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sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
February 28th, 2009 at 03:25am
Thanks you guys. ;D
you made me so happy.
(:
calculated sacrifice
Shotgun Sinner
calculated sacrifice
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Posts: 7807
February 28th, 2009 at 06:02am
song?
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
February 28th, 2009 at 06:04am
maybe. if you can fit a tune to it,
it'd be cool~. (:
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Shotgun Sinner
calculated sacrifice
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Posts: 7807
February 28th, 2009 at 08:04am
will do, bb

could i maybe rent your guitar for a couple of days? Tehe
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
February 28th, 2009 at 08:56am
I'm back to business, but not the same old one.
Dear government, can you hire someone so young?
or maybe I've become just a little too hopeful,
A little too loud, a little too cruel.

Downing this shot glass of ink,
held my chest and taught me to think.
Killed the pen and caught my breath,
danced the paper that read of death.

So much for a disco on my teeth,
licking off lines that used to breathe,
Shaking off nonsense for a night with you,
caught up in the color of a rare blue moon.

Do you believe in me?
I don't.




kind of weird. nonsensical. lame. D;
but would appreciate comments and criticism.
and yes.
You may rent ze guitar. xD
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Shotgun Sinner
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Age: 37
Gender: Male
Posts: 7807
February 28th, 2009 at 09:06am
i liked it. this, i can make into a song x]
but the whole disco on teeth sounds kinda funky.
i imagined a disco ball on your tooth xD

YAY, when? OuO
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
February 28th, 2009 at 09:08am
when you come to my house on MONDAY~! lol.
yeah, maybe I should change it.
and maybe start posting my songs here so you can like... not have to read my crappy handwriting. xD

okay, probably last for tonight.


smiles are just wounds without the blood,
and every laugh is just a sob with less water.
What an uproar, like screaming without the recording,
When tasting make-up, it's just toxic with a label,
much like you.

Cut the joke, just stop pretending.
There's no film in this mirror anymore.
All I want to see is a crack right down
the middle of this unplugged heart,
choking a breaking stereo.

Just tattoo your words across your lips,
And seal your eyes shut - what you can't see won't hurt you.
Just listen and appreciate the noise,
Like you're looking at a blinded Da Vinci.

Your song was the best motivation,
But you didn't need a doctor anyway.
oh, no, I'm fine.
at least in the stitches of my mind.
Holding down the tap was easier than you.

I'm just going to steal your smiles, if that's okay,
besides, they weren't your best clothes anyway.
In truth, you're better in black and blue,
and fashionistas approve of my humble opinion.

And Im just going to steal your laughs, they won't be missed.
Just back it up with this wreck, you'll be fine.
But you can keep your make - up; i'm considerate.
you need it after all.
playground eyes.
Awake and Unafraid
playground eyes.
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 14066
February 28th, 2009 at 10:15am
Aimee, I love all of your work! You are seriously great at writing poems, because I don't particularly like poems in general, but I think yours are awesome!
hug xoxo ♥
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
March 1st, 2009 at 02:44am
thanks, Alex! hug
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Shotgun Sinner
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Age: 37
Gender: Male
Posts: 7807
March 1st, 2009 at 06:34am
bb, i srsly love your stuffs. <3 we has got to be the band with the funkiest, poshiest lyrics ever xD
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
March 7th, 2009 at 11:12pm
Rephrase "I Love You"
I'm on cloud nine, but it's raining.
Attention, audience, we've got a fire again.
Right now. My heart can't take the ringing
that my ears listen to with the music they feign.

Is heaven just another fiction?
A flawless dream in the closet with you and me?
So close your eyes according to my diction.
and just sleep.

Dear diary, the pen is off and flying.
A sleepless night with you is just the cure for this.
Lock it up, let the ink continue crying.
Just kill the joke (the lie) and blow me a kiss.

Color's just a monotone.
Painted rainbow with stolen emotions.
Singing with the dial tone.
coz you're not home.

And I'm on cloud nine but it's raining.
Could you turn the weather off?




some really old stuff I wrote last year. seems like I'm going backwards. comments? (:
wasted youth.
Demolition Lover
wasted youth.
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 19899
March 8th, 2009 at 07:19am
this is all so beautiful, aimee.
you are so talented!
believing.
Salute You in Your Grave
believing.
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Posts: 2318
March 8th, 2009 at 10:10am
Your poems, are really, just really awesome. Wowness.
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
March 9th, 2009 at 09:59am
thank you, bb, Billie and Ryan. <333
I'm actually on a block on what to write right now.
Hopefully I can update with more poems really soon. xD
But for now, I'll just put up some stuff I wrote and recovered from the year back.


eating bullets

Is there anything more tempting than that color?
I could find a few.
That shade looks great on your shirt, by the way -
No other red has been that divine,
or that dangerous.

But that's glass on circles,
Stripping off the ceiling,
Puppets without strings, but I could tell you how to move.
What's more sensual than the way you stare?
Flesh on Marble.

What a cold night it is,
but you're ice.
Just not melting in my arms.
Pulling things never felt so good,
until it was an unmentionable in my drawer.

And isn't your expression just the best?
I could never let you go at this point.
Not after the way you're mouth's shaped around that syllable.
Caught in the moment.

Oh honey,
surprise,surprise.




I do believe my works now are a little better than that of last year's, considering this. xD
I don't even remember seriously thinking while I was writing this.
comments? (:
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
March 19th, 2009 at 04:48am
This is not a poem,
but a love song in secret.
I caught the world on tape,
and watched without regret.

She said, "step aside,"
make way for the moon -
like a classic lady,
caught up in a monsoon.

Dressed in her vanity,
she is a work of art.
Wrapped in a disaster,
crawling closer to her heart.

This city's not waiting,
gravity pulled my eyes.
She is beautiful, she is broken.
She is perfect, she is ice.



at the time, the song "Tiffany Blews" by Fall Out Boy was playing in my head. some word choices are credited to them and their absolutely amazing lyrics.

comments? (:
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
April 6th, 2009 at 09:52am
We're singing for the movement to stop its marching.
Halt at the store to pick up all their arms.
Revolutionary joke at the last point and breaking.
Shooting golden words from the mouths of sapphire stars.
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
April 6th, 2009 at 09:53am
I am how I am - spelling love like fake.
Slipped her aroma down your throat.
I became a winner when you won that stutter.
Losing lips all on the same boat.
Helena Rush.
Awake and Unafraid
Helena Rush.
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 10158
April 27th, 2009 at 05:41pm
Aimee is amazing at poetry.
Truefact.
Honestly, I love how you word everything and the imagery that comes with every single line you read.
They're so amazing Aimee, I'm really glad you posted them here! In Love
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
May 12th, 2009 at 08:41am
new chorus for some song.
total weirdness. xD

atomic touch leads to nuclear night.

supernova!
she went down with the sky,
falling up, and in love,
going round in the stars.

mass explosion!
walk and talk like an end,
losing lips like a trend.
young and wild,
little sweet thing.
Helena Rush.
Awake and Unafraid
Helena Rush.
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 10158
May 12th, 2009 at 09:13am
Cheese Aimee, that's totalllyy awesomee.
You're really talented at this Shocked I'm jealous *o*