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My Poem (One of my best,Please Read) I Messed up typing it b4 but i fixed it :)

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EmoArtist
Killjoy
EmoArtist
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 1
June 2nd, 2010 at 10:48pm
One world
Blind as a bad
Trapped in darkness
Forever
Carless
Falling down Through the clouds
Crashing through the air
Swirling and twirling
Into a pit of dispear

Take my hand
I'll stop you from falling
From the blood that given to a favor calling
The payment made
A savior falling
The sleepless air
Left silent

Look around
What do you see
These are all the people you've deceived
Walk around
Watch them stare
See all the glances and the glares
How do you like it
This opposite realm
Considering your the only one that sticks out
There's no speaking
No sound
Just souls lost in thoughts
As their body's lurk around

It's like a nightmare
Let loose
Seeing all the people i never really knew
Band together to change me
It's like an unspoken dream
So unreal

So I close my eyes
To try and dream
And i think of all the things that mean something to me
So i have a reason to leave
Now I'm waking up
My dream is done
The opposite day ends
And I'm free

Alone in a valley of stone
I must have fell
Against a rock
Cause my head feels soft
And I am broken
Landing here in a valley unspoken
K.K.
Bleeding on the Floor
K.K.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 1787
June 4th, 2010 at 04:08am
That's really good :}