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Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | February 19th, 2010 at 01:12pm
To you, my dear,
for my great peom, I fear,
will lead to my grisly death (that's The End.)
Although you'll make me pay,
I really must say,
Happy F****** Saint Valentines day! |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | February 21st, 2010 at 05:02pm I really should say,
I hate you, I say,
Inside my heart is burn & corrupt,
If you, my dear,
would get me through fear,
then hate you, I really would not. |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | February 21st, 2010 at 05:04pm I do fear,
what comes to the ear,
has worsened my word in your mind,
I don't want to die,
or to make you cry,
But kill me, I ask you to not.
(These are all to the same tune. I'm not very imaganitive) |
Chaotic Cancer. Killjoy
Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 5 | February 21st, 2010 at 08:34pm Mnm is this the one poem?
I really liike it as one i like the breaks in it and the tune. its really good. |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | March 1st, 2010 at 12:18pm (This is a little more serious than the last one about m'darling)
Happy & sad
Anger & threats
She tells lies & truth intwined
Intrest, hate, misery & company.
The spark, the depression,
Love, worth the damn risk?
Hate, she says.
Friend, she says,
The many different faces of the girl,
Hidden from view,
My heart, my soul,
No sleep, No food, only thought.
Endless nights, possibilities for the next day.
Desperation, consult the horoscopes....
Two months of peace....
The cycle restarts |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | March 2nd, 2010 at 05:18pm Hm, I like this style of writing.
To the point, but has a decent flow.
Nice work. |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | March 4th, 2010 at 06:08pm I have my own doubts,
I deserve a clout,
But what I would give is enough,
Punish me now,
So I cannot frown,
And enjoy my futile life, that's a mess... |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | March 7th, 2010 at 02:39pm Turn of the head,
I am almost dead,
I cannot continue this way,
To take all the blame,
or simple insane,
I'd rather than miss you so much |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | March 12th, 2010 at 05:19pm The gutter, the street,
The hater's you'll meet,
No one could really care,
If you would stay,
you can show me the way,
I would feel better after your call. |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | March 18th, 2010 at 04:54pm I've tried, but I've lied,
I've mentally died,
you won't understand how I've failed,
I would try so much more,
But you'de wipe the floor,
with my sorry excuse of a mess. |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | April 1st, 2010 at 06:48pm Who really knows
the hurt in my soul,
your smiles heals all that sh**
I couldn't care less,
Bring me to death,
It only matters to me if I'm dead. |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | April 10th, 2010 at 04:24pm A magic word
End all your pain,
Ends all my darkness with life,
Death's not the answer,
Neither is life,
Your love is mearly all I request. |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | May 18th, 2010 at 08:13pm A waste of my time
A lie, I'd admit,
The bullsh*t effort makes me sick
Now I'm empty,
My thoughts are cold
But my thoughts are mine,
Never yours to hold. |
Arcran Killjoy
Age: 27 Gender: Male Posts: 19 | May 23rd, 2010 at 09:31am I've given up
My time is sh*t
I couldn't care one tiny bit
They wern't impressed
By my thoughts undressed
The real me's something to be shedded |