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middaydelusion5
Killjoy
middaydelusion5
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 23
January 22nd, 2010 at 11:32pm
well, since there's nothing to comment on above......here's one i took.

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malibu.
In the Cannibal Glow
malibu.
Age: 30
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Posts: 54114
February 14th, 2010 at 04:29am
Pros: Interesting positioning of the subject. I like that he's to the side, it makes the photo a little myseterious - is he hiding from something? If so, what?
Cons: It seems a little out of focus. There isn't one main point of focus, so I find the cabinets at the back a little distracting.

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In The Murder Scene
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February 14th, 2010 at 11:16am
As for pros, this photo is well-composed - while the bottom two thirds are very open, the cluster of activity at the top third keeps it from feeling empty. Placing the strongest part of the wall's curve in the middle (ish) definitely draws the eye in. I'm also really liking the green tones, but that's probably because the grass here in Florida is NEVER that beautiful! lol.

Cons...hmm. That soda bottle (that's what it looks like anyway, to the left) is a pretty big distraction - if there had been more trash in the field, perhaps it would have worked, but being the lone bit of litter doesn't make any points.

Okaaay, I'll post one even though I hate doing these. ^^;

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fun ghoul
In a Bullet's Embrace
fun ghoul
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February 17th, 2010 at 06:28am
pros: the subject is adorable. the color and quality is fantastic and so is the lighting.
cons: i think the photo would look better if you cropped out a little of the left side (showing the woman's sleeve.)

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malibu.
In the Cannibal Glow
malibu.
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March 8th, 2010 at 10:31pm
Pros: The lighting is really nice, and I'm liking the softness of the colours. Gives the photo a really relaxed feeling. Nice framing also.
Cons: Nothing. But if I'm being picky, it looks like it's a low quality format.

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Exposure.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Exposure.
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April 30th, 2010 at 03:14pm
Pros: love the pose and the lack of detail in the background
cons: none

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yoseob.
Bleeding on the Floor
yoseob.
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 1294
May 7th, 2010 at 09:52pm
Pros: I love how the focus is on the front.
Cons: Personally, I think the contrast is a tad too dark, not much, just a little.

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In The Murder Scene
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May 9th, 2010 at 12:15am
It's a cool idea for a photo. Having said that:

While the sky is kinda pretty, I feel that is all the image has to offer and it's not enough to carry itself. There's a very great deal of noise in the building in the foreground, and it doesn't actually add any detail; in fact, it seems to be slightly out of focus.

I'm guessing that it was a camera phone or a low-end point and shoot camera? If not, learn your settings. If so, and if you're as interested in photography as you would seem by posting in here, consider a higher-end camera - like some $80 model at a local retailer. You'd be surprised at how much better it will do.

Me:

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chainsaws cascading.
In The Murder Scene
chainsaws cascading.
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June 15th, 2010 at 05:56pm
i really like the effect that the setting sun has on it.
however, being ocd, the bit of the girl that looks cut out bothers me just a bit

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loki.
Bulletproof Heart
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June 19th, 2010 at 05:08am
Pros: I like that you chose a different subject than ~normal things. I love the texture in it, along with the blue, cool color scheme.
Cons: I'd say more contrast, along with depth. The colors of the cloth are already pretty vibrant, but it's still a little flat, which could be fixed by a bit of a lighting adjustment. (:


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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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June 22nd, 2010 at 02:13pm
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pros: like the rain
cons: could use something to catch the eye a lil but more
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In The Murder Scene
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June 22nd, 2010 at 10:45pm
Your image is really sharp, which is always exciting for me, especially with the texture of that little guy. The tones are nice and soft too. However, your blacks seem to be scarce - the image seems just slightly washed out.

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colin meloy.
Bulletproof Heart
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June 23rd, 2010 at 12:35am
"This photo is currently unavailable."
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In The Murder Scene
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June 23rd, 2010 at 09:09am
fixed!
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Thinking Happy Thoughts
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June 23rd, 2010 at 11:54am
pros:i like the colors
cons: it could be a little less centered
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