POETRY CHALLENGE ENTRIES
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Tilly and the Wall Bleeding on the Floor ![]() Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 1850 | ![]() ![]() ![]() Alright, since Lovesick Melody is unwell [I hope she's okay soon], I shall be taking over the contest for a while. For this week's prompt, I give you a picture; ![]() Go wild, guys! Rules: - You can't share your poems with anyone before the results are announced. - You can only enter one poem per contest and poems must be made specifically for the contest. - Anything you like can be interpreted from this, just as long as you can link it back in some way to the prompt. - PM your Poem to me (Jackie Flores) by Monday, September 8, 2008. |
XmychildishromanceX Killjoy ![]() Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 13 | okay, i new at this, so here goes my poem: Time comes to celebrate. A time to laugh and share happy memories. We hug and kiss, send roses and smiles. We tell eachother 'I love you'. I want you to promise me That no matter what happens You will be by my side. To have a shoulder to cry on when I'm sad. To have a lap to sit on when I need rest. I want you to be there for me. And no matter what troubles we go through, Remember that I love you, And that hopes are high And you are mine. |
Tilly and the Wall Bleeding on the Floor ![]() Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 1850 | And here are the entries, only three this week. Number One We Dont Need The City`s Lights The cobbled stones felt harsh and cruel, just like the raping cold winds of Winter. The bouquet of wild roses and delicate petals wilted and twirled as I gazed over them at you, can you not see how they mock me, they take delight in seeing us fall out of what we were. My backless dress clings to shivering skin, I want your warm lips on me. I glance up at you once more, my mouth refusing to part and let my words dance and pass through the wind like dust and your heartbreaking eyes catch mine your lips curve upward, ever so slightly, I force my rising smile downward I see your shoulders start to shake and i`m laughing too. "We`re so crazy" you whisper, breath tingling my ear as you wrap your jacket around me and I cling to the warmth and smell of you. I capture your kiss with mine and I press my words against yours "Lets spend one more night in Paris" Number Two Romance We dance the day away in the middle of the street, The world around us melts, and you are all I see, These roses in my hands smell like a Summer day, And the feeling of your touch never goes away. Romance, oh romance, The one thing I never thought I'd get. Romance, oh romance, It's the one thing I'll never forget. Our shadows dancing, they're the only thing that's around, We move in perfect unison, our bodies closely bound, The sun is pouring from space, through the atmosphere, But darkness could surround me, as long as you are here. Romance, oh romance, The tenderness of the emotion. Romance, oh romance, As the world moves in slow motion. Romance, oh romance, I taste the romance again. Romance, oh romance. I never want this to end. Number Three Red Roses I feel your breath on my skin As we dance as one But I know what u feel deep inside the game has just begun The evening grows near But the dance... it still goes on I look upat your face now And the smiles suddenly gone Instead its replaced by Eyes glowing red I look into those eyes of your's You surely must be dead Instantly My body cannot move Darkness surrounds me Its embrace silky smooth Next to me you you place the rose From our liquid dance Then dear vampire... U left without a glance Rules. - PM your vote to me by Wednesday 10th of September. - Do not vote more than once. - Do not tell anyone who you have voted for until after the competition or urge others to vote for a certain poem. - Don't vote for yourself. - Make sure you specify the poem you are voting for in your vote PM's. |
DemolitionLover363 Killjoy ![]() Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 33 | City Lights The south wind blows A cold chill down my back Caught in the throws Of a blinding attack The birds are all calling They've come all this way To hills rolling, planes sprawling But I long for the day I will live life downtown See the people and the lights I will walk all around And take in the sights But I know I must wait My day hasn't come yet I will not chase my fate But I really can't forget That I had a dream once Of living the dream I have to keep working And then I'll be free. |
Lovesick Melody. Bulletproof Heart ![]() Age: 83 Gender: Female Posts: 25760 | Winners for this week! ![]() ![]() Congrats! New prompt will be up asap. |
Tilly and the Wall Bleeding on the Floor ![]() Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 1850 | Here's the new prompt; ![]() Rules: - You can't share your poems with anyone before the results are announced. - You can only enter one poem per contest and poems must be made specifically for the contest. - Anything you like can be interpreted from this, just as long as you can link it back in some way to the prompt. - PM your Poem to me (Jackie Flores) by Friday, September 26, 2008. Aik hazaar (a thousand) thanks to Lovesick Melody for the banners. (: |
Tilly and the Wall Bleeding on the Floor ![]() Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 1850 | Three entries this week; Number One Realization Look at you looking at me. Look, look, let me grab your smile, hold it close, near the heart, cant you see what i`m telling you? Open your eyes [ just a bit wider ] Hey beautiful, how are you?. Dont turn away, stop, stop, peek up beneath your lashes, yes, thats really you. Do you see the confidence rising, the crest of your happiness peaking? can you feel the dawning of realization?. Uniquely versatile with your lips, dangerous with your words, cheeks curve upward in effortless grace. Small smile rising like the sun, such brightness in your glow. Hello reflection, you are beautiful. Number Two I am not pretty I am not pretty I am not pretty Here I am just kneeling Staring at the ceiling Praying to God for some healing Here I am just kneeling I am not pretty I am not pretty Here I am just sitting With an image that is splitting My flaws I am admitting Here I am just sitting I am not pretty I am not pretty Here I am just standing With a visage so demanding My looks like such a branding Here I am just standing I am not pretty I am not pretty Here I am just waking In my soul there is an aching Now my confidence is breaking Here I am just waking I am not pretty I am not pretty Here I am just seeing From the truth I am not fleeing And what I find is freeing Finally I am seeing I am not pretty I am not pretty I am just saying it aloud Rising from beneath a shroud I will not be cowed I am just saying it aloud I am not pretty I am not pretty I am beautiful. Number Three The sounds of concrete colliding with the heel of her stiletto They filled the violently still air. The already set in place quiet intoxicated the environment The few people around and about made not a peep She was left alone, trying to come up with solutions in her thoughts Though options to solving the hydra-headed solution were decimated and decayed Something had to be there She was not one to give up hope. The concrete jungle around her told her no. Yet her impossibly unstoppable and almost naïve senses got the best of her Clunk Clunk Clunk Her black leather books echoed off the stone Her long black trench opened slightly With the breeze that originated as she rounded the corner The fabric being carried away revealed some of her moon pale skin to the cold A shiver rippled down her spine Almost home And warmth if they haven’t cut the heating and electric yet Your are beautiful The words pounced upon her as if she was chasing them in the first place A glass of cold water to the face She smirked Her red lips quickly moving to one side of her face Rules. - PM your vote to me by Sunday, 28th of September. - Do not vote more than once. - Do not tell anyone who you have voted for until after the competition or urge others to vote for a certain poem. - Don't vote for yourself. - Make sure you specify the poem you are voting for in your vote PM's. |
Tilly and the Wall Bleeding on the Floor ![]() Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 1850 | By unanimous vote, here's the winner: ![]() Here's the new prompt: That's all they did, That's all they said, But instead of helping us find, They left a thousand questions behind It's a verse, interpret what you can from it, or use it in your poem...whatever (: Rules: - You can't share your poems with anyone before the results are announced. - You can only enter one poem per contest and poems must be made specifically for the contest. - Anything you like can be interpreted from this, just as long as you can link it back in some way to the prompt. - PM your Poem to me (Jackie Flores) by Friday, October 3, 2008. |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | just removing a poem i posted on this thread. |
Worldflyer Killjoy ![]() Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 2 | Through the darkness is death and pain have you witnessed them…yet? As I watch him die in my arms, suddenly I look up to the barren sky, suddenly I hear a whimper from my friend, I look down at his body, he pulls me to the ground as if I were his slave, then spirals a chant like message, “As I die please hold my hand and tell my wife the truth, don’t tell her the lie. Through the darkness is death and pain have you witnessed them…yet? “Tell her I died in poor conditions with a rat by my feet and with gun shots lighting the sky like fireworks, Tell her that my undying love for her will never fade because with my death doesn’t bring guilt on her behalf, I chose my death bed”. Through the darkness is death and pain have you witnessed them…yet? The thing he says before his sudden, He pants, “You, my young lad, remember everyday you live the closer you are to your family, DON’T GIVE UP”, he screams! He’s eyes slip behind his head and I lay my head on his wound, letting his body absorb my tears. Through the darkness is death and pain have you witnessed them…yet? By Lucie Allee |
Tilly and the Wall Bleeding on the Floor ![]() Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 1850 | Please do not post your poems here... I'm sorry for being so late. People, the poetry challenge is back in buisness. ![]() Entry 1. The 'L' Word You nestled your lips in mine, warmth traveling like delicate winds across the expansion of my skin. You havent said it, although its been months. You know it [ I can see it in your eyes ] but why cant you just say it?. The night crawled through the world, one corner at a time, I was left standing in the street, confusion turning down the corners of my would-be smile. Where are you now? Are you thinking of me? Do you even want to be with me? You held me so tight beneath the streetlamps harsh gaze, your hands caressed upward and I fell into you. I heard your breath hitch in your throat and your lips graze my ear [ and then all the world stopped ] and I looked up expectantly at you. Do you love me too? Entry 2. The inexperienced counsellors My life has been messed up for so many years My past tainted with so many tears, So to try to release myself from my pain I started seeing counsellors again. They were supposed to help me fix my mind help me leave the past behind, They forced me to open my old scars, not realising how my life would fall apart. They decided to help fix my relationship with my mom, help make all the hatred between us be gone, But instead of answering the questions that were running through my head, they just talked in riddles instead. They said we were broken, inrepairable, deranged And branded me as mentally insane They called my mom an angel, a star And said I’m pushing my mother too far. And that's all they did, That's all they said, But instead of finding the answers they were helping us find, They left a thousand questions behind Entry. 3 A tangible metaphor Delivered by confusion Raised by lack of sense. “Hello darling, give me something tonight. A price to pay, but with doubt in the way We aren’t going home.” Her teeth were digging into the flesh of her lip. Uncertainty echoed in her expression She replaced it for a single tattered fingernail Slipped it in between the pearly whites Nibbling it in frustration “Smile honey Happy looks good on you” Was that truly more than a memory? Distant thoughts, Caressed in fog, contaminated with truth Remember, don’t hold back…………… “Trust me for once. You won’t regret this” RULES: - PM your vote to me by Wednesday 12th of December - Do not vote more than once. - Do not tell anyone who you have voted for until after the competition or urge others to vote for a certain poem. - Don't vote for yourself. - Make sure you specify the poem you are voting for in your vote PM's. |
Tilly and the Wall Bleeding on the Floor ![]() Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 1850 | I haven't recieved one vote, therefore the voting is expanded till the 20th. Please vote. ): |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | i hope people start voting SOON because i want to see what the next prompt will be! grr sorry if this is classed as spam |
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