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James Owen. Sullivan
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August 6th, 2009 at 11:01am
Pros: I really love the contrast and the general composition of the photo
Cons: I would've maybe cropped at the horse's chest, showing a little bit of the leg makes it look a little... incomplete? im not quite sure how to describe what I mean


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fun ghoul
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October 3rd, 2009 at 02:20am
pros: i think it's a very beautiful piece. i like the black and white and how the subject is uncentered. very good job.
cons: I SEE NONE.

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cliche, i know.
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In The Murder Scene
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October 3rd, 2009 at 02:44pm
Cliche isn't always a bad thing. But you are caught in the middle here. The pro is that you have a nice subject and the sepia tone gives it the romance you were looking for. However, as a con, it seems you were not sure if you wanted a silhouette or a well-lit object, and your image suffers as a result. Perhaps if you'd turned that rose toward the light source, or used a reflective surface to bounce light onto the face of the object, your image yould have more impact.

Uhh, I don't really have any images worth sharing but I have to, so.

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teen spirit.
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October 22nd, 2009 at 01:06am
pros: this is a very nice photo. the colours are nice and just bright enough so that it's vibrant but not so bright it hurts the eyes to look at. x] the positioning of the baby in the basket is very nice too.
cons: i honestly don't see any. i tried finding one for a good while.

do forgive my failed attempt at a critique, i'm still a beginner when it comes to photography, but i'm trying.

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malibu.
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November 3rd, 2009 at 11:36pm
Pros: Well first off, your subject is adorable :3
Also, I really love the lighting. Like, how it fades from light to dark horizontally over the photo.
Cons: The photo feels a little square. I'm not sure if you cropped it
or if that's just the way it's set on your camera, but I feel like it should extend longer on the right side.
That might just be me being picky though, because I always have my camera set on the 3:2 ratio.

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James Owen. Sullivan
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James Owen. Sullivan
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November 29th, 2009 at 10:43am
Pros: I really like the lighting, and the composition of it, it fits really nicely and it suits black and white :
cons: I'm not sure if the angle of the photo quite flows with the rest of it...

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December 6th, 2009 at 02:22am
pros: the lighting is really nice. and so is the angle you've taken
cons: the blur is kinda distracting, and the right part is a little too dark.

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James Owen. Sullivan
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James Owen. Sullivan
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December 6th, 2009 at 08:59am
pros: assuming that you took that photo as this is a thread to get criticism on photography- as the thread description, title, and all the pictures on this page suggest- it's a very lovely photo.
cons: you made it look lke a banner.

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December 7th, 2009 at 12:50am
lifeless shine., please do me a favor and explain whether you mistook this thread as something different, or you really did take that photograph and alter it. I'll just remove the post if I don't hear back from you by tomorrow (12/8 ).
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December 7th, 2009 at 07:16am
Oh my, I'm sorry! I read the thread title wrong. I thought I was in Comment On The Graphic Above thread. I didn't notice since it almost had the same title.
I wasn't being careful. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry for the inconvenience... I promise it won't happen again...
Can I replace the picture with now a photograph I took? Then can I post it at the other thread where I was suppose to put it...? Again, I'm sorry... I'll be more careful this time... I'm so sorry... ):
mona disappeared.
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December 8th, 2009 at 06:02pm
Cross My Heart:


pros: i love the vivid colors from the trees and the composition is cute. the bottom photo is my favourite. i really like the idea you came up with, with the sheet as it was real snow.
cons: not that i can think of, no.

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i took this photo two months ago.
Dear Tokyo...
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December 15th, 2009 at 09:33pm
pros: Other than the fact that is absolutely adorable, I think the lighting and coloring really bring it out in a stark and crisp way. It draws the eye in and keeps it there. It also gives the picture alot of depth to.
cons: I've never been one for black and whites, especially on dogs that are already dark colors. For some reason I feel it takes away from the composition. I often find black and white pictures making no sense, but perhaps its just me and my silly logic.

Okay, so here's my lame excuse for a photo:
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fun ghoul
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December 19th, 2009 at 09:16am
pros: the angle is quite nice
cons: it's a little too bright on top and the colors are a bit boring


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happy holidays everyone!
malibu.
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December 22nd, 2009 at 05:06pm
Pros: The lights are colourful and bright and feel very festive.
Cons: I don't like how it's half b/w and half colour. It seems a bit uneven and makes the object feel like part of the backround.
Also, I think maybe you could try focus on one certain part of the object, scince this is a close shot.
Or maybe try a different angle to include more of it.

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Missing Zero
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December 27th, 2009 at 12:42pm
pros :i like the angle and the composition, the sun flare has been caught nicely
cons: nothin is in focus and the people just seem to dark imo

i'm trying something new
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idk. my bff jill?
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December 27th, 2009 at 03:46pm
pros - i love how the red stands out against the black background
cons - but, i think it's just a little too dark

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The Original Bob.
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December 28th, 2009 at 02:39pm
I really like the touch of purple in the bow on the light, but personally I think that there's too much open space on the right side. I really like the photograph though.

this is probably the third shot I took with my new camera, so forgive if it's not great.
James Owen. Sullivan
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James Owen. Sullivan
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December 29th, 2009 at 10:13am
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No page exists at your destination address, but the deviantART home page
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The Original Bob.
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December 30th, 2009 at 10:39am
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Frnk iero.
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January 5th, 2010 at 06:36pm
wrong thread.