Disenchanted Re-make

After I'm Gone

I found my reason to breathe
when the crowd's roar set love free
before the sweet innocense
gave way to sick misery
and when we all had arrived
it was our lives we could see.

if life had lasted,
would we have flourished?
or would we have fasted?
well, ours can't be nourshed
so when dusk becomes dawn
will you remember me after i'm gone?

with in a secret escape
we found some trouble to make
and after the cops gave chase
we laughed untill our lungs would ache
consumed by snow covered heat
it was my first time awake

if life had lasted
would we have flourished?
or would we have fasted?
well, ours can't be nourished
so when dusk becomes dawn
will you forget me after i'm gone?

as diamonds bite the skin
words of death twist and bend
with a life long fatal flaw
andn ot a thing for a mend
then life's greatest memory
is a sad song's perfect end.

if life had lasted
would we have flourished?
or would we have fasted?
well, ours can't be nourished
so when dusk becomes dawn
just remember me after i'm gone.


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Well, i wrote a story based on the song Disenchanted, and it turned out really good, so i have decided to begin re-writing it in hopes of getting it published maybe....some day...doubt it... but any ways, it ends up being a sort of...explanation of how the song Disenchanted came about. [in my imagination of course] and since I know i'd never get the rights to the song from MCR, i had to re-write the song Disenchanted all together. It would be super awsome if some one would read the story and give me any and all feedback/criticism/advice because i think that MCR fans could give me some kudos on how it turned out. so...if you you would like to read the story..... After I'm Gone [click and read please]
and please remember its being re-written right now, because it is so horribly written at the moment.