I just accept it.
But most my pillow is wet.
My heart is broken
my stomach hurts and my mind races.
And thoughts of you pop in my head.

I Am Sorry


I’m sorry. I’m sorry.
I’m sorry I can’t live without you
I’m sorry I want to forget you.
but I can’t
I’m sorry that you hurt me
I’m sorry that I don’t want to hurt you
I’m sorry that I’m in pain
I’m sorry I still love you
I’m sorry. I’m sorry.
I can't help it.
I can't live without you
my world would be nothing without you.
I can't handle it and I’m sorry.
I’m so sorry.

I enjoyed the last poem, "I am Sorry".
I loved the emotion. ^_^

Excellent work, mon amie.