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Poems by The Quiet One.

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mindless.
Salute You in Your Grave
mindless.
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 2915
April 16th, 2010 at 07:09pm
Willow

I push your hanging branches aside
and expose your core,
gnarled and weathered
by feet and hands that grasp,
climbing ever higher.

As I walk toward you,
I am enveloped in silence
until something cracks underfoot;
glossy brown glass
would be better appreciated
somewhere else.

I place my hand upon
the nearest, sturdiest bough.
You're scarred,
by knives that pierce
almost as deep
as the words they form.

Dear Willow,
I see now why you weep.
You know only bad company,
and everything is short
from your point of view.
mindless.
Salute You in Your Grave
mindless.
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April 16th, 2010 at 07:40pm
Blue Sadness

Sadness is blue like the sea on the horizon late at night,
and also like the sky as the day is nearing its end.
It sinks in the pit of my stomach.
It reminds me of the times when I thought my face would freeze in a smile,
and it makes me wish it would've.
It makes me feel so cold and small and forgotten.
It makes me want to close my eyes and sleep forever.
kid from yesterday.
Bleeding on the Floor
kid from yesterday.
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 1265
April 17th, 2010 at 09:31am
Wow. I'm loving your writing style. I enjoyed these two plenty, especially Willow, and the ending for Blue Sadness is gorgeous. I've always found it difficult to wrap up my poems but I like how you do it for these two pieces, almost effortlessly. Looking forward to more of your work! (: (:
mindless.
Salute You in Your Grave
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April 19th, 2010 at 02:40pm
Australia

Under a starlit sky
Mourning doves and rattlesnakes
Sing to the daffodils
Bobbing on the waves
Clocks melt, but it makes no difference;
It is and always will be
Quarter to yesterday.
They bottle our dew-drop tears
And sell them to the Mission
In exchange for the sun
Lassoed red, burning hot,
Like that summer in a peach grove
Long ago...
I count the minutes backwards,
Surrounded by crooked salesmen
And winking geishas,
Surfacing just in time to watch
The blue stallion dance and sing;
The rhythmic heart of the Aboriginal drum
Lulling me to sleep
Forever
In a place of never
Just for you and I.
mindless.
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mindless.
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April 19th, 2010 at 03:11pm
Till Death Do Us Part

Love to the death,
Kisses burning skin.
Hearts covered in fractures:
Sour feelings crawl in.
Lust laced with poison,
Thoughts strewn with sin.

Anger and fear;
Longing and shame;
All different words,
All mean the same:
A tainted romance's
Alias names.

Slamming shut doors;
Never to be free.
Complete inability
To leave willingly.
Love to the death,
Literally.
Bloody Soul
Killjoy
Bloody Soul
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 11
April 21st, 2010 at 07:13pm
wow your poems are amazing!i especially love willow and till death do us part. i can't wait till you post more
the_black_parader
Thinking Happy Thoughts
the_black_parader
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 495
April 22nd, 2010 at 08:52pm
i concur with the above: willows and death do us part are pretty sweet. and a question about australia: do they really have geishas? cuz i thought geishas were asian.
freedrowninglessons
Killjoy
freedrowninglessons
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 26
April 23rd, 2010 at 09:04am
Willow and Til' Death Do Us Part = amazing. You honestly inspire me! (: When I read them I want to write more poetry! Please please please keep it up! (:
mindless.
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April 23rd, 2010 at 11:50am
the_black_parader:
i concur with the above: willows and death do us part are pretty sweet. and a question about australia: do they really have geishas? cuz i thought geishas were asian.

they are, but i once read this really amazing story about an australian woman who became the first non-japanese geisha in history.
mindless.
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April 23rd, 2010 at 11:58am
A Beginning

Shine,
Smallest star,
And I will see you!

Chirp,
Newly hatched chick,
And I will hear you!

Blow,
Gentlest wind,
And I will sense you!

Rejoice!
Great be every gift!
This Earth is born again!
mindless.
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April 23rd, 2010 at 11:58am
Shotgun Engagement

Why do you cry?
You have everything you've always wanted.
With the world caged in your teeth,
And its inhabitants -
Marionettes.
You ask for more?

Why do you cry?
I love you, he said.
More than to your liking.
Have you never sought love
In the guise of
Barrel and trigger?

This place -
Unbarred -
These people -
Unstrung -
Bullet wounds cry, but
You cry no more.
freedrowninglessons
Killjoy
freedrowninglessons
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 26
April 23rd, 2010 at 01:26pm
You could call the above poem 'Bullet Wounds' or 'Silent Tears'
these are amazing, I think that you could really go places with your poetry (:
the_black_parader
Thinking Happy Thoughts
the_black_parader
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 495
April 23rd, 2010 at 11:07pm
pete_wentz:
they are, but i once read this really amazing story about an australian woman who became the first non-japanese geisha in history.


dude.
awesome.

anyway as for the title i vote for "crying wounds" although the other two are sweet as well.

and if you make it big writing poetry i can look at your published book and say "hey, i used to read her blog!"

this is a blog right? or at least something close to it?
mindless.
Salute You in Your Grave
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April 24th, 2010 at 04:13pm
thank you for the suggestions you guys, but i'm still not sure about what its official name should be...

and i guess it's a blog. ^^

my next poem's going to be wicked epic... i'm going to write about the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse. X)
Bloody Soul
Killjoy
Bloody Soul
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 11
April 24th, 2010 at 07:27pm
Awesome! i cant wait to hear it
freedrowninglessons
Killjoy
freedrowninglessons
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 26
April 26th, 2010 at 09:24am
Okay , so A Beginning is AMAZING. do you mind if I put THAT one to music??
A Beginning

Shine,
Smallest star,
And I will see you!

Chirp,
Newly hatched chick,
And I will hear you!

Blow,
Gentlest wind,
And I will sense you!

Rejoice!
Great be every gift!
This Earth is born again!

Shotgun Engagement

Why do you cry?
You have everything you've always wanted.
With the world caged in your teeth,
And its inhabitants -
Marionettes.
You ask for more?

Why do you cry?
I love you, he said.
More than to your liking.
Have you never sought love
In the guise of
Barrel and trigger?

This place -
Unbarred -
These people -
Unstrung -
Bullet wounds cry, but
You cry no more


I would like to put those 2 to music. If you dont mind (; Tell me what you think of that, and i will get crakin on it!
the_black_parader
Thinking Happy Thoughts
the_black_parader
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 495
April 29th, 2010 at 08:42pm
yeah id love to hear those as music. and if so where do you live and do you need a drummer?
freedrowninglessons
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freedrowninglessons
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Gender: Female
Posts: 26
May 3rd, 2010 at 08:56am
We prolly live quite a ways away from each other :/ I DO need a drummer. But I live in stupid old Kansas Sad
the_black_parader
Thinking Happy Thoughts
the_black_parader
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Gender: Female
Posts: 495
May 6th, 2010 at 06:45pm
toto, i dont think were in kansas anymore.

i figured as much. i live in ohio T_T