my poetry/ songish thing
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xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | How can love be possible if no one person finds love by them self how is it possible for one person to live a life unloved by them self how is it possible for one person to feel something someone else can't, wont, doesn't feel how is it possible i don't think it is for some maybe but not for long not until they collapse with emptiness in their heart where love, life, and happiness should be but sadly isn't... but sadly never will be |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | another poem: the trees were green the grass was green and all the flowers were bloomed but still to her this all resembled doom the trees were all different colors the grass was terning brown but in her world her hate filled world she always wore a frown the trees carried on changing colors and so did the ground but for this young girl no help or hope was ever found |
famouslastwordsxoxo Killjoy Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 8 | My Depression: It's only caused by not having you Nothing is real anymore It's all just a lie Someday you'll wake up from your dream and realize the only one you have left is me When you tell me to leave you alone I wish I could but I'm not that strong I wish someone would need me the way I need A little you could say a little too often a little more each and every day But you never notice me You did but, I think I was being used For your own little enjoyment I was your toy no matter how much you broke me You always could fix me when you wanted to play again this makes no sense this poem I'm trying to say I love |
Jenny. Moderator Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 19720 | Um, famouslastwordsxoxo, this is xxtoryxx's thread for their poems.... |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | another poem sry i have been busy...: This is agony or agony to me drunk around this time of year sadness grief that is how we are to be described why cant i cry as i wish i could mind dancing through out blue to gold living in the words of them saying I do still being me but changing feeling untrue all because of this blue... puke in the car on the car or so i have been told she weeps for him blaming him for problems that i shall keep unknown mentally drifting...dancing in a mixture of uneven steps tumbling in this blue that i wish you could feel too sry if it is allitlle rough i wro te it about sumthing that just happened |
misa misa. Shotgun Sinner Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 8241 | hey you have some nice poems here. A little rough around the edges, but the ideas are good. I especially liked mentally drifting...dancing in a mixture of uneven steps tumbling in this blue that i wish you could feel too You had some lovely imagery there. Don't be afraid to use punctuation. Full stops, commas and question marks tell the reader where to take a breath, and where a sentence ends. You don't have to just uses line changes, which are often more for emphasis and pattern. This is something that took me a little while to get the hang of when i started, so i thought i'd just give you the heads up. Sorry, if that sounded a little harsh. the ideas are lovely, very emotive. Keep it up. |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | i wrote this poem for my mum on Christmas You hate snow, That is simple to know But… The first snow of the season Is magical even though. A cold wet kiss of frozen rain, Upon your cheek, May never be the same As if cold soft cotton Was gracefully dancing As it floated down from the sky. You sit warmly inside Indulging yourself with gluten free Christmas pie. A thick layer of white sheet Is forming on the ground, So gentle it doesn’t even make a sound. A simple kiss of frozen rain As you can see May never be the same. |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | another poem they could feel my frustration with every retched word i spoke. i choked with fear and wished they would disappear, how dare they say they didn't move any of my things, for if they didn't then why aren't they there, for if they didn't then why am i welcoming in new despair? soaked with anger, only wishing they weren't here, there when i danced the horrid dance of sorrow, or when i wish for the next day, tomorrow. there when flew away on a paranoia train, and didn't come back ever again. one place i didn't welcome them to is the place of my happiness, the place of my rich enthusiasm, the soil to my garden, allowing happiness to flourish bright, laughing, and true. protecting the vulnerable key to all my precious secrets, and my dieing wounded heart. for that is the place everything starts. |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | i haven't written in awhile here is what i have now: A word from the undead, for that is what i am. my heart bleeds with sorrow and despair, oh please oh please beware. if you no the words of the vampire curse you no it's not wise to let your heart wander to petrified unknown. As i walk through the grave yard i cant help but let myself wonder why i can see the corps and rotten bones of awakened slumber? arms reaching up to grab my youth, reaching up from the depths of the earth. their only goal to cause perilous hurt. No intentions of saving my soul, even though that's what keeps me whole. love is far from their lifeless hearts as i am dragged violently back, from a bite of poisonous reality. eyes piercing into my soul, piercing into my thoughts, thinking all the same... my my i have been caught. |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | hey umm another poem: i had it with me all yesterday and the days before that. i loved it with all my heart, but as i walked in and out of the streets of my life it got left behind. and i saw it, sitting helplessly on the side walk a little way back. but i didn't dare retrieve it, for it was the one who left me... yeah we are doing this kind of poetry in school, so yeah there is a hidden meaning and what not, |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | a nother poem: DEAR DADDY, last night i cried myself to sleep. and even now i weep. in my dreams my heart is suffering, deepening my need for you (yes i cried for you) my heart is like a baby missing his mommy (or maybe his daddy) for the first time in his life. my heart is like a fish out of water it just shrivels and dies. my heart is like a plant withering with lack of rain. i cease to exist beyond your memory. (but i am getting better-happier) i am a ghost with out you. a corps with out a tomb stone. i need you now more than ever. i miss you. she is alone without you here by her side. my dear my dad life is so empty i fear. now i am on my knees, begging your forgiveness. even though it wont change a thing. i wish you could come to me. but you can't. you're dead but always there's a flower in your memory. but always there's a memory for a flower. thanks for being my flower, daddy. |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | rawr means i llove you in dinosaur... RAWR |
xxtoryxx Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 51 | rawr means i llove you in dinosaur... RAWR |
K.K. Bleeding on the Floor Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 1787 | All your poems are really touching and full of real emotion.. You're really talented :} |
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