Our Eli of Sorrows
Killjoy
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 89 | September 22nd, 2009 at 01:50pm
Give me a pale face
Pump my blood out in excitement
C'mon let's do it!
Punch bruises in my skin
Grab a razor and draw lines on the surface
Make my eyes look black and deadly
Brake some bones
Make me look scary
Dress me up deadly!
Hang me up a tree
Sink a knife through me
Push me to an edge of a building
I know you'll love it
Make me look like death
Dress me up dead
Slit my wrists
Cut my throat
Dress me up dead
I know you'll have fun doing it |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | October 8th, 2009 at 12:17pm oh wow! wow wow wow. i like it. me persnally would think it would be absolutely mindblowing if it rhymed and flowed off the tongue HOWEVER it is still brilliant! the imagery used is great! wow wow wow cant wait to see morw |
