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Morefreshfruit
Killjoy
Morefreshfruit
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 15
February 13th, 2010 at 09:44pm
I can't say I'm too good at poems and such...but I love to do it! So here is my first poem ever. It's based on the story King of Warts.

The King of Warts

I’m the king of warts
That’s what they say
I hide away
Most everyday

Don’t look at me
I’m too ugly to see
Put on a black bag
And just let me be

There’s a wise man I hear
Who lives up near the sky
Maybe he’ll cure my illness
Or explain to me why

I travel uphill
With my bag and a staff
Expecting some wisdom
But he only laughed

I’m the king of warts
That’s what he said
Because fear of their judgment
I let myself grow dead

He said some will laugh
But some will be friends
Just give me the bag
And your sorrow will end

I’m the king of warts
That’s what they say
But I’m growing stronger
Each and every day

I would LOVE some feedback Smile
lolis12007
Really Not Okay
lolis12007
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 655
April 12th, 2010 at 08:14pm
well i think this is a very good poem Smile you shouldn't say you are not good at it clearly you are Smile