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Jazz Hands
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 295 | March 8th, 2010 at 01:00pm
Untitled
~ * Lyric version * ~
Her voice haunts me through the night
It shakes me up in my sleep
Her voice describes a common plight
It is one that I will keep
From her lips they drew the song
They beat it from the broken one
When all were tired of playing along
She told us just what they had done
Her voice sings a broken chord
While searching for a verity
Her voice is one that they ignored
When they rejected clarity
From her lips they drew the song
They beat it from the broken one
When all were tired of playing along
She told us just what they had done
Her voice is one robbed of trust
They injected it with disgust
Her voice is one that always knew
It is what will pull me through
From her lips they drew the song
They beat it from the broken one
When all were tired of playing along
She told us just what they had done
~ * Poem Version * ~
Her voice haunts me through the night
It shakes me up in my sleep
Her voice describes a common plight
It is one that I will keep
Her voice is a beaten and broken one
It tells them we won’t play along
Her voice shows us what they have done
It helps us all to stay strong
Her voice sings a broken chord
While searching for a verity
Her voice is one that they ignored
When they rejected clarity
Her voice had been shot up with disgust
From all the things she always knew
Her voice is one they robbed of trust
But it is what will pull me through |
MyChemicalBlack
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Posts: 2351 | March 9th, 2010 at 06:52pm From her lips they drew the song
They beat it from the broken one
I love this part, not only can I imagine what's going on--but it's got emotion laced into it.
Hopefully that made sense. xD
Awesome work on all your current poems.  |
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Jazz Hands
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 295 | March 11th, 2010 at 09:09am Thank you! I've had a bit of a writer's block recently, and still kind of do, but that one came out pretty easily. I wish it could work like that for a handful more poems so I'd be caught up in poetry class! xD |
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Jazz Hands
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 295 | September 21st, 2018 at 05:07pm Hello, all.
It’s been a long time.
I’ve created a new topic. It’s been a very long time and I need a new place to start over with this.
http://www.imnotokay.net/board/topic/54977/ |
