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Ballad of juliets Farewell (poem)

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myfuckingchem232
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December 28th, 2009 at 11:43am
Twirling beneath Romeo's sweet silhouette,
she arches and tumbles against the floor.
Reckless beauty of each careful step,
"the many mistakes" sang this ugly whore.
Of love that did not belong.
In a world where it couldn't exist.
Although she knew this wrong,
her flaws no man could list.
She the stopped for what she found was an object of song untold.
A sharpened fiddle laying upon the ground,
picked it up and felt it cold.
With death in her mind and song in her heart,
she played her lovers lullaby.
Violently tearing herself apart,
she had no choice but to cry.
The found her that night,
buried in spite;
and clutching onto Romeo's arm.
With her blood in his bed,
"T'was a beautiful death" they said;
killed by the one who could do her no harm.

-------------------CHRIS GREGORY------------------------------original
madniss
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December 31st, 2009 at 03:41pm
O.o truly amazing. never thought of it that way.
misa misa.
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January 1st, 2010 at 12:18am
hey
this is an interesting response to shakespeare.
very nice.