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~♥~ La Poesia de Britt. [FAI.] ~♥~

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Deadly Kiss
Killjoy
Deadly Kiss
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 8
July 26th, 2009 at 03:02am
Wow. Every single one of your poems are so flippin' awesome!!! Seriously.
Keep up the great work! Hope to read more soon! ^^
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
July 29th, 2009 at 12:14am
Thank-you JustAnotherBeaner, Mr. Lee, and Deadly Kiss [even though I can't see your post yet. xD]. hug

I've, sadly, hadn't wrote anything in what feels like such a long time. I haven't really felt like writing much lately. But, I shall try my hardest to start writing and posting again. :]

And thank-you once again to everyone that has ever commented on my poems. I ♥ you all. :]
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347
June 5th, 2010 at 02:06am
Beautiful.

Love is blind and I thought...
The one to cast shadows would save.
Remember, I gave birth to the mind,
And still hold the hand that bares lies.

Hollow pockets pulled out and don't
Show much of what was made of me.
Just Beautiful don't!
The scares are just too much.

And the end of times shines from above!
A thousand miles start to shorten.
Oh! I lost...
Running and I hold on. Just hold on!

You remembered me.
I still hold you dear.
My soul keeper...
You're beautiful.

I haven't really wrote a poem in forever. And this poem might not make any since unless I tell what it is about. O.o

It is about a poor Mother who's child commits suicide but still lives on to her old age. Then she dies and meets her child in the afterlife. :3
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
MyChemicalBlack
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351
June 5th, 2010 at 07:25pm
You remembered me.
I still hold you dear.
My soul keeper...
You're beautiful.


My favorite part. Smiley
I can see the wait was well worth it! 'Twas excellent. Smiley
The ending made me smile, not to mention the whole poem was built up really well (if that makes sense).

Kick-ass as usual, mon amie. Mr. Green