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The Poem Tree

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cigsxxsugarcubes
Killjoy
cigsxxsugarcubes
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 6
February 5th, 2011 at 02:23am
Breathe

Have I lost thy self?
Am I going mad?
I've become a monster, have I not?
Surely I have,
If I am to call upon the Keres.

I fear my darker side is winning me over
Making it hard to escape.
To live freely.
To breathe.

Shall the good ever prevail?
I hope.
For I'm losing sight, sanity, and worst of all
Me.

The darkness is clouding my vision fast
So if anyone can hear me,
Please, this is my cry for help.
Is this LOVE?
Joining The Black Parade
Is this LOVE?
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 193
February 5th, 2011 at 01:38pm
Incredible <3
cigsxxsugarcubes
Killjoy
cigsxxsugarcubes
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 6
February 5th, 2011 at 04:38pm
Why thank you<3
n__n
Is this LOVE?
Joining The Black Parade
Is this LOVE?
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 193
February 5th, 2011 at 04:46pm
You are so welcome <3
You should post more if you have any Smile
I'd love to read it!
cigsxxsugarcubes
Killjoy
cigsxxsugarcubes
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 6
February 5th, 2011 at 09:24pm
My Sweet Cyanide
I need you
Like a fire needs oxygen
But you aren't oxygen
No, you're ferrocyanide gas
Filling my lungs to the brim
With that sweet, odd scent
That I can't for one moment resist.
Do you realize what it is you're doing to me?
You make my head spin,
My cheeks burn,
And my heart burst.
Why is it you can't notice these euphoric symptoms of mine?
I thought I was the blind one
Then again, you are blinded by another,
As I with you.
My sweet, sweet cyanide.

Only other poem I've been able to find on my computer so far.
It's kind of...'eh', but I wrote it in eighth grade. >__<
SuChanNoir
Jazz Hands
SuChanNoir
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 293
February 9th, 2011 at 01:19am
Dear Lord, I love it!! Both of them. ^_^ And the second one is way better than my eighth grade stuff. Wink
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Pansy Wayero
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372
February 14th, 2011 at 06:43am
Breathe- very captivating. i like the writing style you have used. My sweet cyanide- i love the way you wrote it as if you cannot live without cyanide