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~ * Words From The Dark Side of Me * ~

Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 42
February 27th, 2009 at 01:15pm
Hello everyone, this is my thread of poems that I have written over the years through present day. I hope everyone likes them!! I'll start off with two poems and add some more after work tonight.

"Untitled" (I'm still trying to think of a title and I'm still kinda working on the poem as well)

I can literally feel the cracking of my heart
As you stand there, tearing it apart.
What we had was more than wonderful
But now you've gone and made it dull,
Like the blade of a rusty knife.
All this time I've been slowly falling apart,
Trying to ignore the bloodiest part.
I gave to you the only thing I knew how to give
My love and the will to continue to live.
Why did you have to go and hurt me like that for all these long years
Leaving me where I sat crying underneath my fortress of tears?
Death is pulling at my loosening seams,
Invoking even the cruelest of dreams.
I can now rest in peace,
So much for you wanting me to rest in pieces!

"Embracing Darkness"

The darkness embracing me,
As dark and deep as the sea.
The night absorbs my soul,
Joining the two halves of my whole.
Midnight hour is my living hour,
Leading me to the dark tower,
I have never had so much power.
Someone dies underneath the black skies,
As the black crow flies.
It's cry sounding death's bell,
Opening the portal to Hell.
Something evil dwells in this place,
But shadows hide his true face.
I can see these shadows from dark and light,
Showing me wrong and right.
Together we will fight,
And we will win in the full moon's light.


I stand in the background and watch him from a distance.
He's perfect, everthing I could ever want.
It hurts inside that I can't have him.
He knocks me off my feet with his every smile.
He wraps me in a firm hug but it never lasts long enough.
He is the sweetest guy I have ever known but I only know it's outside.
If only we could be something more, if only I could grace his lips with my own.
He is so close yet so far away.
I want to know his other side, I want to make him notice me.
On the outside, we're many miles apart.
On the inside, he's nestled against my beating heart.
He means more to me than anything in the world.
I long to make him know this.
It rips a hole inside of me just to see him with another girl.
It hurts so bad that he will never be mine.
I want to tell him that I love him but I'm afraid he'll laugh at me.
Little butterflies smarm inside my stomach everytime I hear him sing.
His voice is of the angels, soft in one song, agressive in another.
My need for him is stronger than anything I've ever experienced.
When I'm down he pulls me right back up to my feet again.
Without him I'd live in a world of depression.
I want him to hold me in his arms and tell me sweet things.
He is my every desire.
He is my Hero.

"For Better or Worse"

There's no use denying it
My love for you hasn't slowed down a bit
I gaze into your eyes and melt
Yours is the greatest love I have ever felt
When you held me in your arms that night
Everything that upset me was put out of sight
I want to kiss your full, sexy lips
And place my hands on your slim hips
I wanna feel your body against mine
You are so F-I-N-E fine
You mean more to me than the world will ever know
Don't think that this is all for show
Your love is like a wonderful curse
We are perfect together, for better or worse
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 42
March 8th, 2009 at 10:04pm
Just bumping this up...on a serious not, it would be nice to have some of my poetry read and critqued.
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 42
March 15th, 2009 at 08:36pm