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Fabulous Killjoy
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August 15th, 2009 at 02:46pm
My fair ino folk i present you with... me. comments / heartbreakingly critical feedback welcome and wanted. thx for giving a damn
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Fabulous Killjoy
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August 15th, 2009 at 02:47pm
my first poem ever shared with anyone take a look
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Fabulous Killjoy
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Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 152
August 15th, 2009 at 02:52pm
White Washed

Could this copper fill my head;
this formaldehyde fill our hearts.
Take me from this steel-framed bed.
pointed nails torn apart.

That vail of truth spills up from the room.
casts phantoms that light ways to my tomb.
We'll find a way;
and through it all so thick that that you can't see.
We'll find a way;
so that we can be free.

We trudged along to find a deeper gray.
So truth be told,
if you can bear to hear.
We love the taste,
but we just can't stand to stare
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Your Ghost.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440
August 15th, 2009 at 04:31pm
This is really great, honestly. I'm looking forward to more(:
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Fabulous Killjoy
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Gender: Male
Posts: 152
August 15th, 2009 at 04:35pm
thanks workin on it
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Fabulous Killjoy
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Age: 29
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Posts: 152
August 15th, 2009 at 04:44pm
Skin

Why do we have skin?
So that we are human.
do angels not have skin?

Tell me of wrath,
so that i may be pure
do angels not taste flesh?

Tell me of your oblivion,
so that i may be righteous.
do angels not fear dark?

Come to me world so that i may know imperfection,
for i am an angel.
And so i may know sight;
I have no skin.
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Fabulous Killjoy
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Posts: 152
August 15th, 2009 at 04:48pm
not really a poem, but none the less a little writing im working on... thoughts? it's hard to know the birth of a good train of thought apart from a dead end when trying to write, cause they all are dead ends. soooooo i leave it to you INO.

We killed a bird today, i didn't want to, i didn't mean to. The car climbed the hill, it's the same hill, its always been there. Then a thud, i was caught in a transparent daze. soon darkness followed oblivion. then it fell. the bird. dead. The hill was no more, and the sea spoke.
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Your Ghost.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440
August 15th, 2009 at 05:03pm
Wooooaah(: Niceeee.
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Fabulous Killjoy
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Posts: 152
August 15th, 2009 at 05:05pm
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wasting light.
Always Born a Crime
wasting light.
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Gender: Female
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August 16th, 2009 at 11:17pm
these are all really good. Very Happy
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Fabulous Killjoy
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Posts: 152
September 7th, 2009 at 05:38pm
sorry for my leave of absence my life was a little crazy for a while there anyway i got new stuff whata ya think

Processions
Skies filled with broken glass, aching marrow held fast
Though I Thought I saw a procession
skies can crumble, our feet stumble
and just a shadow of my mind
that I only can wear
cause it’s that ticking of a clock
that you only have to fear
and on some vertical horizon
I heard a scream
And through a dream
I saw a procession

In this world where
The guilty always come home
With perforated hearts
Lovers always die alone
Feet tremble
Where we walk on wire
Ash meets snow
This flame is our fire
We will not give in
We will not fall

Those warm summer nights
where we threw this aside
and begged to the devil just to
live through this sight

those quite suburb streets
that we rotted underneath
angels shed their skin
so that they can be human

Hasta
<3<3
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Fabulous Killjoy
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September 7th, 2009 at 06:41pm
this is a line or two my fiend Aaon spouted today... just thought it was interesting. mull it over- thats a funny word mull muuuullllllll mauuuuauauaul... sorry guys...

Ego is in the air
it bonds with oxygen
then nitrogen
the funny thing is
we chose to breath

<3<3 mull haha
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Your Ghost.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440
September 8th, 2009 at 09:45pm
Amazing workk, of course. (:
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Fabulous Killjoy
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Posts: 152
September 9th, 2009 at 05:18pm
thx means more than u think to me

<3<3
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Fabulous Killjoy
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September 9th, 2009 at 07:29pm
An Ant And Water (the unraveling of a mind)

How does such reverie my eyes withhold;
A decent to such an unforgiving partition.
As Fluid and shaking, as the surface is cold.
For such a exterior cannot be stalled,
From giving in to force unlike,
My mortal fancy can contend.
For beast, or angel, or flesh as it might,
Could not deprive such tears of it’s pretence.
To douse a whim on a bank held before sight.

Belated now or far too late,
Comes the wire, which held fast,
Of such minor adherence to self.
To custody found in the depths,
Now as last, if cry it can.
And so it does if menace beget,
Such a feeble figure

Now panic, rage, trust, fear.
A deluge between a gasp or steel,
Bereft on the edge he stood.
For if not so bold did his feet tremble,
Such an ant would not have found,
A mausoleum so reflective,
As waters engulf!

Thanks for reading guys <3<3
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Fabulous Killjoy
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Posts: 152
September 10th, 2009 at 05:06pm
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Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Your Ghost.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440
September 10th, 2009 at 08:15pm
Your words simply..blow me away. I wish I had at least a bit of the talent you do. I'll be back for more Bye
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Fabulous Killjoy
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September 10th, 2009 at 08:37pm
ha trust me you do...
thanks again for giving me a reason to write
<3<3
Pansy Wayero
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September 17th, 2009 at 10:51am
wow gd start i love white washed! keep it up.
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Fabulous Killjoy
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September 18th, 2009 at 09:33pm
thx working on more