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OMFG DAN! Salute You in Your Grave Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 3302 | I actually wrote three separate poems but I thought I'd try combining them. I really don't write much poetry so please let me know what you think, and any suggestions you might have. Here it is: (sorry it's kinda long) "untitled." I owe you the world And all the words I will ever write Every profound thought on paper Worth a second of your time If it’s alright with you, that is Though I don’t think I’m all that good at this game, It’s not like someone nearly as brilliant will come along And then everything will be fine And all was forgotten You are impossible to replace Like yesterday or a breath Until time machines exist and I keep going back Two years ago, so I could remember to tell you Or maybe fourteen years ago and travel to you When you were sixteen and I was barely human, Just hours away I would ask you about everything And we would talk about hating the world Because it’s against us and everything we stand for And your heroes and demons Just like you are to me and Cobain was to you Like parents were to us and time, too. Because I took a walk and the air was finally warm But everything seemed cold It signaled an end to where I grew up And what I called home The place I’ve grown to hate, But where I fell in love With the people I’ve spent my days with The sun beat on my face And it made me want to stay Because it felt like it was tomorrow The day I leave my protector and my hero. It was the path where you once walked I passed by your old home, and it all flooded back. The neighborhood reminded me of summer, That night where we wandered aimlessly beneath the city lights. It’s been two years and we’ve heard each other speak We’ve read each other’s words But not each other’s minds You always said you didn’t have that power For me, I can always read it on your face. I hope you won’t forget I don’t think you will But I was just making sure. It made me want to flip through the pages Of our minor accomplishments And I stopped on a page And chills ran up my spine The haunting white and blue was so empty Except for a date and a phrase Written in my mangled handwriting It was in the dead center And said, 'We did it' And I knew just what we did Though it doesn't seem like much, And I dwelled on that one fact It was important to me. You stole a decent part of me But I don’t think I mind You've made a big dent In this strange little brain, after all I thought a tear or two would be enough But you’ve boiled me dry So all I can really do now Is put these hands to work And put this pen to paper While you’re on one side And I’m on the other I hope this hurts half as much As it tore me down and out As if you had any idea anyway And I hope you won’t make room For another weirdo like me On that tiny piece of heart I hopefully managed to grab And just make sure you don’t forget to write. And always remember How infinite our days were And how I always think you’re invincible Even though you’re really not And I never tell you I always forget That you never know what I’m thinking But you have to agree, This is better than a bike From one tired soul to another, Honestly. I love you. |
OMFG DAN! Salute You in Your Grave Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 3302 | Here are some others: 1. You’d be the first to call me By the name I hate the most I don’t mind It sounds different the way you say it You’re suspicious, and you're wrong. You smile when I play your favorites Well, they’re mine too. You look silly falling asleep And jerking awake, just to catch me laughing You’d laugh, too. Don’t remind me of the Summer It was my favorite phase of all I made fun of you and I was loud But we still wandered around this town Aimlessly, and it was getting late I’d rather dirty your bookcase Full of memories That unfortunately remind you Of yours truly You’d rather my camera With stupid photos Of all our friends And me With my stupid smile You say it’s not half bad When I think it is You’d rather dirty my skin With this old dust, From the Man’s old writing. I grew tired of this literature And I’m growing on you I don’t mind, I just prefer not to. -- 2. The sold soul died with the addict. Vacant but alright. The curious sadist- The unintentional image Of Manson Is still holding the match. Now we’re all just waiting For the insides to burn out Waiting for the collapse. Dare to look inside This stiff masochistic cavity. Listen to its seemingly impossible Need to just be human. Just brush it off And get out while you can. Some refuse to let it in Some bright eyes are never hit. And the light burnt out Before it could ever reach them. Caught in the dead center of Hell, There is no way out And you’ve lost your only weapon Smile, Wonder, Cry, Shock. It would rather hurt Than be boring. It would rather face the world Than nothing at all. -- 3. You fracture ceramic minds like thermal shock. You suffocate the stable And you could bring back the dead. I’m still cold but my bones wanted to watch. They are bare, And barely alive. I thought that those stars were mine. They followed me home, after all. You could imagine my disappointment afterwards. The stuttering melodies echoed In the hollow of my skull. They skipped along my nerves like children. They skipped like broken records That shattered in me. It dared to repeat the phrase I could never bring to slip past my throat. “I am not afraid.” The notes seemed to slur Into the indefinite space And then I only heard my bones. They shook like monsters But I grew bored of the sound. I barely notice it anymore. - 4. I could have left. Haunted by these pieces I’ve put together, Curiosity left me here. Unsafe in the sanctity I’ve built, I saw them watching. Their piercing razor eyes Managed to cut through the pitch black. They found me. For the fraction of the wasted, The goosebumps were cancer. Wasted time, and wasted efforts, Cold as a gurney. Windowless stares killed the thumping sound The once exploded From underneath that jacket The one I wore When I made this decision I wanted to fix this Now, no medicine can make me sane. The black suit was hidden Beneath your heavy heart, Clandestine corpse meetings Were held nowhere. Blank masked men Have given unholy accounts Of the apocalypse where they brought him back. But they couldn’t save him. He became what he feared And I couldn’t hide any longer |
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