freedrowninglessons Killjoy
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 26 |
Bleh :/ MOVE TO KANSAS!!!! I need a drummerrrr ): |
mindless. Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2915 | lol i thought this was for my poetry, not a 'searching for a drummer' thread XD |
mindless. Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2915 | May 21st, 2010 at 05:10pm Sorry, but I kinda crapped out on the Horsemen poem...
I started it, but it just didn't sound right. :/
I hope you like this one instead. =)
It doesn't seem quite finished though...
Felo de se
Stumbling down another empty hallway,
Searching for some hint of life;
A sane mind abandoned,
Left in years of silence.
Falling from a suspended position
When my dreams are cultivated by demons
Clawing at a confused face,
Depicting a portrait of violence.
With a chalice in one hand,
A Crown Vetch in the other,
I am prepared for a lonely banquet
As evil things already feast on my mind.
My heart sinks when suddenly
I am unable to move, to lift my hand.
Cold cement hits my face,
And the specters appear, malign. |
Bloody Soul Killjoy
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 11 | June 23rd, 2010 at 12:28pm i just absolutely love Felo de se. i hope you continue writing and posting your poems! |
mindless. Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2915 | June 25th, 2010 at 02:55pm A Walk Taken Too Late
A faded blue aster
In a field of death
Waited to be picked.
Its Savior may never come,
But it hopes with all the life
In its being,
That it will at least be remembered
By one.
The cold winds caress
Its trembling petals -
Death's comforting embrace
Is carried by
The coming of the night.
It waits a night longer,
Sure that someone will come...
But no one does, and
Quietly, it whispers,
"I will go."
Rest creeps silently on
The gentle bloom,
Helping shut its open arms;
Easing the sallow form to its knees,
Where it rests
Forever more,
Absorbed
In an earthen casket;
A forgetting tomb.
I once heard a tale,
That of a faded blue aster flower
That was picked by a lover.
It evaded Death,
Was loved until its last breath,
And grew more beautiful in memories.
Thus is not the fate of all asters,
For some are never loved.
Some are never saved. |
GorgeousNightmare! Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 2784 | June 25th, 2010 at 04:30pm I love "A Walk Taken Too Late." It was beautiful! (: you're an amaizng writer. |
Bloody Soul Killjoy
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 11 | August 5th, 2010 at 01:57pm Beautiful! |