Ravi's poems
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ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | Cherokee: Thanks, Cherokee! Yeah- the poem topic is pretty wierd. I'll probably reveal its true meaning one day [Though the title should really explain who it's for, and the content kinda explains what it's about] Thanks for reading! |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | Harare [AKA- Daddy, please come home] Daddy didn't come home last night, I stayed awake all night and cried, I fear that he won't return again, I fear that he has died. The smell of burning flesh haunts the streets, The stench makes me grimace and squirm, I saw a man being burned alive, His ash lays on the ground. No-one's not gonna help us now, No-one else really cares, We've got a dictator; who's slowly killing us all, There's no answer to our prayers. There's only one person who could help, But he's been detained, too, He's been beaten and bruised like the rest of us, I fear he won't succeed. Our dictator's denied us of food and water, He's slowly pounding us into the ground, Daddy, my father, please come home, I'm begging you: Please be found. |
The Original Bob. Demolition Lover Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 16672 | Ravi, you're awesome!!!! I miss talking to you. See you later. Keep writing!!! *iz makings no sense.* |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | Bob.: THanks I miss talking to you too |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | To you it's rough sex; to me it's reminding you of all your bulls*** [Aka- I'll spank you hard; whip you harder- but I'll never let you forget] You moan and squeal, Not content with the norm, You don't want normal intercourse, You want a riotous storm. Skin on skin aint good enough, Sliding in and out won't do, You want beatings, bruises, screams and shouts, You know this is true. Pound you till your legs go numb, Always keep watching you come, To me every night for your sensation, Encourage every ounce of your elation, Feel your nails dig into my skin, This treatment does not chagrin, For it's a punishment- but you have done no wrong, A punishment that's so hard and long, And results in cries and screams, moans, My name entertwined with your emphatic groans, But you know the state I get in, Just to hurt my baby so, I've gotta dredge up all the shit, And all the hatred itself grows. You do know, That the pleasure you desire, Is not my cup of tea, But it sets you on fire. So I do it, just to put a smile on your face, Hear you scream my name, Lets pick up the pace. I've gotta talk dirty, Rub your face in the mud, Spank you and hurt you just to let, All the lovejuice flood. But it kills me inside, To hurt my girl, Even though she's happy, She's still my world. Although I love it when she calls my name, I love it when she sparks a flame, But what happened at the end of the night, Wasn't so pretty coz we both came, To a stalemate in an emotional game, You cried and cried, laid me the blame, But it's your fetish, not mine, Maybe it's neither of ours crime, You got scared when I started talking dirt, Trying to be your sexual flirt, The mindset I got in spiraled out of control, All the shit you did kicked into action and rolled, And I couldn't stop myself from calling you names, Squeezing and pounding till you came, To a conclusion that we both needed to ease, and calm our waters; hold a Bee-Dee-Ess-Emm freeze. I'm sorry, for all that I had done, I'm sorry I couldn't, Make you come, To a safe conclusion, and harder, too. |
Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | Awesome poems... I love all fo them. Some are simple yet elegant and the reader is quickly captivated. I love the song "schizophrenia"...the idea is pretty cool! And the coke one is true. lol xD |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | Thanks, Daniella! HFH have taken Schizophrenia, so It'd be interesting to see where we take the song etc. Thanks for the comments! They really mean alot to me. |
Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | yeah I did see it. Cant wait to hear it..! lol Best of luck with that. If you need help in other bands, I'd be there. xD |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | Asiah Scott: Thanks! I'm currently playing in all of them [/spam] |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | I've Only Known You For Sixty Hours, And I'll Tear At The Seams If I'm Not By Your Side [Aka: Vanilla, Vanella, Whatever Your Name Is- I Shouldn't Miss You So Much] [For Nell] Dear Vanilla, It's only been three days, But somehow I've gone around, And planned my whole life away, But the surprising thing, And the unexpected part, Was that you factored in, Not the girl that's in my heart, Yes, I am really ashamed, I shouldn't feel this way at all, But what d'you want me to do? I'm speaking to a brick wall. You don't like me back, You'd rather see me die, Or at least just move away, Quit making your life awry. Kay, baby, I don't know what the hell to do, I'm being torn between four thousand miles, And a girl that's totally new. My heads in a vice, I'm struggling to get free, This long distance bullshit, Has taken it's toll on me, But Vanilla doesn't like me, So I guess that we are safe, I'm sorry that I'm human, Sorry you got the strafe, Coz I feel like I'm single, I've got no-one to hold, No-one to talk to, No-one that is bold. But I guess I'll go on, Coz it's suddenly clear to me, That something's better than nothing, Yours Sincerely, Ravi. |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | [song] "Hangman" -v1- Call yourself a lawyer, Just a two bit friend on the hunt for smiles, Been standing on the corner, Watching you for a while -INTERLUDE- You're crawling under my skin, Go deep enough and you'll draw blood, The jury's spoken... -CHORUS- Take your problems, Go back home, Ride away from this town, Look me in the eye and tell, DON'T PLAY INNOCENT. -v2- Like a bull; gonna charge you, Just because you're flashing red, Never thought you'd be that way [that way] Never thought you'd play that game, I guess all people change, 's always gonna be the same. -GANG VOCAL- You're looking out for number one now, Looking out for number one, You're looking out for number one now, Looking out for number one. -CHORUS- Take your problems, Go back home, Ride away from this town, Look me in the eye and tell, DON'T PLAY INNOCENT. -v3- You said you lost respect, You lost full faith in my coz, I was never your pet, You can bet that I never will be. You take this to your grave, And I'll take this to mine, WALK ON the other side of the street, And we will be just fine now. -INTERLUDE- -CHORUS- Take your problems, Go back home, Ride away from this town, Look me in the eye and tell, DON'T PLAY INNOCENT. Take your problems, Go back home, Ride away from this town, Look me in the eye and tell, DON'T PLAY INNOCENT. |
The Original Bob. Demolition Lover Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 16672 | Nice. That was pretty awesome, the Hangman song. I loved it!! |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | Thanks, Sarah! I'm posting another song soon. I'm gonna need all of your help with it. All will be revealed! |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | Okay, guys. I'mma need your help with this one. I need a name for it. I couldn't get anything solid, and Kay didn't get anything either. It's quite a slow song; influenced alot by "Yule Shoot Your Eye Out". My favourite will get chosen as the title, and of course, the winner'll get credited. UNNAMED. It's summer 0-7, Your eyes pass mine in a virtual hall, I could feel a spark, But now were igniting, Two souls just left in the dark. Three cheers for suicide, Three cheers for homicide, Just give me a day when you are mine Just a night alone without your insecurities, Just a night alone without one of your cats, Just a night alone without father or ma, I'd do just anything to bring you back You've got Fifteen Stones of hell in your heart, And it's not gonna get lighter no` It's gonna push all the tears and open the fears, and it won't ever let go three cheers for the Atlantic romantic/ sycophantic, Just give me a day when you are mine Just a night alone without your insecurities, Just a night alone without one of your cats, Just a night alone without father or ma, I'd do just anything to bring you back Almost a year and we're falling apart, We're tearing at the seams right now. You blame it on yourself and secretly I do too, But being diplomatic means I've gotta take a bow This awkward silence is taking over but I can't do this alone Just a night alone without your insecurities, Just a night alone without one of your cats, Just a night alone without father or ma, I'd do just anything to bring you back INTERLUDE We're burnt and bruised, Easily amused, But we aren't giving up just yet. Or are we scared, that we can't go back; we have no safety net Just know this, then, I love you more then, You will ever know. Just a night alone without your insecurities, Just a night alone without one of your cats, Just a night alone without father or ma, I'd do just anything to bring you back |
The Original Bob. Demolition Lover Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 16672 | three cheers for the Atlantic romantic/ sycophantic, Just give me a day when you are mine My favourite verse. This one is probably my favourite song you've written. I really like it. I could hear it in my head as I read it. |
ReadyFreddie. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 25545 | His Final Poem He surveys her as she sleeps, Her beauty holds him hostage, His wishes worm their way up to his lips, He can't just stand and stare. "Will you dream of me again, my love? I do so much miss it so, It seems like everyone else is at home there, But I have nowhere to go" She writhes and she squirms, A nightmare taking hold, He observes her pretty face, Wishes she'd love him again. "Come back to me, my beautiful girl, I need you more than I've ever known, But you're too far gone, and you can't come back, Don't be the bird that's flown" He observes the scars on her beautiful wrists, And curses himself for not trying; He wanted to save her and be her man, But he's only just a boy. "You're the most beautiful girl in the universe, And you're too good for me, I just want you back, the way you were, I just want us to be happy" She's motionless as he paws her hand, He's powerless to bring her back, He just wants to hold her forever, Make sure that she's safe and warm. "You really are perfect, And you're the one that I love, But I can't do this, babe, I need help from above" He pulls out a blade, tears in his eyes, He looks at her; asleep in peaceful dreams... |
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