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Teach Me To Drown
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Teach Me To Drown
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November 21st, 2008 at 10:16pm
this is good
i know exactly what your getting at
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Gender: Female
Posts: 450
November 22nd, 2008 at 08:28am
Good... Alex is smart enough to get my poetry. Smile hehe
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
MyChemicalBlack
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November 24th, 2008 at 06:05pm
Mm, I like the repitition of rehab.
Usually that sort of thing bothers me, but you did it in a way that doesn't.
(If that made ANY sense, lol)

Nice work. Smiley
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November 26th, 2008 at 07:58pm
MyChemicalBlack:
Mm, I like the repitition of rehab.
Usually that sort of thing bothers me, but you did it in a way that doesn't.
(If that made ANY sense, lol)

Nice work. Smiley
*is thankful for anyone to continually read her poetry* gracias senorita.
Little Miss Mental
Bleeding on the Floor
Little Miss Mental
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 1883
November 26th, 2008 at 09:27pm
Rehab...that's my favorite one so far I think. Love the repeticious sound at the end of the last lines, something amazing about your poetry. I absolutely love them all!!!!
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November 27th, 2008 at 02:24pm
Smile thanks
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December 20th, 2008 at 08:58pm
You


The day life was taken away from you
All I did was pray for you
I took my life away for you
I bled, I bled away for you
On the floor I wait for you
I think of what I will say to you
But I can't find the words
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Gender: Female
Posts: 450
January 25th, 2009 at 01:06am
Having some technical difficulties, will get the next poem up soon as possible.
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January 25th, 2009 at 01:07am
The Lies You Told
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Vicious lies
Daughter cries

Vicious lies
Break family ties

Vicious lies
A part of me dies
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February 7th, 2009 at 12:29am
All That School Spirit
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A rainy campus before me
Mary Jane's whisperen in my ear now
Tellen me anything I wana hear now
A fuckin guns all ive got now

That porcelain girl
Oh that cheerleading whore
All that she's done to me
Well that won't happen anymore

Oh girl i cherished the terror
As you witnessed my face
Oh you cheerleading tramp
Even you die with such grace

One bullet left for you dear
Darling I saved it just for you
One to rip through your porcelain flesh
The bloods flowing and your through