never been loved
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Posts: 457 | June 17th, 2012 at 05:36am
NIGHTMARE
Take An Innocent Child
With A Heart Full Of Love
Then Throw In Some Pain
Give The Good Dreams A Shove
Add A Skeleton
Who Has Shed Its Skin
"Sweet Dreams My Child
Let The Nightmare Begin..." |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | August 6th, 2012 at 06:57am i like it a lot. well done |
never been loved
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Posts: 457 | August 13th, 2012 at 07:51pm blue is the corpse
that sleeps in the chair
transparent the ghost
that floats in the air
goodbye my love
says your wife in despair
because your dead
no longer with her... |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | August 14th, 2012 at 11:14am i love the fact you used personification to bring the colour blue alive and make it a real thing |
