Whispered Thoughts
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calculated sacrifice Shotgun Sinner Age: 37 Gender: Male Posts: 7807 | won't do you any good, you'll be out. don't forget to wake up the sun early your screams'll echo all across the streets but don't take me down, no, don't take me down. You'll see that i'll be waiting at the top of that rocket I'll be that single picture inside your locket. Have me, wear me over your heart Trying to open and see me is what's hard. If it takes too long for you to understand Just go and ask anyone, because you can But before going, listen to what I want you to do Pretend to love me, and I'll pretend with you |
calculated sacrifice Shotgun Sinner Age: 37 Gender: Male Posts: 7807 | If I said I wanted it to be you What would you say? If I said I wanted us to be it, What would you do? I wished something unexpected, but for different reasons, I knew There was only one reason I wanted to feel then The reason I thought you would too. I forgot how I remembered, thought I could break away from the truth. I lied to you, I know. If I didn't would you regret? You strayed away, it hurt. but if you didn't, you'd be dead. Our feelings and our wants didn't matter No, they didn't, not to them. I'll get over it, and so I say Tonight, tonight, no tears will be shed. Few things: .:it sounded like a romance poem .:it's not .:it seems really horrible to read. .:it is. .:i'd still like to know what you guys think though .: =D |
Raven_mystic.wolf Killjoy Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2 | Jared Joseph Leto.: Well Jared, Im very impressed of your poerted thoughts. I will put my peoms up to see how dark mine are as much are yours. I love to be friends with you. ttyl Amo te Kaiya |
gothicprincesses55 Killjoy Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 1 | wow the one about ur mom was amazing! u should win the poet of the month |
riot reality Jazz Hands Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 295 | Hey, I just read most of your poems. Just wanted to say a few things... So, I'll say them. x] Well, wow. I really loved the “My name is Izzy” poem. It gave me goose-bumps and seriously, I almost cried. And I usually don’t like short poems, but the “Like a kite” one was really good, and makes me wanna try to write a really short one… Kudos on that =] The “Fate has us round and round” poem… I don’t know. I liked it, but I couldn’t tell you why. Kinda weird… but, eh. I just liked it. And the “One last chance to keep up” one, I really liked it too. I wish I’d had that poem back in March, it kinda describes a situation I was in. Those were my favoritests =D You're really good at writing too. Grrawr... yeah, so, just thought I'd tell you that those were awesomazingness. |
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