MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
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Yeah, me too. I'd hate to see this place die out--lots of good experiences and creative inspirations have come from it.
Thank you for the commentary.
I'll do my best to get on within a decent time frame.
Single stanzas on the way. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | July 7th, 2012 at 01:35am Stanza #1:
"Four fingers interlocked,
But keep the pinky at bay,
For it holds dead promises,
Allowed to fade away."
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Stanza #2:
"Sad thing is,
The future doesn’t know,
That without the past,
It cannot go."
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Stanza #3:
"Peace is irrelevant,
I’m always at war,
War with myself,
And war with my core."
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Stanza(s) #4:
"In slow motion,
I can see,
All the whispers,
Aimed at me.
To be loved, to be shoved,
We just want to belong,
Until then, we’re on pavement,
Thinking, “what went wrong?”"
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**These are (with the exception of the last double stanza) a few of the single stanzas I mentioned earlier.
**Enjoy! |
geradsredskittle666 Really Not Okay
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 610 | July 7th, 2012 at 05:27am love it! I like how its so simple and honest. |
geradsredskittle666 Really Not Okay
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 610 | July 7th, 2012 at 05:27am love it! I like how its so simple and honest. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | July 7th, 2012 at 06:52pm Thank you, I'm glad you like them. ^_^ |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands
Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | July 30th, 2012 at 09:20am i love them all but stanza three really sticks out for me i can relate to it a lot |