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One victim's voice

Jazz Hands
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 288
October 20th, 2010 at 02:33pm
Your disbelief stings like salt upon an open wound.
While you and him rest in silence,
I am left screaming in a crowded room.
I cry out to you most of all but,
you nor anyone else could catch me from my fall.
Indeed madam something is rotten in the state.
When you settled for that bastard you sealed my fate.
I have suffered silently then and
now while he bid his time.
One day I finally spoke up and
now he'll pay for his crime.
Wither it be in prison or in Hell,
my revenge will be done.
For those things he took from me justice is not enough to quell my grief.
I fear the most I've lost from this is you, and I fear the loss of myself and you cannot be healed or undone.
Your unkind words of judgement are like cold daggers into my soul and heart
I hope against all hope my healing will start.
Sweet Iced Tea
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Sweet Iced Tea
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October 26th, 2010 at 03:29pm
Ilike it.
Generation Nothing
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October 30th, 2010 at 12:19am
Really good. (:
I love the last line. It has a strong voice to it.