my poem/ song
| Author | Message |
|---|---|
| aredreception Killjoy  Age: 37 Gender: Male Posts: 2 | Cause I really wanna know How pain tastes mixed with glory Down at the old rock and roll show Maybe I’ll play the victim In some post modern murder play Maybe I’ll be the hero When it comes down to judgment day So say so long yeah, so say good night You say I’m wrong yeah I say your right Sometimes it’s just the roll of the dice Now I’m plucking the petals From my old six-shooter gun The color of red hot metals pierce someone else’ son I will say a prayer for you now I’m kneeling at your side words that seem to cut straight through the places where you hide So say so long yeah, so say good night You say I’m wrong yeah I say your right Sometimes it’s just the roll of the dice Hear the sirens fast approaching Oh such music they do sing Feel the dark it is encroaching with the solace it can bring Now I won’t sing a love song Cause I don’t know how any go And don’t you dare say that I was wrong Or you’ll pay the ferryman’s toll So say so long yeah, so say good night You say I’m wrong yeah I say your right Sometimes it’s just the roll of the dice Now come on dear old mother Don’t you get tired of your skin or is it too much to smother All those kids that you call kin So here is my last reprieve From your sick and twisted ways I won’t shed a tear I will not grieve I’ll look on to better days So say so long yeah, so say good night You say I’m wrong yeah I say your right Sometimes it’s just the roll of the dice |
| misa misa. Shotgun Sinner  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 8241 | this does have a lot more of a song structure than a classical poetry one the 'yeahs' in the chorus threw me a little bit; but because they made me try to think of what the tune would be rather than just reading it as a poem. I liked the idea though. It was a nice opening, especially. |
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