Truly UglyAsSin

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K.K. Bleeding on the Floor Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 1787	January 6th, 2009 at 06:57am loved them espeacially the "'Dulce Et Decorum Est...'?" one :]
UglyAsSin Jazz Hands Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 283	January 11th, 2009 at 02:52pm Thankyou very much for your comment. It means a lot that you have taken the time to read and comment. ps love your avatar x
UglyAsSin Jazz Hands Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 283	January 12th, 2009 at 04:07pm Thankyou lovesmelikeyesterday for your lovely words and for taking the time to read and comment. I know i say that to almost everyone but i truly mean it. It means a lot that you like it. So last night i could not sleep for there were so many things going on in my head. I had to get something down (before I had a hope of sleep) and the following is a result. Read if you wish, comment if you wish, no problem if you don't wish to: 10. Faceless attraction How am I falling for a guy with no face no image, no features that can be placed every minute, every second of your company 'remind me how this came to be?' undeserving of your time and care yet longing for a moment, a hug we can share Then the doubts begin crawling back how could you like me when love for myself I lack Ugly and crazy. Should be left untouched I'd probably f*** up your very core I couldn't live...being unable to restore... But then I dare to imagine that we could share a spark of passion create an everlasting moment you comfort me, your aura potent Slowly I come back to realisation this can only happen in my imagination The reality? My face, my body instilling hatred Ruining the fantasy you had already created, but you will only know when it's been done. Your life, then at least, could continue on Memories would get me through of that wonderful embrace between us two. At least now the guy has a face What might it take to get this image replaced? Thankyou if you have taken the time to read this.
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 28347	January 14th, 2009 at 06:58pm wow, they're all very good. :] I loved 8.] 'Dulce Et Decorum Est...'? and 10.] Faceless attraction the most. :]
Person0001 Always Born a Crime Age: 42 Gender: Female Posts: 5099	January 16th, 2009 at 12:15pm <hugs you tightly> Thank you for your honesty
UglyAsSin Jazz Hands Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 283	May 25th, 2009 at 02:06am it speaks for itself really 11. Dont kid a kidder Who am I kidding thinking that I can write O woe is me my life such a plight It has all been said before In the very songs we adore I have nothing to say except another cliche Maybe this time its time to try something else Something that works when its put into verse instead of the same old subject matter the life I ripped to tatters Its weird how the memory plays so many tricks Which poem was the wost? Go ahead take your pick I have no doubt that when I look back This one will seem just as equally bad There was one time when I picked up the lead and I just wrote whatever came into my head smething to which even now i relate maybe that is the best I will ever create.

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